新东方高考英语书面表达特训课件4

LOGO英语写作特训让主动成为一种习惯。1.清楚连贯地传递信息，表达思想。2.有效的运用所学的语言知识。平均分：峰值：约15分17~19分最吃亏学生群：中等左右学生书面表达是提高平均分最大的潜力股全方位、多层次词汇短语句型谋篇漂亮、地道词汇层面Adj.聪明的、脑筋好的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligent词汇层面Adj.令人惊奇的surprising→amazing→astonishing词汇层面1.越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。2.越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。人靠衣装，文靠词装词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜。短语层面电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Computersplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.3.computersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.4.后面还有很多技术层面高，精彩的表达。句型层面他昨天下午来的。1.Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.2.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.3.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.4.Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.换位思考——评卷人的视角评卷人的弱点评卷人的兴奋点失分原因：1.语言表达有错误。1）大错误2）小错误2.要点有所遗漏。3.使用掌握不准确的结构或不易掌握的结构。4.离题句太多.5.词汇量。6.书写。Badsample卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。对比鲜明写作基本要求1.字数达到要求。2.卷面整洁，字迹清楚。3.语法正确。4.标点正确。5.文章内容是否切题。6.格式正确。技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式Fivestepsforwriting(写作五步骤）1.Cross-question(审题)※Mainidea※Style※Verbtense※Person2.Seizethemajorpoints/keywords(抓要点)figureouttheoutline(提纲)3.Sentencesconnection(连句成文)Words/phrasesSentences5.Errorcorrecting(查错改错)4.Ensurethefluency(添加过渡，确保连贯）Conjunctions/conjunctiveadverbspassagepassage抄改连扩抓审书面表达书面表达六步法简单句五种基本形式简单句的功效。ThebeautyofJinanisSurprising.化腐朽为神奇Withoutrespect，lovecannotgofar.四两拨千斤②相当于中文的“接读某月某日来信，一切知悉”。a.lthankyouverymuchforyourletterofMay20th…b.YourletterofMay20thhasbeenreceivedwiththanks.c.ItgivesmegreatpleasuretoreceiveyourkindletterofMay20th.d.lnanswertoyourkindletterofMay20th,ldeeplyregretthat…e.lhavereceivedyourkindletterofMay20th.f.Wordscan’texpressmydelightonfindingyourfavorofyesterdayonmydeskthismorning.g.YourletterdatedMay20thhasbeenreceived(6)结束语(ComplimentaryClose)①结束语的一般写法如下：Yourstruly,Trulyyours,Sincerelyyours,Yourssincerely,②公函常用：Yoursfaithfully,Faithfullyyours,Yoursrespectfully,Respectfullyyours,③私人书信常用：Sincerelyyours,Yoursverysincerely,Yoursaffectionately,Yoursever,④给亲戚朋友的信常用：Love,Allmylove,You(ever)lovingson/daughter/cousin,etc.Youraffectionatenephew,Yourslovingly,Lovinglyyours,2005书面表达（满分25分）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。*表示感兴趣*说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历*希望得到回复注意：1．词数：100左右2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯DearSirorMadam,I’mastudentfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.I’mgladtolearnthatyouwantafewpart-timeEnglishreporters.I’mquiteinterestedinit.IthinkI’mfitforthejob.Asastudent,I’vereadalotandhavemuchknowledgeinmanyfields.I’mfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.Besides,I’measytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingtogetherwithothers.Aboveall,Ionceworkedasareporterformyschoolbroadcastingstation.SoI’msureIcandothejobwellifIgettheposition.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua写人记叙文（人物经历、简历）样貌特征兴趣爱好经历（注意时间的演进与时态）行为人物特征议论文（观点对比型、各抒己见型）观点对比型1.提纲式作文：按照表格或提示言之有序，老师是找点给分的。2.开放式作文：找到最本质的特征。思维训练模式：a.listing;b.reasoning;c.brainstorm.2001年高考书面表达假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。周末活动（减负前）周末活动（减负后）白天：上课、做作业白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间：11：30就寝时间：10：002001年高考书面表达DearDick,Hownicetohearfromyouagain.YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina?Inshort,thingshavebeguntoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload.Idon’tknowaboutothers,butIusedtohavetoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.NowIhavemorefreetime.Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchasreadingbooks,visitingmuseums,andtakingcomputerlessons.IntheeveningsIcanwatchnewsonTVorreadnewspapers.What’smore,Icangotobedearlier.AsfarasIknow,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.Bestwishes,LiHua2002年高考书面表达最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为40%的同学认为1.不应该收门票2.公园是公众休闲的地方3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1．应收门票，但票价不要高2．支付园林工人工资3．购新花木DearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelievedapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.Whatismore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers,andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.Yourstruly,LiHua观点对立型写作模板1.正反观点对比Thetopicabout话题isbecomingmoreandmorepopularin范围recently.Therearetwosidesofopinionaboutit.Somepeopleprefertoconsiderdoingsth.Theythinkthat理由一，what'smore,理由二，moreover,理由三。However,othersbelive观点isabetterchoiceforfreereasons.Tobeginwith,理由一，next，理由二，inaddition,理由三。Frommypointofview,theformmerissurelyawisechoice.Thereasonisthat原因。2.优缺点对比Inrecentyears,所要讨论的问题hasbeenpopular.Therearemanyadvantagesin…First,优点一，second，优点二，third，优点三。However，therearesomedisadvantages.First,缺点一，besides，缺点二，also，缺点三。Inmyopinion,itistruethatadvantagesaremorethandis