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如何写想象类作文【写作练习】某英文报社的Science栏目向中学生征文,主题为“未来家用机器人”。请你展开合理想象,用英语写一篇短文投稿。注意:词数100左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】一、审题定调首先,这是一篇说明文,因此写作时要遵从说明文的写作要求。其次,这是一篇开放式作文,要求展开合理想象描述未来的家用机器人,因此,想象既要独特、大胆,又要合情合理。二、谋篇布局针对本篇习作而言,我们可以把全文分为三部分:第一部分:引出话题(说明写作目的);第二部分:具体描述(从外观、功能及特征等方面介绍心目中的未来家用机器人);第三部分:总结全文(希望该未来家用机器人能很快成为现实)。三、组织语言就本篇习作而言,每个部分可围绕以下内容组织语言。1.第一部分:引出话题。你们有没有想过未来的家用机器人会是什么样子的吗?我是这样想。2.第二部分:具体描述。1)看起来要像真正的人类2)能够做帮我们做家务…3)能够为我们作出合理的建议/回答我们的问题/给我们相关的信息,…例如…..3.第三部分:总结全文。希望我们能够很快拥有这样的机器人普通表达高级表达Haveyoueverthoughtaboutwhatafuturehouseholdrobotmightbelike?Whatfuturehouseholdrobotsmightbelikeisdifficulttopredict.HereiswhatIthink.Ihavegreatexpectationsforthem.第一部分:引出话题。普通表达高级表达...willlookthesameashumanbeings.Youwillhavetroubletellingthemfromrealhumanbeingsbecausetheywillbesimilarinappearancetous....willbeabletodolotsofboringhouseworkforus,suchas...Withtheirhelp,youwillbefreeofallhouseholdchores,like...★Itwillactasaknowledgeableadviserforus...itwillhaveacomputerasabrain.★Therobotwillbeabletoansweralmostanyquestions...ask/comeupwith.★Equippedwithanintelligentcomputerbrain,theywillbeabletofreelycommunicatewithyou.★Sincetheyareintelligentrobotstheywillbeabletointeractwithyou.2.第二部分:具体描述。普通表达高级表达Let’shopesuchhelpfulhouseholdrobotswillbewithussoon!Admitit.Youcan’twaittohaveaccesstosuchwonderfulhouseholdrobots,canyou?3.第三部分:总结全文。【范文展示】◀普通范文▶Haveyoueverthoughtaboutwhatafuturehouseholdrobotmightbelike?HereiswhatIthink.Firstofall,itwilllookthesameashumanbeings.Secondly,itwillbeabletodolotsofboringhouseworkforus,suchascooking,washingandcleaning.Thirdly,itwillactasaknowledgeableadviserforusbecauseitwillhaveacomputerasabrain.Forexample,ifwewanttoknowwhattheweatherwillbelikenextweek,justasktherobotanditwillgiveusaquickanswer.Let'shopesuchhelpfulhouseholdrobotswillbewithussoon!◀高级范文▶Whatfuturehouseholdrobotsmightbelikeisdifficulttopredict.However,Ihavegreatexpectationsforthem.Youwillhavetroubletellingthemfromrealhumanbeingsbecausetheywillbesimilarinappearancetous.Withtheirhelp,youwillbefreeofallhouseholdchores,likecooking,washingandcleaning.Moreimportantly,equippedwithanintelligentcomputerbrain,theywillbeabletofreelycommunicatewithyou.Forexample,ifyoufeellikeknowingtheweatherconditionsnextweek,justasktherobotsandtheywillgiveyouananswerwithinseconds.Admitit.Youcan'twaittohaveaccesstosuchwonderfulhouseholdrobots,canyou?温馨提示:从这两篇范文中,我们可以看出想象类作文的写作特点,即:以实际生活为基础大胆想象,以写作主题为中心合理描写。同时,语言要生动、活泼。如高级范文的最后一段,用了简单的祈使句和反义疑问句,既和全文口吻一致,又能激发读者的想象。大家在以后的写作中应逐步掌握这种写作技巧。【实战演练】一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.Ithinkmylifewillbeverydifferentintenyears.Iwillbetwenty-eightyearsoldbythen.Iwillhavemyownfamily,probablywithalovelychild.IhopeI'llbeworkinginacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner.I'llenjoymyworkandgetalongwellwithmycolleagues.I'lldoagoodjobinwhateverIdo.Inmyfreetime,I'llcontinuetotakeregularexercise,suchasswimming,runningandvariousballgames.Onmyholidays,I'lltravelaroundtheworld.Inaword,mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolourful.
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