高三英语写作课件

如何算是一篇好文章？－覆盖了所有的要点－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇－有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）连接词巧用逗号，提升作文品质Onwriting----词汇选择与衔接词运用BethoughtfulBeingthoughtful(体谅人）simplymeansthinkingofothersbeforeyourself.Whatyousayordowillhaveaneffectonothers.Therefore,itisimportantthatyouthinkbeforeyousayordoanything.Inthisway,youcanavoidhurtingothers’feelings.Moreover,athoughtlessactorremarkcanspoil(损害)aperfectrelationship.Remembertheserules.Ifyoudon’thaveanythingnicetosay,don’tsayanything.Likewise,ifyouthinkwhatyoudowillhurtothers,don’tdoit.Afterall,whatgoesaroundcomesaround.(种什么因，得什么果）Section1:上下文的连贯性一篇好的书面表达，应该行文连贯流畅，具有“逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具“英语味”。记得使用恰当的连接词,如以下的几类。1。表增加的过渡词：andthen,inaddition,furthermore,moreover,again,another,first,second2.表时间顺序的过渡词：afterwards,earlier,later,immediately,soon,next,suddenly,finally3.表空间顺序的过渡词：near(to),far(from),infrontof,behind,beside,beyond4.表比较的过渡词：inthesameway,justlike,justas5.表对照的过渡词：but,still,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,inspiteof,eventhough6.表结果和原因：because,since,asaresult,therefore,thus,hopefully,otherwise7.表目的的过渡词：forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat8。表强调的过渡词：infact,indeed,surely,necessarily,certainly,withoutanydoubt,truly,aboveall,themostimportantofall,9.表解释说明的过渡词：forexample,inthiscase,forinstance10.表总结的过渡词：finally,atlast,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,inotherwords,inbrief,ashasbeenstatedabove,1.Wehavebeenpreparingforthepastfewyears.Webelievethe29thOlympicswillbeagreatsuccess.Wehavebeenpreparingforthepastfewyears.Hopefully,the29thOlympicswillbeagreatsuccess.2.Heisrunninghisownresearchcompanyandhehasservedasavolunteer.Heisrunninghisownresearchcompany.Inaddition,hehasservedasavolunteer.3.Theboycomesfromapoorfamily.Theboydoesverywellinhisstudies.Theboyplanstoworkhiswaythroughcollege.Eventhoughhecomesfromapoorfamily,theboydoesverywellinhisstudies;furthermore,heplanstoworkhiswaythroughcollege.4.YaoMingisasuccessfulbasketballplayerandheisacommercialstar.YaoMingisasuccessfulbasketballplayerinadditionto/apartfrombeingacommercialstar.5.Youwillsucceedinyourtraining.Youworkhardandnevergiveup.Solongasyouworkhard,youwillsucceedinyourtraining.6.LastnightIhadadream.Iwasrunningonthetrack,competingwithLiuXiang.LastnightIhadadreamthat/whereIwasrunningonthetrack,competingwithLiuXiang.7.Whenhereturnedtothemountain,hefoundthegold.Hebecamearichman.Whenhereturnedtothemountain,hefoundthegold.Asaresult,hebecamearichman.8.Apersonwithoutfriendsmightbelonelyandselfish.Onewhohasalargenumberoffriendsmustbewarm-heartedandfriendly.Apersonwithoutfriendsmightbelonelyandselfish.Onthecontrary,onewhohasalargenumberoffriendsmustbewarmheartedandfriendly.你能用我们刚才学的连接词让下面的文章更精彩吗？(taskforsection1)PassageoneLifeisfilledwithchallenges.Wearefacedwithachallenge.Weusuallyhavetwochoices.Wecantrytosolveit.Wecandecideitisn’tworththetroubleandleaveitbehind.Section2:词汇的应用1.恰当使用高级词汇1)NeilcanbeexpectedtocometoChinaaroundAugust6thfortheopeningceremonyofthe29thOlympicGames.NeilwillbeavailabletocometoChinaaroundAugust6thfortheopeningceremonyofthe29thOlympicGames.2)Thesituationisreallydifficulttounderstand.Thesituationisreallyconfusing...3)Bird’sNestliesintheBeijingOlympicPark.Bird’sNestislocatedintheBeijingOlympicPark.4)Iamsuretofindwaystosolvetheproblem.Iamsuretofindthesolutionstotheproblem.5)Weallhavethesamechance.Weallpossessthesameopportunity.6)Therearemoreopponents(对手）thaneverbefore.Thereexistmoreopponents(对手）thaneverbefore.7.OnedayIvisitedtheInternetandIopenedOICQ.(explored)visited8.Tearssometimesfalldownmyface.9.Imustgraspthetimewhichbelongstome.(cheeks)(treasure)10.Idon'tthinkyourplanwillbeuseful.(work)facegraspbeuseful11.Hesenthissontoschoolonfooteverymorning.12.Mybicyclelostairyesterdayonmywayhome.(Hewalkedhissontoschooleverymorning.)(Igotaflattireyesterdayonmywayhome.)sent13.Ididn’thearyourname.14.Ithankedhimandstoppedthephone.(Ididn’tquitecatchyourname.)(Ithankedhimandhungupthephone.)2.适当利用短语取代单词1）WeallthinkChenZhongheisagreatcoach.Weall____________ChenZhonghe.2)TheresultoftheOlympicswillbegood.TheOlympicswill_________tobeasuccessfulone.3)IamgoingtoBeijingtoattendtheopeningceremony.IamgoingtoBeijing________________attendingtheopeningceremony.thinkhighlyofturnoutforthepurposeof4).Therearefiveringsrepresentingfivepartsoftheworld.TheOlympicRings____________fiveringsrepresentingfivepartsoftheworld.5)SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.Agoodidea________tome.Agoodideasuddenly_________me.SuddenlyI__________withagoodidea.consistofoccurredstruckcameup6)Foreignathleteswillfindthewayeasilywiththehelpofvolunteers.Foreignathleteswill________________findingthewaywiththehelpofvolunteers.7)Everyoneshoulddohisorherbest.Everyoneis_________dohisorherbest.havenotroublesupposedto8)FormostforeignersanswersinChinesecannotbeunderstood.FormostforeignersanswersinChinesedon’t__________________.9)Whatyoudowillbeveryimportant.Whatyoudowill______________makeadifference.makesenseatallavailable,confusing,belocated,thinkhighlyof,turnout,forthepurposeof,consistof,occurtosb.,strikesb.,comeupwith,havenotroublein,besupposedto,makesense,solution,possessthesameoppor