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杭州新东方学校罗琼托福写作教程[e-mail]15988850987托福写作介绍综合写作形式:读+听+写内容:阐明观点相互联系性分数权重:1/2时间要求:20分钟字数要求:150-225词独立写作形式:议论文内容:对议题发表看法分数权重:1/2时间要求:30分钟字数要求:至少300词托福写作分数换算3028252220171410987654应试写作的三个层次写得出写得对写得炫应试写作难点写作本身难度大,是驾驭一门语言的最高境界,属于信息的输出,是逻辑、语法、词汇、文化等的综合统一应试写作难点大脑一片空白基本无话可说绿叶对根的情意Doyouagreeordisagreethatprogressisalwaysgood?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.应试写作难点表达漏洞百出可读性相当差InChina,becauseitstradition,theoldismostraisedbytheirchildren.InChina,becauseofitstradition,theoldaremostlysupportedbytheirchildren.应试写作难点中式英语泛滥考官哭笑不得Pollutionmakesuscannotbreathefreshair.Pollutionmakesusunabletobreathefreshair.应试写作难点口语痕迹明显好似娓娓道来Isayit’sagoodthing.NowI’lltellyouastoryaboutmyself.应试写作难点表达捉襟见肘词句鲜有亮点越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难。Moreandmorecollegegraduateswhohavejustgraduatedfromuniversityfindthatfindingagoodjobismoreandmoredifficult.越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难Agrowingnumberoffreshgraduatesfindthatobtainingadecentjobisincreasinglydifficult.越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难。Agrowingnumberoffreshgraduatesfindthatbeingemployedbyadecentemployerisincreasinglydifficult.越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难。Thedifficultyofbeingemployedbyadecentemployerisontherise,asthenumberoffreshgraduatesgrows.托福独立写作评分标准5分:文章切题,阐说充分,文章有说服力;段落组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有很强的逻辑性;段落内句与句连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活,成熟;用词确切,得体.文章中有个别语法拼写错误,但不影响内容表达.4分:文章切题,阐说基本充分,在某些细节上有缺陷.段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,逻辑性强;句间连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活;用词基本得体.文章中有少量用词不当和语法拼写错误.3分:文章切题,阐说尚可,展开不够.段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有逻辑性;句间连接基本顺畅;有部分句法错误;用词一般,有时不得体.词性区分和拼写等有若干错误.2分:文章切题,段落组织基本合理,有逻辑性,但只存在于语义层次上,语言表达上未能体现;句子框架结构基本成立,但有许多语法错误,句间联系不顺畅,往往是不善于使用逻辑连词,显得幼稚,生硬.词汇方面拼写错误多,常有用词不得体现象.1分:文章切题.阐说没有展开,只限于三言两语地回答问题;没有段落组织,很乱,长度很短,只有一段;句子排列有一定的逻辑关系,能看出各句基本框架,但结构或语法错误较多;用词不得题,拼写错误多.0分:文章各方面都有严重错误,句子不像句子.总体印象是根本没有写作能力,英语水平太低,够不上1分标准,只能打最低分.托福独立写作要求谋篇:观点突出结构合理谋段:论证充分言之有物谋句:正确多变关联谋词:准确多变托福独立写作题目分类对比选择型支持反对型自选论述型问题分析型托福独立写作的步骤审题内容？形式？构思头脑风暴Outline行文检查ThefirstdraftofanythingisSHIT.----ByHemmingway对比选择型Somepeoplethinkthattheautomobilehasimprovedmodernlife.Othersthinkthattheautomobilehascausedseriousproblems.Whatisyouropinion?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.OutlineFor方便高效convenient&efficient丰富生活enrichlifestyle推动相关产业boostrelatedindustriesAgainst耗尽石油资源depletefuelresourcesworldwide空气污染airpollution交通阻塞和事故trafficjamandaccidentsStructure结构Introduction总起段Body主体段Conclusion总结段Introduction总起段Background背景Controversy(2different/oppositeideas)争议Statement观点Transition过渡Background背景Beingacontroversialissue,thegreatpopularityofautomobilehasarousedagreatdealofattentioninsocietyduringthepastdecades.Nowadays,theissueonthegreatpopularityofautomobileishighlydebatable,andideasvaryfrompersontoperson.Controversy争议Somepeoplethinkthatitisgood,otherpeoplethinkthatitisbad.Somepeoplethinkthattheautomobilehasimprovedmodernlife.Othersthinkthattheautomobilehascausedseriousproblems.Controversy争议Somewouldclaimdailylifehasbeenupgradedduetoautomobile,whilesomeothersmaysuggestthatsevereproblemsaretheresults(whichare)broughtbyautomobile.Somewouldclaimdailylifehasbeenupgradedduetoautomobile,whiletheideathatsevereproblemsaretheresultsbroughtbyautomobileisstillheldbysomeothers.Controversy争议Think→claim/suggest/believe/advocate/maintain/argue/supposeGood→beneficial/profitable/helpful/sound/decentBad→harmful/detrimental/hazardousAdvantage→merit/virtue/benefit/profit/proDisadvantage→demerit/drawback/flaw/shortcoming/con/costStatement观点简洁明了concrete&conciseAsforme,Isidewiththeformer/latter.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ibelieveautomobileisindispensableineverydaylife.Inmyview,itismuchbettertohaveeverydaylifewithoutautomobile.Transition过渡Inthefollowingparagraphs,Iwouldpresentsomereasons.Afewexplanations/exampleswouldbepresentedasfollows.Thusessentialandpersuasiveevidenceswouldbeprovidedinthesubsequentparagraphstoverifymyperspective.Conclusion总结段Statement观点rewrite,notcopyAllinall/Toconclude/Inconclusion/Ingeneral/TosumupWhenalltheabove-mentionedfactorsaretakenintoconsideration,aconclusioncouldbedrawnthat…Conclusion总结段Frommypointofview,itisadvisabletotakeadvantageofautomobilewhileeliminateitsdrawbacks.FromwhereIstand,automobilecannotbeanessentialfactorinpursuingaperfectlife.Body主体段Tobeginwith/Firstly/FirstandforemostSecondly/Inaddition/MoreoverInthethirdplace/Furthermore/LastbutnotleastOutlineFor方便高效convenient&efficient丰富生活enrichlifestyle推动相关产业boostrelatedindustriesAgainst耗尽石油资源depletefuelresourcesworldwide空气污染airpollution交通阻塞和事故trafficjamandaccidentsForIntroductionTobeginwith,automobilemakessomeworkconvenientandefficient…Inaddition,automobileenricheslifestyle…Furthermore,automobileboostsrelatedindustries…让步段ConclusionForIntroductionTobeginwith,itisconvenientandefficienttotravelbyautomobile…Inaddition,lifestylecanbeenrichedviaautomobile…Furthermore,automobileboostsrelatedindustries…让步段Conclusion方便高效convenient&efficientTobeginwith,itisconvenientandefficienttotravelbyautomobile.Forexample,fromdowntowntosuburb,bycar,itcostsafewhours.Otherwise,bybicycleoronfoot,nearlyo