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写作原则内容简单化结构模式化（主题句-分论点-总结）语言要包装错误要回避万能理由(Omnipotence)：1、方便：convenient/convenience2、效率：efficient/efficiently/efficiency3、节省和浪费：savetime/money/space;economical,thriftwastetime/money/space;costly,lavish4：人的心理健康：independent,cooperative,competitive,considerate,confident,creative,sociable,perseverance;selfish,isolated,conservative5、人的身体健康：health,disease,strong,strength,energetic6、娱乐：colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainment,relaxtired,boring,lonely7、环境：environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty8、安全和危险：safe,danger,risk9：经验：experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety10、人际：humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely基本表达(BasicElementsofEnglishWriting)：越来越：beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof人们认为：itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat许多问题：ahostof/anumberofproblems引起人们注意：claimcall/attractgeneral/public/worldattentiontosth.意识到：thereisagrowingawareness/realizationof/that,awakensb.tothefact/danger适应新的形势/变化：adapt/adjust/accommodateoneselftonewenvironment/change接触各种思想/经历：beexposedtonewideas/experiences/problems接触社会：comeintofrequent/closecontactwiththeworld/society获得成功：achieve/accomplishsuccess提出观点/建议：advance/putforward/comeupwiththearguments/ideas/suggestions作出努力：maketremendous/persistent/sustainedefforttodosth.,takegreatpainstodo(withwork/study)影响学习/工作：interferewithstudies/work产生影响：have/exertaprofoundinfluenceonlife/personality,haveadramatic/undesirableeffecton较好地驾驭生活：beabetterpilotofone'slife剥夺机会/权力：depriveoneselfofthechance/right/opportunity取代就的方式：substitutefor/taketheplaceoftheoldway采取措施：takeeffectivesteps/measuresto控制我们的环境：take/gainincreasingcontroloverourownenvironment躲避危险/挑战：shy/runawayfromthedangers/challenge满足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodatethedemandof补偿损失：compensatefor/makeupfortheloss/damage解释某现象：accountfor/explainthephenomenon对……很好的了解：haveabetterunderstanding/appreciationof,haveanewperspectiveon.provide/gainaninsightinto把某因素考虑进去：takesth.Intoaccount(consideration),givemuchthoughtto品位人生/自由/青春：savorthelife/freedom/youth培养对……的信心：develop/fosterone'sinterest/confidencein经历变化/困难/艰险：undergo/experiencegreatchanges/hardships/experience表现出自信心等：projectone'sconfidence/feeling/image生活充满不公正的地方：lifeisfullofminorirritation/injustice追求学习/职业：pursueone'sacademicinterest/professionalcareer学习知识/技术：pursue/acquireknowledge/technology/skill被看作学习的……榜样：beheldupasagoodexample交流经验/知识：shareexperience/ideas/problems/knowledge发挥/起到重要作用：playan(important/active/great)role/part逃学/缺课：skipschool/aclass/ameeting/alecture知识/经验丰富：richinknowledge/experience确立/追求目标：set/pursueagoal/higherstandard到达目标：achieve/accomplish/stainthegoal/aim/objective克服困难：overcomeobstacles/difficulty面临危险/困难：beconfronted/facedwith/inthefaceofdanger/difficulty阻碍了成功：standinthewayofsuccess,beanobstacle/barriertosuccess/growth阻碍了发展：hamper/impede/stuntthedevelopmentof持传统的看法：holdconventionalwisdom发表看法：voice/expressone'sopinion持相反/合理的观点：taketheopposite/freshview揭穿某种一贯的说法：shatterthemythof求得帮助：enlistone'ssupport/help缩小差别：bridge/narrow/fillthegap/gulf(betweencityandcountry)把成功/错误归咎于：attribute/ownthesuccess/failureto对……重要：beindispensable/important/vitalto施加压力：put/exertaacademicpressureon重视：assign/attachmuchimportance/significanceto强调：place/putmuchemphasis/stress/valueon把注意力集中在：focus/concentrateone'sattention/efforts/thoughtsupon提供机会/信息：provide/offer/furnishanopportunity/informationforsb.抓住机会：grab/seize/taketheopportunity得到机会：enjoy/gainaccesstoaopportunity/information有可能：thereis(little/much)possibility/likelihoodthat,chances/theoddsarethat展开竞争：competeagainst/withsb.fortheprize/position/control/themasteryof开展运动：conduct(carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage)a(vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising)campaign(for/against)对我很有/没有什么意义：makemuch/littlesensetome带来无穷的幸福/满足：beasourceofhappinesssatisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint献身于：devote/dedicate/commitoneselftoacause/career大不（没什么）两样：makemuch(little/no)difference真正重要的是：whatreallymatters/accountsis…改变生活旅程：change/alterthecourseoflife建立在大量的学习/实践上：builtontremendousamountofstudy/practice进行调查/执行任务：conduct/carryoutanstudy/task/experiment辞去工作/学习：leave/quitone'sjob/work/school参加考试/竞赛等：enter(for)theexamination/contest,race参加活动/讨论：takepart/participate/beengagedinsports/activities/discussion影响思想/态度/事件的形成：shapeone'sthinking/attitude进入大学/社会/家庭/劳力市场/职业：enteraschool/college/society/theworkforce/professionals实现自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieveone'sdream(hope/wish/desire)减轻压力/紧张：reduce/alleviate/relievethestress/pressure/tension提高社会地位：enhance/improve/upgradesocialstatus/position/standingrisetothepositionofleadership提高技术/能力：sharpen(increase/improve/enhance/boost)one'sskill/ability加快/促进发展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boostthedevelopmentof随着生活节奏的加快：withthequickeningpace/rhythm/tempoofmodernlife/society开阔眼界/兴趣：broadenone'sinterest/outlook,expand(broaden/enlarge)one'smentalhorizons有助于了解/发展/宣传/解决：contributemuch/little/greatly/toabetterunderstandingof/thepopularityof/thegrowthof/thesolutionof有助于解决问题：goalongwayto(towards)solvingtheproblem迷恋名利/分数：beobsessed/preoccupiedwithgrades/fame/fortune把时间花/浪费在：spend/wastetimedoingsth.,putinhoursdoingsth.利