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IELTSWRITINGLessonFour:段落连接关系+如何写论据+论据综合实例IELTSWRITING中间段落由关联词+分论点+分论点的论证构成分论点和分论点的论证之间可能有关联词。IELTSWRITING1顺接(一边倒的内部)议论类:并列Foronething…Foranother…Ononehand…Ontheotherhand…递进:MoreoverBesidesFurthermoreMoreimportantlyInadditiontoAdditionally原因建议类:Themostimportantreason(factor)AnequallyimportantreasonAnadditionalreason…IELTSWRITING2.逆接(两边倒)1.WhilethereisgreatdealofenthusiasmnowadaysovertheadvantagesoftheInternet,itsdrawbacksshouldnotbeneglected.2.Whileitisundeniablethatstudyingabroadisbeneficial,itinevitablycarriessomeintrinsicdefects.IELTSWRITINGIELTSWRITING3.Proponentsofsuchachangehold/maintain/arguethatOpponentsofsuchapractice…4.Anargumentusedbyopponentsof…is/anargumentadvancedonbehalfof…is5.Forthepeoplewholendtheirsupportto…forthepeoplewhowishtoseethelegalprohibitionof…转折与让步转折:HoweverNeverthelessNonethelessInspiteof让步:AdmittedlyIELTSWRITINGIELTSWRITING1.扩展主题句(基本句型)2.假设论证(状语从句)3.延长因果链(状语从句)4.举例论证(单个例子,例子排比)5.对比论证(具体情况,时间对比)6.驳论论证方法:同一段可以使用多个论证手段但是:不是说每一段都得使用到这几种,将论证方法分散到你的论据种。不要成了填空式作文。1.扩展主题句:A:同义替换1.inotherwords换言之2.thatistosay也就是说3.tobemoreprecise说的具体一些4.by…Imean我的意思是5.thismeans…这意味着6.namely1.扩展主题句:B:主题句中的名词讲清楚---抽象名词具体化Thecostoflivinghasbeensteadilyrisinginthepastdecades.Foodprices,clothingcosts,housingexpenses,andtuitionfeesannuallyincreasedby5.59%overtheperiodof1995to2008.Initially,oneissuemakesmesupportthisisthat(1topicstentence)thedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasalwaysaccomapaniedtheprogressofsociety.(1details).Theinventionofthesteamengineledtotheindustrialrevolutionandbroughtaboutaneweraofthriftofworldeconomy.Theemploymentofelectricityhasmultipliedtheproductivityandreproducedthelimitedenergyonearth.Theinnovationofcomputertechnologyresultedintheinformaitonageandconnectedthedistantcountriesasasinglemarket.(3details).060318:Somepeoplethinkthatteachersshouldberesponsibleforteachingstudentshowtojudgerightandwrongandhowtobehavewell.Somesaythatteachersshouldonlyteachstudentsaboutacademicsubjects.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.1.Foronething,offeringacademicknowledgecancontributetostudents’achievement.2.Foranother,atthecommunitylevel,educationinstitutions,obviously,shouldshouldertheresponsbilitytocultivatequalifiedcitizens.TS:Foronething,offeringacademicknowledgecancontributetostudents’achievement.使用拓展主题句方法展开:Thatistosay,inprimaryschool,childrenshouldbeinstilledtheabilityofspellchinesecharactersandbasicmathmaticalknowledgewhichensurethemmasteringthecommensenseindailylifeandofferingthefirststepoffurthereducation.2.假设说明思路:条件状语从句目的状语从句IELTSWRITING3.延长因果链Themostimmediatefactorthathasgivenrosetothisphenomenonistheextensiveuseoffarmingmachinery.Suchasseeding,harvestingandgrain-dyingmachines,intheprocessofthemodernizationofagriculturalproduction,whichhas,inturnfreedmorefarmersformthelandtoseekbetteropportunitiesincities.Withmoreimmigrantworkersswarmingintothem,manycitieshavebeenforcedtoexpandintotheneighboringcountryside,astoaccommodatetheswellingpopulation.TS:Foronething,offeringacademicknowledgecancontributetostudents’achievement.使用拓展主题句方法展开:Inprimaryschool,childrenshouldbeinstilledtheabilityofspellingchineselettersandbasicmathmaticalknowledgewhichensurethemmasteringthecommensenseindailylife.Whenstudentshaveagoodcommandofacademicsubjects,suchas,…theycanobationtheprioritytofurthereducation.Iftheyfailtomasterthoseknowledge,itisdifficulttoseekabrihtfutur.IELTSWRITING4.举例论证1)分论点体现在具体的人、事物和场合上(注意内部逻辑)Ratherthanlimitingman’simagination,thegeneralapplicationofmoderntechnologiesactuallyenablesmantobemoreandmorecreative.Forinstance,DreamWorks,thefamousAmericanfilmcompany,hasbeendesigningandproducingcartonsusingcomputertechnology.(3Dtechnology)IELTSWRITINGForexample,Michelangelowouldnothavebecomedistinguishedpainterifhehadspenthisdaysdoodling.AnotherillustrationisthatMozartwouldnothavegrownuptobeaaccompllishedmusicianattheageof8ifhehadstayedinfrontoftelevision.LikeMarieCurieandHelenKeller,theyrespondedtothechallengesoflivesactivilybydisplinedtrainings,andthentheygainedanewfreedomoftheirlives.(3examples).举例子1.Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationofthisideathanthefactthatmoreandmoreyoungpeoplearefindingiteasiertogetjobs.2.AgoodcaseinpointisWuhan,whichhasapedestrianshoppingstreet.3.Takemyfatherasanexample.4.toillustrate,asanillustrationTS:Itistheessentialresponsbilityforteacherstoconveyacadimicsubjectstolearners.使用拓展主题句方法展开:Inprimaryschool,childrenshouldbeinstilledtheabilityofspellingchineselettersandbasicmathmaticalknowledgewhichensurethemmasteringthecommensenseindailylife.Whenstudentshaveagoodcommandofacademicsubjects,suchas,…theycanobationtheprioritytofurthereducation.Iftheyfailtomasterthoseknowledge,itisdifficulttoseekabrihtfutur.Forinstance,ifastudentfailtoperformwellinpassingmath,English,physics,andliterature,heorshewillbedoomedtogainafailureinenteringintounversitywhichcanofferadiploma,thus,studentswillbehandicappedbylackofrequiredacadimicknowledge.5、对比论证ComparisonandcontrastA:具体情况反对对比B:过去和现在的对比Shouldyoungadultswantindependencefromtheirparentsassoonaspossible?TS:Atthecomtemparysociety,moralguidanceshouldbeofferedbypa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