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雅思范文:留学利弊Nowadayssendingchildrentoboardingschoolisbecomingincreasinglypopular.Whatisthereason?Doyouthinkitisapositivedevelopment?典型的混合类题目,我处理成了五段式,body1先回答引发的原因(report),body2body3一段说positive,一段说negative(argumentation)开头段处理成考官式的开头。Body3在说boardingschool的坏处时,因为时间关系,写的非常简短,在一定程度上会影响我在TR项的得分。结尾处有点仓促。范文一:Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,parentsarebecomingratherbusywiththeirwork,whichmeanslimitedtimecannotbesharedmuchbytheirchildren.Asaresult,sendingyoungsterstoboardingschoolisarelativelygoodwaytomakeabalancebetweenworkandfamily.Thereasonforthisnewtrendmayinvolvethestiffcompetitionandthegreatpressureinmostbigcitiesofmycountry,whichmeansparentsareforcedtopaymoreattentiontotheirwork,inordertosurvive,ratherthantheirfamilylife,leadingtoalackofparenting.Consequently,theboardingschoolmakesiteasierfortheseurbanitestocopewiththeirjobsefficiently.Bycontrast,withoutsendingchildrentotheboardingschool,theefficiencyofworktendtobeaffected.Consideringthemeritsoftheboardingschool,itisapositivedevelopmenttoacertainextent.Tostartwith,youngstudentslivingintheschoolmightbecultivatedmuchbetter.Toillustrate,thedisciplineregulatedbytheschoolingisverystrict,comparedwithlivingathome.Moreover,stayingalonewithouttheattendancefromfamiliesmakesitpossibletodeveloptheadaptabilityofyouths.Obviously,theyareforcedtobecomeaccustomedtotheschoollivesandhavetolearnthebasiclivingskills,likewashingclothes.However,livingapartfromfamiliesmayhaveanegativeinfluenceonthefamilyrelationship,becausechildrenaresegregatedfromtheirparents.Indeed,parentsdon’thavemuchchancetocommunicatewiththeirchildren,resultingintheincreasinglyenlargedgenerationgap.Tosumup,Ibelievethatsendingstudentstoboardingschoolisapositiveprogresswhichhasbeenmadeasagoodmeasuretoeasethepressureofparents.However,italsocreatesthedangerofpoorfamilyrelationship.
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