2012高考英语全国卷II作文批改整理

假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：1.时间：周五晚8点至9点2.地点：学生俱乐部3.内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等4.要求：备小礼物注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。HiSusan,We’rethrowingasurprisepartyforXiaoMing’sbirthday.___________________________.YoursLiHua书写合格：李晓媛张婵赵丹彤杨丽莎王晓雨即将合格：宫勋陈莹王珊珊邢潇文李雪囡赵昕昱曲俊宇孙洁周健徐涵1.Wouldyouliketoattend/takepartintheparty,whereyouwilldefinitelyhaveagoodtime.2.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusifitisconvenienttoyou.ifyouarefree/available.•Wewanttogivehimasurprise,sopleasekeepquietaboutit.Togivehimabigsurprise,wehadbetterkeepitasecret/tellhimnothingbeforetheparty.ThebirthdaypartywillbeheldintheStudent/Students’Clubfrom8to9thisFridayevening.onFridayeveningStartingat8:00p.m.onFriday,thepartywillcontinueuntil9:00p.m.intheStudent/Students’Club.ThepartywillbeheldintheStudents’ClubonFridaynight,whichwillstartat8:00p.m.andlastaboutanhour.Wehavedesignedcarefullyfortheparty.Whenhecomes,we’lllightthecandlesandsing“HappyBirthday”togetherfor/tohim,whichI’msurewillastonish/surprisehim.Afterthat,aspecially--madebirthdaycakewillbecutandwe’llshareit.Thenavarietyofinterestinggameswillbeplayed,creatingawonderfulatmosphere.Aftersharingthedeliciouscake,wewillplaysomeinterestinggames,whichwillcertainly/surelyleaveeveryoneofusahappyandunforgettablememory.Bytheway,weeachwillpreparealittlegift.Ifyoubringonealongwithyou,Xiaomingwillbeextremelyhappy.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming//seeingyouattheparty.YoursLiHua•Hi,Susan,We‘rethrowingasurprisepartyforXiaoming’sbirthday．We‘dliketoinviteyoutotheparty．Wewanttogivehimasurprise,sopleasekeepquietaboutit．We’llgatherattheStudents‘Clubat8p.mthisFriday,aftertheeveningclasses．Andit’sgoingtolastaboutanhour．Weeachwillpreparealittlepresent．Whenhecomes,we‘lllightthecandlesandsing“HappyBirthday”togetherforhim．Thenthecakewillbecutandwe’llsingsongsandplaygames．It‘llbenicetoseehowexcitedhewillbe．I’msureyou‘llhaveagoodtimeattheparty,too.Yours,LiHua