实用英语写作(practical english writing)8

•CommonmistakesinEnglishwriting:•Teenagersareseekingmutualrespect,theyusuallydoitinvain.•Teenagersareseekingmutualrespect,buttheyusuallydoitinvain.•Alotofstudentswastewater,Idon’tlikeit.•Alotofstudentswastewater,whichIdon’tlike.•Wastingnaturalresources,therewillbeashortageinthefuture.•Wastingnaturalresources,wewillfaceashortageinthefuture.•Ifwewastenaturalresources,therewillbeashortageinthefuture.•TospeakEnglishfluently,aconstantpracticeisimportant.•TospeakEnglishfluently,weneedtopracticeconstantly.•Returninghome,thesoundofmusicstillechoedinourears.•Whenwereturnedhome,thesoundofmusicwasstillechoinginourears.•Beingafineday,we’dbettergooutandbreathefreshair.•Itbeingafineday,we’dbettergooutandbreathefreshair.•Because/Asitisafineday,we’dbettergooutandbreathefreshair.•Youshouldbaseyourjudgmentonwhatyouseeratherthanyouhear.•Youshouldbaseyourjudgmentonwhatyouseeratherthanwhatyouhear.•Knowinghowtostudyandhowtobudgettimearebothofgreatimportanceforcollegestudents.•Knowinghowtostudyandlearninghowtobudgettimearebothofgreatimportanceforcollegestudents.••Idon’tknowwhetherIshouldcallhimorIshouldseehiminperson.•Idon’tknowwhetherIshouldcallhimorwhetherIshouldseehiminperson.•Idon’tknowwhetherIshouldcallhimorseehiminperson.•Studentsarerequiredtoreturnthebooksasquicklyaspossible.•Studentsarerequiredtoreturnthebooksassoonaspossible.•Bymakingfriendswhoaredifferentfromourselves,wecanmakeupfordefects.•Bymakingfriendswhoaredifferentfromourselves,wecanmakeupforourshortcomings.••CommonmistakesinBusinessEnglishwriting:•1.Avoidrepeatedexpression•truefact•fact•circulatearound•circulate•transportacross•transport•unitetogether•unite•repeatagain•repeat•newinnovation•innovation•plainandunadorned•plain•industriousandhard-working•hard-working•Wehopethatyouwillreapplywithourcompanyagainnextyear.•Wehopethatyouwillapplywithourcompanyagainnextyear.•Inaddition,wearealsoincludingacurrentpricelist.•Inaddition,weareincludingacurrentpricelist.•Theauditorsusuallyarriveunexpectedly,butwe'llbepreparednomatterwhentheauditorsarrive.•Theauditorsusuallyarriveunexpectedly,butwe'llbepreparednomatterwhentheyarrive.•2.Avoidunnecessaryexpression•upabovethebookcase•abovethebookcase•inthecolorofblue•inblue•anunneededluxury•aluxury•forewarninadvance•warn•intheintroductionatthebeginningofthearticle•intheintroductionofthearticle•3.Avoidmeaninglessexpression•Hemadethestatementthatheagreedwiththeconceptthatinflationcouldbesubjecttocontrol.•Heagreedthatinflationcouldbecontrolled.•Themoreyoubuy,theresultisthatasfarasmoneyisconcernedthemoreyouspend.•Themoreyoubuy,themoreyouspend.•TherearethreereasonsthatappearwithcertaintytoexplainoraccountforherdecisiontomovetoSanFrancisco.•ShedecidedtomovetoSanFranciscoforthreereasons.•Asamatteroffact,Iactuallymadeareportinwritingandfileditinthemorningbeforenoon.•Ifiledawrittenreportbeforenoon.•Intheeventthatyoucanattendthemeeting,planinadvancetooffersomeconcretesuggestionsonhowtoreducethecostandexpenseofovertimeintheOfficeServicesDepartment.•Ifyoucanattendthemeeting,plantooffersuggestionsonhowtoreduceovertimeexpenseintheOfficeServicesDepartment.•4.Simplifythesentencestructure•Thereportthatdiscussedthefiscalcrisiswasreadbybusinessmen,whoshowedgreatinterest.•Thereportonthefiscalcrisiswasreadwithinterestbybusinessmen.•Theemployeewithambitionisinallprobabilitylikelytogetresultsthataregood.•Theambitiousemployeeislikelytogetgoodresults.•ThememothatwaswrittenbyMarygotlost.•ThememobyMarygotlost.•Thisamount,whichisconsideredtobeinsignificant,shouldbewrittenoffasabaddebt.•Thisinsignificantamountshouldbewrittenoffasabaddebt.•Lessthanhalfthemerchandisethatwasdamagedcouldbesold.•Lessthanhalfthedamagedmerchandisewassalable.•Thisisabookwhichyouwillreadwithenjoyment.•Youwillenjoyreadingthisbook.•Abusinessthatislocalisonethatdependsuponcustomerswhoaresteady.•Alocalbusinessdependsuponsteadycustomers.practice•1)Itisinterestingtonotethatinaccordancewiththesuggestionsmadeatthemostrecentsalesmeeting,salesseemtohaveincreased.Thishasoccurredsincetheadoptionoftheplansuggestedtheretotrytoconcentrateonmarketslocatedinlargecities.•2)ThefactsarethatinSeptemberweonlysold150electrictype-writers,whileunderthenewplan,250machinesweresoldinOctober,andreportsarethat400machineshavebeensoldalreadyinNovember.•3)Thesefiguresthatwehavequotedabovedemonstratethatthesalesmeetingwasinstrumentalinproducingresults.•4)Althoughnewtothecompany,theimaginationshownbyMaryJacksoninthepreparationcdthebrochureweusedforsaleswasunusual.•5)Mr.Brownmadethestatementthatwewouldholdameetingintheearlypartofnextmonthtojudgethevalueofthecampaign.•6)Youmadeaninquiryinyourletterregardingthecostofthenewmachine;letmeadviseyouthatitisnotimmoderate.Accordingtoourpricelist,itwillcost$650.•7)Themachineiswellworththatcostbecauseithascertaincharacteristicsthatareattractive.Productivitycanbeincreased,forexample,andthemachinehasversatilitythatisgreater.Besides,themachineiseasiertooperate.•8)Typists,moreover,likethemechanicalaspectsofthemachine.Theylikethedirectsetmarginsatkeyboardlevel.Theimpressionequalizer,whic