年中考英语作文复习指导--中

“亮”出你的作文表格类作文的构建——1公布分析发财Whichisbetter?1周末我们会有很多作业要做.AWehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend.BWehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.2在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象.AOfallmyteachers,IstillrememberMrMoore.BOfallmyteachers,MrMooregavemethedeepestimpression.2公布分析发财3英语培训班结束后回到家，他的妈妈感到精疲力尽。A.HismothercamebackhomeaftertheEnglishtrainingclass,feelingverytired.B.HiswifecamebackhomeaftertheEnglishtrainingclass,feelingveryexhausted.4.突然我想到了一个主意。A.Agoodideaoccurredtome.B.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.3公布分析发财高分作文技巧方法一:善用高级词汇4公布分析发财1Wecanachieveagoodgradebychangingthewaywestudy.(only倒装)2Howshouldweprotecteyesight?Itstillremainsaquestionamongus.(主语从句)Onlybychangingthewaywestudycanweachieveagoodgrade.Howtoprotectoureyesightstillremainsaquestionamongus.3.Myschoollifeisverycolorful.(感叹句)Howcolorfulmyschoollifeis!5公布分析发财4.BecauseIfelttired,Iwenttobedearly.(分词短语)Feelingtired,Iwenttobedearly.5.Agirlwasinjuredintheaccident.Sheisnowinhospital.(定语从句)Thegirlwhowasinjuredintheaccidentisnowinhospital.6.Shehelpedmealotwithmymathswhenweweretogether.(强调句)Itisshewhohelpedmealotwithmymathswhenweweretogether.6公布分析发财高分作文技巧方法二:使用多种句子结构7公布分析发财技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式8公布分析发财9公布分析发财1.利用模板总起:.Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions..Opinionsaredivided..Peoplehavetakendifferentattitudestowards….Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem..Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.表达观点一:Someofusthink/holdtheview/areinfavoroftheideathat…Thereasonisthat….Besides,…(Someareagainsttheviewthat….)表达观点二:(However/Ontheotherhand),othershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthat…What’smore,…However,eachcoinhastwosides.本人观点：AsfarasIamconcerned,…(Inmyopinion,…;It’smyopinionthat…)Foronereason,…Foranotherreason…Inaword,…Onlythrough…canwehaveabrightfuture.——起（引出主题）——转承（陈述观点）——结（总结观点）10公布分析发财方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明例一：这样更方便照顾父母。拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。原因astheyaregettingolderandolder.Owingto/because例二：因作业过多，孩子们晚上睡觉很晚。拓展：这导致孩子们在白天的课堂上昏昏欲睡。后果whichmadethemsleepyinclassinthedaytime.ItwillbemuchmoreconvenienttolookafteryourparentsThereweretoomuchhomeworkthatkidsstayeduplateatnight,11公布分析发财方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明条件目的例三：安全出口（exit）标志不明，存在安全隐患(potentialhazard）。拓展：万一遇到危险，观众难以逃脱。Incaseofdanger,itisdifficultfortheaudiencetoescape.例四：对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查Wedidasurveyabouthowourmiddleschoolstudentscommunicatewitheachotherduringtheholiday拓展：为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式Inordertolearnabouthowourmiddleschoolstudentscommunicatewitheachotherduringtheholiday,wedidasurveywiththehelpofmyclassmates.Theexitisnotclear,sotherewillbepotentialhazard.2、附加成分作解释说明12公布分析发财方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明(1)表达不同原因的概括语Thereareseveralreasonsforthis.Thereasonsareasfollows.Thereasonfor…isthat…Thereasonwhy…isthat…(2)表示无需说明的事实的概括语：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…It’sneedlesstosaythat…Needlesstosay,…It’sobviousthat…2、附加成分作解释说明13公布分析发财3.加谚语(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise…Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.3.添加谚语14公布分析发财加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习Weshouldconcentrateourmindonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateourmindonourstudies...15公布分析发财Enjoysomeproverbs:1.Striketheironwhileitishot.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.3.Practicemakesperfect.4.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.5.DoastheRomansdo.7.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.8.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.9.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.10.AllroadsleadtoRome.趁热打铁。三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。覆水难收。一天一个苹果，医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。6.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.16公布分析发财青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproducts,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.4.举例说明17公布分析发财在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活（举例说明）Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchaswashingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrash,ect.18公布分析发财保护环境Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.HereI’dliketoremindmyfriendtotaketheleadinprotectingtheenvironment.Witheveryonedoinghisbit,wecanchangethepresentsituation.Don’thesitate.Itwillbegreatfun!Don’twait.Joinusnow!Sinceithassomanybenefits,whatareyouwaitingfor?Starttojoinusnow!5.结尾提出倡议或号召参加俱乐部或活动19公布分析发财构建表格类书面表达的方法：2.附加成分作解释说明3.加谚语(Proverb)4.举例说明5.结尾提出倡议或号召1.利用模板20公布分析发财现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重，很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章。参考词汇：肥胖：obesity垃圾食品：junkfood要求：1.字数100左右.。2.对所有要点要适当发挥，不要简单翻译。3.开头已给出，不计入总数Recently,thephenomenonofteenobesityhasmadealotofparentsconcerned.______________________________________________原因1.缺少运动2.饮食结构不合理建议1.多参加体育锻炼2.多吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品3.…写作训练21公布分析发财要点分析如何起、转、承、结Onmypart,…1.利用模板Nowadays,moreandmoreteenagersaregettingfatter,ourparentsareingreatconcern.Whyaresomanykidsgettingfatterandfatter?Someare…,othersare…22公布分析发财theyaregettinglessexercisethanbefore.1.缺少运动BecauseofthepopularityofTVandcomputers,andbecausestudentshavesomuchhomeworktodo,23公布分析发财Becausepeople’squalityoflifehasgottenbetterandbetter,familiescanaffordtobuymanyfoods,2.饮食结构