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词句子和亮点句式PartI好词增光添彩----准确性和适用性PartI词一.增强语气的词1most和morethanEg.2000年6月IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?IammosthappytoattendsuchatestoforalEnglishability.翻译练习:当我们谈到大学生是否勤奋,我们惊奇地发现现在的情况是那么的复杂。Whenwetalkaboutwhethercollegestudentsarediligentornot,wewillbemostsurprisingtofindthepresentsituationissocomplicated.whenitcomestothediligence,morethan也可以放在形容词前面,达到非常强烈的效果。Eg.98年1月MyviewonFakecommoditiesAftercarefulconsideration,Iammorethanangry/exasperated(往往用在总结段)在问题解决类中,强调解决办法的有效。例如:翻译:在这种条件下,对这个问题的办法看上去已经非常清楚明确了。inthissituation/case,underthesecircumstancesOnthisoccasion,thesolutionstothisproblemseemmorethanclear.2.undoubtedly,unquestionably,undeniably和beyonddoubt,outofquestionEg.MyViewoncollegeStudents’TakingParttimeJobs第一段的第二句叙述了对立的两个观点:Somepeoplearguethatitisunquestionablybeneficialtothestudentsinthatitcanenlargetheirhorizonandenrichtheirexperience,whileothersfirmlyholdthatpart-timeJobsofallkindsareharmfulsoastohinderthestudents‘normalcollegestudybeyonddoubt和outofquestion不能放在句子开头。如HowtoGetaJobafterGraduation一文的末句为:AslongasIamsureofmakingsufficientpreparationsanddistinguishingmyselfduringinterviews,itisoutofquestionformetogettheidealjobwhichIhavebeendreaming3.all.any,no,never和every加强语气的效果。every可以用在person前面,也可用在makeeveryeffort或seizeeverychance问题解决(翻译)政府应该尽全力解决(污染/腐败)问题。Governmentshouldmakeeveryefforttosolvetheproblemof(pollution/corruption)虚拟语气?2.generally我们使用generally也能显得自己的说法不那么绝对,如:Inmymind,however,Idonotagreewithittosomeextent,generallyforthreereasons常用于句首一般来说,generallyspeakingPartII句子句子:完整思想最小单位;最大的语法结构=》句型1.由while引导的状语从句作用:它能凸显两种观点的对比,又使句子显得非常精练。用法:⑴while一般用在逗号后Somepeoplethinkthat…,whileothersarguethat…例如:Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewsonopportunity.Somepeoplethinkthattherearefewopportunitiesintheworld,whileothersarguethateverybodywillhavesomekindofopportunityalonghisliferoute.Think,believe,argue,claim,hold+观点⑵while前面就没有逗号了例如:2007年6月ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed?(译)当做好事的时候,有的人期望得到回报而有人无所图。Whendoingagooddeed,someofpeoplewillexpectarewardwhileothersdesirenothing.(longfor)2.Thosewho.句型those是一个指示代词,指代上文出现的人们,而who引导的是定语从句,一般引出持何种观点,句子后面就可以说他们如何如何.这个句型非常精练。造句练习:ThosewhoareinfavoroftheInternetclaimthatithasalotofadvantages下一段的起始句为:ThosewhoareopposedtotheInternetholdthatdisadvantagesaremany优点和缺点(meritsandshortcomings/strengthsandweaknesses/strongpointsandweakpoints/benefitsanddownsides)3.倒装句用法:部分倒装问题解决类中,在文章的末段。这样的句子力度非常强,强调要解决问题就必须如何做。⑴后面介词词组,如:Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvetheproblem.2001年1月howtosucceedinajobinterview?最后一句话:Onlyinthiswaycanwesucceedinajobinterview.全文扣题,句子简练,语气强。⑵Only后面有时接条件状语从句,例如:Onlyifwegetpreparedcanweseizetheopportunitiesinsteadoflettingthemslipby,justasthesayinggoes,“Opportunitiesareonlyforthepreparedminds”⑶时间状语比如ReduceWasteonCampusOnlywhenallofusjoinintheeffortsof消除eliminating(giveup/disposeof/getridof/exclude/discard)wasteatalllevelscanweexpecttohaveacleanersocietyandamorebeautifulfuture.4条件状语从句看似平凡,却正好符合适度的思想,即不宣称自己的观点在任何情况下都是对的,而是在何种情况下或是满足了何种条件才会正确。翻译:如果他知道生活目标并且知道根据目标如何去做决定,他就会作出正确的选择。Hewillmaketherightchoiceifheknowshisgoalinlifeandhowtomakedecisionsaccordingtothegoal.(决策的重要性)5.强调句强调句语气强烈.能给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation一文中第二段第一、二句:Firstofall,themainfinancialsupportcomefromparentsandotherfamilymembers.Foralltheyears,itistheywhogivethestudentcourageanddeterminationtoholdonandexcel(杰出)eg:excelsbinknowledge/excelothersinstrengths)(练习强调句)Itis(成分)that…Itis(sb)who….1.ItisJeffersonwhowrotethe……2.Itiswithgenuinefeelingthattheauthorpraiseallthatisprogressive.3.Itwasbecausethewaterhasrisenthatwecouldnotcrosstheriver.4.ItwasJim,aheartlessfellow,whowasheardshoutingathismotherinthedeadofnight.5.ItwasnotuntilItoldherthatMrs.Williamsknewanythingaboutit.6结果状语从句由so…that或sothat;such…that以译为“如此……以至于……”。问题类的作文中IsaFailureaBadThing?第一段的首句:Failureissuchacommonmatterthateveryoneofusmaymeetitfromtimetotime.99年ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively?用reading替换failureLosingone’slove7.让步状语从句第一种让步状语从句是由although或though引起的,可译为“虽然”。注意不要和but连用。Althoughitmaybringunfavorableconsequences,wecanbesuretoconcludethatthispracticeisfavorableonthewhole.Although(itistruethat).,itdoesn’tmean(that)是一个非常好的句型,能批驳对方观点中推导的错误。另外这个句型的最大亮点在于以退为进,语气非常恰当。它告诉我们任何的观点都不是绝对的,我们所驳斥的观点也不是一无是处。although可由while替代,动词“itdoesn’tfollow替代,是“推导出…结果”的意思。Whileitistruethat…,itdoesn’tfollowthat..译:虽然你可以用钱做很多事情,但是不意味着你可以用钱买到象爱,友情,健康和幸福这样的东西。First,whileitistruethatyoucandoalotofthingswithmoney,itdoesn’tfollowthatyoucanbuysuchthingsaslove,friendship,healthandhappinesswithmoney.8.Thereisnosuchthingas意即“没有…··这样的事情”。MyViewonFate一文第三段的首句:(译)当考虑所有的因素后,我们会自然地得出结论在我的生活里没有宿命这样的事情。(destinedfate)Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthatthereisnosuchthingasdestinedfateinmylife.9.Therebe句型应用广泛(文章开头引言句)①Therebe+people+who定语从句②Thereisnodenyingthefactthat+普遍现象③Therehasbeenmuchcontroversyover+热点话题④Thereisnoconsensusofopinioninsocietyabout+有争议的观点10.平行结构平行结构可以出现在词、词组与句子等各个层面上。1.AudreyHepburnisgracefulandelegant.2.agovernmentofthepeople,by
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