韦博英语升级演讲My_favorite_season

•Ⅷ写作﹙10分﹚•请根据所给的话题写一篇短文，介绍你喜欢•的季节。你可以从该季节的活动等方面谈起。•字数50个左右。•Myfavoriteseasonis•••••••••MyfavoriteseasonMyfavoriteseasonisspring.Becauseinspring,theweatherturnswarm,thetreesturngreen,theflowersstarttocomeout.It’sverybeautiful.Iloveitverymuch.Inspring,itoftenrains.Iliketherain.Andinspring,Icanplanttreesonthehill.Springisthefirstseasoninayear.Peopleoftenfeelveryhappy.Itmakesmehappy,too.SoIlikespringbest.MyfavoriteseasonMyfavoriteseasonissummer,summerisveryhot.Butit’sgoodforsports.Ilikeswimmingbest.Ioftengoswimmingwithmyfriendsinsummer.Insummerwecaneaticecreamandsomefruit.Insummerwehavethelongestholiday.It’summerholiday.Insummerholidaywecandosomethinginteresting,suchasswimming,playingbasketball,gototheparkandsoon.Ithinksummeristhebestseasonofayear.•Myfavoriteseasonisautumn.InChina,autumnisalwaysfromSeptember.Whenautumncomes,theleavesturnyellowslowly.Peopleoftengohikingandfishingonweekends.Athistime,thefarmersarebusydoingtheirfarmwork.It’saharvesttimeforeveryonetogainwhattheywanttoget.Althoughtheweatherisalitlecold,Ilikeautumnbest.Whatagoldenseason!•Myfavoriteseasoniswinter.Itisthecoldestseasoninayear.Peopledon’tlikewinter.Becauseitissocold.ButIlikeit.Whenitsnows,theworldisallwhite.Howbeautiful!Weoftenmakeasnowmanintheopenair.Ilikewalkinginthesnow,it’sveryinteresting.Ilovewinter!Myfavoriteseasonisspring.Inspring,theskyisblue,theairisfreshandtheriverisclean.Wecanplantmoretreesinspringwecangohikinginspringandwecangofishinginspring.Springisthebestseasonoftheyear.Andmorningisthebesttimeoftheday.SoIAlwaysreadnewwordsinthemorning.ThenIcanrememberthem.Whatabeautifulseason!Ijlikespringverymuch,whataboutyou?Wouldyouliketosharewithme?Let’sbefriends!﹙孙悦﹚•Myfavoriteseasoniswinter.Why?Because﹙可删除﹚inthewinterwecanusethesnowmakes﹙tomake﹚snowmenandcanwithmyfriendstothrowsnowballeachother﹙throwsnowballtoeachotherwithmyfriends﹚.What’smore,wecanalsolisitiscoveredworldbysnowy﹙Thewholeworldiscoveredbysnow﹚.Thewriteiseverywhere﹙Everywhereiswhite.﹚.Manychildrensteponthesnowmake﹙andplay﹚differentkindsofgames.Thesemakemefeelverywell.SoI﹙my﹚favoriteseasoniswinter.Andyou?陈妮娜----老师．俺们这次写的咋样啊？----整体不错，有进步。存在问题：1.句式问题。如陈妮娜的，2结构问题，如孙悦的。3.不打草稿，涂抹，潦草。或应付作文，乱抄短文。下面分别讲解、处理。•-----中考作文能得满分吗？•-----别吹牛了，中考作文能得满分，鼻子想青！•中考作文要求我们什么？高吗？•答：不高，总结起来两条，6个字要点全+句式通•根据阅卷经验与反馈只要做到这两条都可以的高分•英语作文怎么写啊，看见作文就发愁，咋下手呢？•一般而言，写作有两种方式。1.自由挥洒式，不拘形式，想哪写哪，较有文采。要求高。知识渊博，满腹经纶，学副五车。如王勃。•对于初学英文写作者，建议下一种:•四步写作法：1，定要点。2，找词组。3，形成句连成段。4，检查，润色。•中考英语作文一般要求80-100字，即9-11句即可。要点全，句子通即可得高分。•---你傻啊，打啥草稿，中考时间那么紧，哪有时间打草稿。•----不对，越是大考试越要打草稿。•请看下表打草稿不打草稿能放开写，不担心错，