英语写作课件

THEBEAUTYOFWRITINGSENIORONECLASS18Studentswillbeableto:1.LearnhowtowriteashortpassageofFUTURE.2.ThescoringcriteriainNMET3.Developstudents’awarenessofwriting4.Getsomeinformationabouthowtowriteabasicwriting.高考英语评分原则：1.本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。2.先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。高考英语评分原则：5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。7.语言首先要求准确通顺。8.鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛，就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为8小时”这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写一份发言稿，内容要点如下：1.保证充足睡眠2.提高学习效率3.增加自主学习时间注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.辩论稿的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。Asaseniorhighstudent,Istronglyrecommendthat语法篇这第一句写的…Istronglyrecommendthatthetimestudentsdevotedtostudyinginschoolshouldbereducedtoeighthoursaday.Themainreasonsaccountingforitareasfollows.这动词错的…Shortstudent’stimeinschoolcanhaveagoodeffectonstudy,itcanimportantforstudent’sstudyxiaolü,andincreasestudent’sowntime.原来改书面表达就是改错……Inmyopinion,wemusthaveenoughtimetostudy,butwealsoshouldkeepenoughtimetorelaxandsleep,eitherofthemareimportant.Becauseofwehavetimetorelax,wecanstudyenergetic.Reducestudytimealsocanimprovethequalityofourschoollife.这词汇…欣赏一下这篇文章的句式结构…Ifequalamountofworkhavetobeaccomplishedwithadeclinedschooltime,studyefficientlyisexpectedtobeenhanced.Moreover,extra-curriculartimewillmakeupmoreofthestudents’schedule.Thatistosay,chancesarewecanmakeabetteruseofourtime.卷面篇养眼的…当批到下午两点看到了它们…老师最恨的作文…老师最喜欢的作文…一点提示…好练的字笔笔过长答题不可越界作文五档：（从教师阅卷印象角度划分）漂漂亮亮（25—30分）（21—25分）有模有样（19—24分）（16—20分）马马虎虎（13—18分）（11—15分）稀里糊涂（7—12分）（6—10分）一塌糊涂（0—6分）（0—5分）近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可说，有利于考生的自由发挥。DISCUSSION:Whatisagoodwriting？Howtocatchtheexperts'eye?AgoodcompositionContentstructurelanguageBeautybeattractive,completedinalimitedtime!DISCUSSION:Whatisagoodwriting？Content:everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整)（内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，所有图都要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）DISCUSSION:Whatisagoodwriting？Structure:*Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误)*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)(一)使用恰当的连接词Howtowriteagoodcomposition？firstofall,tobeginwith,tostartwith,inthefirstplace一：高中英语中表层次的连接词inaddition,besides,furthermore,moreover,ontheotherhandfinally,eventually,ingeneral,inaword,inshort,onthewhole,lastbutnotleastbecauseof,onaccountof,dueto,asaresultof,owingto,thanksto二.英语作文中表因果的连接词therefore,thus,since,as,because,三.英语作文中表转折的连接词however,but,onthecontrary,ontheotherhandAsaresult;Inaddition;Tobeginwith;HoweverDearEditor,Asastudentreader,IamwritingtotalkabouttheEnglishtextbookspublishedbyyourhouse.Thesebookshavemanyadvantages._________Oneofthemisthatwecanfindavarietyoftopics,suchasscience,cultureandhistory.Thesetopics,Ithink,areverypopularwithusstudents.TobeginwithInmyopinion;Therefore;However;what'smore_____________,alongwiththetextstherearemanybeautifulandcolorfulpictures,whichcanhelpusunderstandEnglishbetter.EventhestudentswhousedtodislikeEnglishhaveturnedouttobeinterestedinthesubject._________,someofthetextshavetoomanynewwordsandexpressionswhicharehardforus.__________,I'dliketosuggestchangingthemintoeasierones.what'smoreHoweverTherefore•1.Itwillbeveryinteresting.•(换作同义词：Itwillbealotoffun.)•2.Hewassocleverthathecouldcountallthewayupto100atoneyearold.•(换作同义词：Hewassosmartthathecouldcountallthewayupto100atoneyearold.)•3.LastsummerIvisitedNewJerseywithmyparents.•(换作同义词：LastsummerItouredNewJerseywithmyparents.)（二）同义词的使用（三）避免中式英语1)TrafficinShanghaiistoocrowded.2)TherehasahighwayconnectedwithBeijing.3)Thoughshe'salmost40，butshestillplanstocompete.4)Iforgotmydictionaryathome.heavy.leftis改错soIhavetorefertotheminthedictionary.ThereisnodoubtthatEnglishStudyneedlotsoftimeandefforts.Onlybythisway,canwekeepupwithotherstudents.I'mLiHua,anewstudentofyou.lookuplearninginLiHuayours（四）使用较为丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.Howdisappointedhewas!感叹句强调句e.g.Idohopethatyoucancomeifpossible.e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.e.g.Theyreadwhileridingonabus.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.倒装句省略句with短语从句Whatisworthdoingisworthdoingwell.Batsarelong—livedcreatures,some________alifespanof20years.Batsarelong—livedcreatures,some_____________alifespanof20years.Batsarelong—livedcreatures.Some_____________alifespanof20years.ofthemhaveofwhichhavehaving（五）要使用标点符号PleaselearntoYourcompositionwhenyoufinishitfromnow.ASSESSMENTstructureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Let’simproveit:随着科技的发展，人们的生活发生了很大的变化，人们对自己的未来充满了期待。请展开想象以AnOutlookonFuture为题，描述未来人们工作、学习、生活等方面的情境。Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,ourlifehaschangedalot.Asaresult,Ithinktherewilllikelytobegreatachievementsineve