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英语写作讲解影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素1.语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅,语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句5.卷面整洁,书写工整写作基本步骤:1.仔细审题,列举大纲。2.围绕要点,写出句子。3.添加过度,确保连贯。4.先求正确,再求灵活。5.认真眷写,卷面整洁。现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果,写一篇短文。65%的学生认为35%的学生认为1.应该春游1.不应该春游2.接触大自然,呼吸新鲜空气,有利健康2.高考临近,没有心情玩3.活动是精神放松,大脑休息,有利于学习3.春游耽误学习Introduction(topic)Body(supportingideas)ConclusionTheoutlineofthewriting:Conclusionparagraph:…Introductionparagraph:…Point2…BodyPoint1…supportingidea1supportingidea2supportingidea1supportingidea2Keywords:1.introduction(topic):高三学生(senior3students)春游(gospringouting)讨论(discussion)2.body(supportingideas):接触自然(beclosetonature)呼吸新鲜空气(breathesomefreshair)精神放松(relaxthemselves)大脑休息(resttheirbrains)高考临近(withcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear)没心情玩(don’tfeellikegoing)耽误学习(wastethetime)3.conclusion:inmyopinion…Keywords:中学生middleschoolstudents身体差inapoorstateofhealthInbadcondition充足的睡眠enoughsleep加强锻炼,增加户外活动takemoreexerciseanddomoreoutdooractivities定时吃饭少吃零食havethreemealsregularly,eatlessnon-staplefood.讲卫生Form/developthehabitofhygiene主题句的内容要明确具体,语言简洁,开门见山,句式力争多样性Howwillyoustartyoupassage?问句:……从句:……Introduction:(sample)WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.巧用过渡句,过渡词,理顺文章的逻辑关系Payspecialattentiontothetransitionsentences:Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.ThebodypartPoint1:65%的人认为应该春游(亮明观点)Sentencepattern:Mostofus(about65%)holdtheopinionthat…,sinceittendsto…,whichisunfavorableto…Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Reason1:接触大自然,呼吸新鲜空气,有利健康Sentencepattern:Theythinkitgoodtodosth……/sthdogoodtosthIntheiropinion,itisofgreatbenefittodosth……Eg:TheythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairReason2:活动是精神放松,大脑休息,有利于学习(注意:两个观点之间的连接)递进what’smore;besides;moreover;inaddition;furthermoreEg:theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Conclusion:小段总结,进一步亮明观点,前后呼应。Eg:Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.Point2:35%的学生认为不应该春游(亮明观点)注意:使用过渡句,自然衔接句子和段落(承上启下)Sentencepattern:However,otherspreferto…Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion…..Ontheotherhand….Eg:Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.Reason1:高考临近,没有心情玩Sentencepattern:Theysay/believe/holdtheopinion…that….Eg:Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.Reason2:春游耽误学习(注意:两个观点之间的连接)Eg:Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.TheythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudiesWhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat’smore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowards…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.B.表达观点一:…ofthemholdtheopinionthat….…ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…Peoplewhoarefortheideathink…C.表达不同观点之间的衔接:However,…ofthemholdadifferentview./…ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.However,everycoinhastwosides.Differentfromthose….,…peoplethink….Ontheotherhand,…peoplethink….D.结尾常用套语:Inmyopinion/Personally,…AsfarasI’mconcerned,…Inshort/inbrief/inaword,…WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat’smore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents.Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatOntheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,....Secondly…Thirdly…Inthefirstplace…Inthesecondplace…Inthethirdplace…Finally/Lastbutnotleast/,....表示递进、强调的关联词....Besides/Apartfrom/What’smore/Inaddition/Furthermore/Moreover/worsestill/tomakemattersworse…WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat’smore,they
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