高中英语作文公开课

Beautifyyoursentences(闪亮你的句子）步骤1.好句赏析2.技巧指导3.巩固提高EnjoyasongWhenIwasyoungI________totheradiowaitingformyfavoritesongs.Whenthey______I'dsingalong.It_____mesmile.Those_____suchhappytimesandnotsolongago.HowIwonderedwherethey________.Butthey'rebackagainjustlikealonglostfriend.WhenIwasyoungI________(listen)totheradiowaitingformyfavoritesongs.Whenthey______(play)I'dsingalong.It______(make)mesmile.Those_____(be)suchhappytimesandnotsolongago.HowIwonderedwherethey___________(go).Butthey'rebackagainjustlikealonglostfriend.listenedplayedwerehadgonemade思考：Whatisabeautifulsentence?Translation郭靖是个爷们。他智商不太高。他娶了IQ很高的黄蓉做媳妇。黄是桃花岛集团（THDGroup）总裁黄药师的女儿。GuoJingisaman.Heisnotveryclever.HemarriedHuanRongwithaveryhighIQ.HuangisthedaughterofHuangyaoshi,thepresidentofTaoHuaDaoGroup.GuoJing,anotveryintelligentman,marriedagirlnamedHuangRongwithanextremelyhighIQ,whoisthedaughterofHuangyaoshi,thepresidentofTHDGroup.Readthefollowingsandmakeyourwisechoice!Group1A.Wehavemuchhomeworktodo.B.Wehaveendlesshomeworktodo.CWeareburdenedwithendlesshomework.Tip1高分词汇是首要高分词汇原则1.后、高、长（后学的、较高级、较长词汇）goodvery2.词组优先trytodo3.避免重复A.Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.B.Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.Group2A.Thisvillagebuiltaschoolin2008.B.Notuntil2008didthisvillagebegintohaveitsownschool.Tip2陈述不如倒装妙Eg.我从来不买日货A.IwillneverbuyanyproductsmadeinJapan.B.NeverwillIbuyanyproductsmadeinJapan.天空中繁星点点.Intheskyhanglittlestars.河岸上有很多花.Onthebankgrowlotsofflowers.Group3A.Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.B.Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.Tip3主动不如被动巧Eg.最近学校就“谁是你的偶像”进行了一次调查。（07广东）Recentlyasurveyhasbeendoneon“Whoisyouidol?”inourschool.Group4A.IfIamgiventhechance,Iwilltrymybest.B.Giventhechance,Iwilltrymybest.Tip4分词结构不能少口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。1.童年的纸飞机现在终于飞回我手里,带来甜蜜的回忆Backfliesthepaper-airplaneanditbringsmethefragrantmemoryofmychildhood.bringingTipstobeautifyyoursentence1.高分词汇是首要2.陈述不如倒装妙3.主动不如被动巧4.分词结构不能少TaskIRewritethesentences1.Inordertoreachthisgoal,wewillputupno-smokingsignsinallindoorpublicplaces.（用被动结构）（10广东）2.AccordingtoProfessorWang,slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,whichisnumber1intheworld.（09广东）3.ThesurveyshowsthathalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,while48%oftheboyschoosesportsstars.（06广东）4．Shootingwasoriginatedasameansofsurvivalanddevelopedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.(用分词结构)（08广东）1.Inordertoachievethisgoal,no-smokingsignswillbeputupinallindoorpublicplaces.2.AccordingtoProfessorWang,slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,rankingthefirstintheworld.3.ThesurveyshowsthathalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,while48%oftheboysprefersportsstars.4.Shooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.Task2Translation1.他建议学生不要过度用眼（09广东）Hesuggestedthatschoolchildrenavoidoveruseoftheireyes2.近视原因很复杂没有哪一种药物能治愈近视。（09广东）Socomplicatedarethecausesofshort-sightednessthatnomedicinecancureshort-sightedness.3.1968年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛（08广东）WomenwerefirstallowedtocompeteintheOlympicshootingin1968.4.约5.4亿人受二手烟影响，死亡人数超过10万／年。（10广东）Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,causing100,000deathsayear.Thanks