BEC剑桥商务英语中级作文模板、例题超全解析

BEC中级作文模板、例题超全解析题型：1．商务书信类；2．商务便条便函类；3．商务信函类；4.商务报告类商务书信类这一题型要求考生根据所提供的短文，如书信、传真、便函、留言条(电话留言条)等，起草一封书信，字数要求达到120—140词左右。题目结构：Input:1situationdescription2task3targetreaderReading:textsinnote,letter,fax,memo+contentpoints(handwrittennotes;secondletter)Write:businessletter(120-140words)【例题】Youhaveorganisedaproductionconferenceforyourcompanywhichwillbeheldon10October2005.ThefollowingistheletterofconfirmationyoureceivedfromtheConferenceCentre.Readtheletterandfaxbelow,whichgivesdetailsoftheconference.Then,usingallinformationfromthefax,writeyourlettertoJohnSmithattheNuffieldConferenceCentre,explainingthechangestothearrangements.Donotincludepostaladdresses.Write120-140wordsonseparatesheet.DearConferenceOrganiser,Iamwritingtoconfirmthearrangementsfortheconference.DATEANDTIME:10thOctober-10a.m.to5p.m.NUMBEROFGUESTS:50ROOMSRESERVED10a.m.to12:30p.m.CONFERENCEHALL32p.m.to5p.m.SEMINARROOMS1,2,and3CATERING:Coffee--11a.m.to11:30a.m.Lunch-12:30p.m.to2p.m.ConferenceCentreRestaurantTea-4p.m.WelookforwardtowelcomingyourcompanytotheNuffieldConferenceCentre.Yoursfaithfully,JohnSmithTodayyourProductionManagerhassentyouthefaxbelowwithchangeshewouldliketomaketotheconferencearrangementsFAXI’mafraidwehavetomakesomelast-minutechangestothearrangementsforourproductionconference.1.Tenmoreguestshaveaccepted.2.ThePresidentwantsonlyonehourforlunch,andjustasimplebuffet-notseatedintherestaurant.TheConferenceSpeaker（TomMoors）can’tcomeuntil2pm.Sohewillgivehispresentationintheafternoon.Canwemovetheseminarstothemorning?Sorryaboutthis!Sam2.商务便函与便条审题：MrSmith,yourboss,toldyoutoaskMsLiutoattendasalespresentationonanewproduct.WriteanotetoMsLiu:*sayingwhowantshertoattendthesalespresentation;*informingherwhenandwherethesalespresentationwillbeheld（一）商务便函一般公司企业往往都印有按照自己公司风格的商业便函，请看下列例子：MemoTo：(收信人)From:（发信人）Date:（日期）Subject:（事由）Message:（正文）商务便函一般由以下几个部分组成：1、Memo：Memo是Memorandum缩写，因此也可以用Memorandum备忘录2、To：这一标题后面应写收信人的姓名与职衔，姓名前可以用尊称或不用，如：To：Mr.JohnSmith，SalesManager3、From：这一标题后应写发信人的姓名与职衔：职衔可根据需要决定写或不写，但姓名前不要用尊称。4、Date：日期的写法同书信里日期写法的要求完全一样，不要用数字来表示月份。5、Subject：这一标题后是写事由的，即用一个或几个词汇简单概括便函的内容，以便查阅。事由必须简洁明了，不要用完整的句子，如：ChangesinTravelAdvanceFormPromotionofStaffVacationScheduleParticipationinTrainingProgrammes（二）商务便条商务便条一般有四个组成部分：日期、称呼、正文、签名。一些公司有印好的便条笺。如:MessageTo:Date:MessageTelephoneMessageFor:From:Tel.:Message:Actionrequired:PleasecallbackCallerwillcallbacklaterNoactionrequiredMessagetakenby:DateTime例：让秘书通知推迟约会9a.m.MissWang,I'vegotanurgentmeetingtoday.Pleasecontacttheapplicantstopostponetheinterviewstillfurthernotice.DS分类：1告知信息inform2布置安排arrange3征求意见request4询问信息enquire5求助申请apply6推荐建议suggest1告知信息类例题：YouareamanageratanauditorscalledGolding&Co.YourcompanyhasjustmergedwithacompetitortobecomeMasonGolding.Youhavebeenaskedtoinformstaffofthechangeofname.Writeamemoof40-50words:*informingstaffofthenewname*tellingthemwhentostartusingthenewname*askingstafftouseonlythenewnameafterthattime.收购与兼并mergerandaquisition范文：AsaresultofourmergerwithMason&Co.,thenameofourcompanywillbechangedMasonGolding.Pleasestarttousethenewnameon1March2006.Youareremindedthatonlythenewnamecanbeusedfromthenon.例题Youarethetrainingmanagerofacompanywhichhaswonalargeexportorder.Youhavebeenaskedtoorganiseforeignlanguagetrainingforsomeofyourstaff.Writeamemotostaff:explainingwhythecoursesarenecessarysayingwhichmembersofstaffshouldattendannouncingwhenthecourseswillstartWrite40-50wordsonaseparatesheet.[范文]To:AllstaffFrom:theTrainingManagerDate:1March2005Subject:AForeignLanguageTrainingCourseIwasaskedtoorganiseaforeignlanguagetrainingcoursebecauseofthelargeexportorderwereceivedrecently.Itwillstarton15Marchandwilllast2weeks.Thosewhowilldealwithordersshouldattendthiscourse.2布置安排类YouareHeadofResearchforaninternationalcarmanufacturer.YouhavetomakeanurgenttriptomorrowtovisitPierreBlanco,acolleaguewhoworksforasubsidiary.Writeamemoof40-50wordstoyoursecretary:tellingherwhoyouaregoingtoseeandwhenaskinghertobookflightticketsandaccommodationtellingherwhatworkyouwouldlikehertodoinyourabsence.WriteonyourAnswerSheet.subsidiary,parentcompany,holdingcompany,affiliate,branch,headquarters,representativeoffice范文：IneedtohaveanurgentmeetingwithPierreBlancoofourParisofficetomorrow.PleasebookareturntickettoParisandahotelroomformeassoonaspossible.Duringmyabsence,pleasekeepmeinformedoftheprogressoftheproject.Ifthereisanythingurgent,givemeaphonecall.[例文]Youarethemanagerofasmallexportcompany.PeterWatson,animportantclient,isvisitingyourcompanyforthreedaysfrom22October.Writeanoteof40-50wordstoyoursecretary:AskinghertobookahotelroomSayingwherethehotelshouldbeGivingherthedates[范文]比较下面三篇作文，注意内容点和语气的区别。作文1：DearMsJones,IamwritingtoinformyouthatMrPeterWatsonwillbevisitingourcompany.Wouldyoupleasebesokindlyastoreserveasuitableroomforhim?Yourssincerely作文2：HiMary,Look.I’mreallysorrytohavetotroubleyoubutPeterWatson–areallyimportantclient–isvisitingthecompanyforthreedaysinOctober,startingon22nd,todiscussacontractwithus.PleasewillyoubookforMrWatsonareallynicehotelroomassoonaspossible?Thanksverymuch.Seeyousoon!作文3Mary,MrPeterWatsonisvisiti