读后续写-妈妈的手

规范问题1.字数不够要求150字左右2.应使用5个以上下划线的词：不要自己划3.忘记划下划线4.书面语和说话的标点符号人称，时态，衔接跑题、偏题Thiswasthefirsttimetheyouthrealizedthatmother’sworkwassodifficult.However,Ididn’tknowthatbefore.Istudiedveryhardandgotgoodacademicachievements.衔接问题，尤其首句Thiswasthefirsttimetheyouthrealizedthat___________________________第一个字母是大写接的是句子什么语序？Howdifficulthismotherwas?Whyhismotherneverallowedhimtohelpherwashtheclothes?语法问题Toavoid低级语法错误时态I’mthinkmyacademicbutI’mappreciatemymothermore.Touse高级词汇、高级语法（非谓语、从句、强调句、倒装句、倒装等）Hismomwassolovedhim.IfIwithoutyouSaidwhat,didwhatIdidn’tthinkharmyouInothelpyoubeforeIveryregretHandhugIregrettednothelpingmum.Feelregretful/guiltyHardshiprewardrepaygivebackMyeffortspaidoffBringmeupWantsbtodoliveuptoone'sexpectationCareforsbmoretake…forgrantedTakeonresponsibilitygrantmyappicationHecried.Heburstintotears/outcrying.Tearsrandownhisface/hischeeks.Hiseyeswerefulloftears.Hiseyeswerefilledwithtears.Heshedbittertears.Theyouthrealizedthathowgreat/hardhismotherwastobringhimup./topayforhisschoolfees.heintendedtodosomethinginreturnformother'slove.Withouthismother,hewouldn'tbehimselftoday.文本的理解Timeisimportant!情节的完整Para1.给妈妈洗手，董事长的要求——年轻人有所感悟和感触（妈妈这双手和他成就之间的关系）——他做了什么？（轻轻地洗/和妈妈对话/帮妈妈洗衣服）Para2.年轻人的回答——故事的结局Thiswasthefirsttimetheyouthrealizedthatitwasthispairofhandsthatwashedtheclotheseverydaytoenablehimtopaytheschoolfees.Thebruisesinthemother’shandswerethepricethatthemotherhadtopayforhisgraduation,academicexcellenceandhisfuture.Havingfinishedthecleaningofhismother’shands,theyouthquietlywashedalltheremainingclothesforhismother.Thatnight,motherandsontalkedforalongtime.Theyouthresponded,“Iknownowwhatisappreciation.Withoutmymother,therewouldn’tbemysuccesstoday.Byworkingtogetherandhelpingmymother,onlynowdoIrealizehowdifficultandtoughitistogetsomethingdone.Besides,Ihavecometoappreciatetheimportanceandvalueoffamilyrelationship.”Thedirectorsaid,“ThisiswhatI’mlookingfortobemymanager.Iintendtorecruitapersonwhocanappreciatethehelpofothers.Youarehired.”