英语四级写作常见错误分析和高分作文

英语四级写作常见错误分析和高分作文作文如何才能及格？——常见错误分析一.防止无意义失分字数120-150语法错误（IisRoman）拼写错误（inportant）以上三类低级错误，让阅卷者对你作文的印象大打折扣。二.得无意义的分13秒总体评分法（印象分）误区“内容好=高分”正确的写法应该是：书写整洁三段分明段首句强悍用外语写作文，最容易犯的错误是什么？一.语法错误（一）句子结构错误1.主从句叠置(1)Therearemoreandmorestudentsliketousethecomputer.(2)Therearestillmanyproblemsshouldbenotedandresolved.whothat2.简单句叠置Ilikechattingonlineverymuch,andIgotothenetbaralmosteveryweekend.so3.从句叠置Asisknowntoallthatcomputersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife.Itisknowntoallthatcomputersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife.,4.句子成分缺失Ifworkhard,wewillsurelybesuccessful.Workinghard,wewillsurelybesuccessful.we5.语序错误1.Whycollegestudentsspendmoreandmoretimeonthecomputer?2.Ioftenwonderwherehavetheygottheirmoney.dohave6.语态错误1.Ihaveexcitedseveraldaysatthenewsthatyouwillcome.2.Mostofthestudentssatisfywiththeserviceinthedinghall.beenaresatisfied(二).动词错误1.时态错误Manypeoplethoughtthattheinternetwillbemoreusefulinthefuture.think2.单复数错误1.Wisemanseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.Awisemanseeksopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.2.Someoneareafraidthatcomputersmaycontrolmeninthefuture.menpeople3.非谓语动词错误1.Doexerciseinthemorningisgoodforone’shealth.2.Havingstudiedinourschoolfor3years,thecanteenservicehaschangedalot.DoingIfindthat（三）代词错误1.Wecanusecomputersindoingeverythingyoulike.2.Acollegestudentshouldbeabletodotheirwashingontheirown.weCollegestudents（四）冠词错误1.Horseisanusefulanimal.2.TheexamwillbeheldintheDecember,2004.A\Thehorse(五）词性错误1.Iwishyoucanconsidermysuggests.2.Ifapersonwantstosuccess,hemustlearntoenduresufferingsandsetbacks.suggestions.succeed二.用词错误1.Studentsmustknowhowtoapplyacomputer.2.PeoplecantouchmanynewthingsontheInternet.3.Thepurposeofthisletteristoreactsomeopinionsontheserviceinthedininghall.operate\uselearnexpress三.表达习惯错误1.Now6000yuancanbuyaP4computer.Now6000yuanisenoughforyoutobuyaP4computer.NowyoucanbuyaP4computerfor6000yuan.2.Aroomoftenlives6-8students.Ina三.表达习惯错误3.Ithinkthisgreatchangehasthreereasons.Ithinktherearethreereasonsforthisgreatchange.4.Thereasonforthisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.that四.标点符号及大小写错误1.However,everycoinshastwosides,Ithinkthesurroundingsinourcanteenarethebestamongalluniversities.2.Themanwasracingdownthestreet.Becausehewaslatefortheclass.ThebestEnglishfilminmyeyesis《King》.coin.b,KingInternetorNewspapers?第一段：→Whenpeoplefacethequestion“howtogetinformation”,differentpeopleholddifferent（能换词不）views.(有个状语从句，还不错。但是更精练的，有品位的可用分词---Facingwithquestionof“howtoobtaininformation)→Somearguethatitisagoodwayofgettinginformationtouseinternet.Because(这两个句子应当是一个句子)it‘sconvenientandspeedful(用词错误）.（Somearguethatitisagoodwaytogetinformationbyutilizinginternetforitisconvenientandspeedy)→Therearerichresourcesininternet.It（能用定语从句不）canprovidevariousnewstousintime.(Internet,withrichresources,canconsiderablyprovidevariousnewstousintime.)（或Intime,withrichresources,caninternetconsiderablyprovidevariousnewstous.）第二段→Howeverothersstillthinkthatweshouldlearnrecent(current或recently-occured)newsfromnewspapers.→Fornewspapersisanthoritativeandcheap.Especially,it'sappropriatefortheoldwhocan'toperatecomputer.(可以变成一个句子Howeverothersholdstheoppositeviewthatthelatestinformationcouldbelearnedthroughpressorpublicationsforthey,asanauthoritiveyetcheapmeanstogaininformation,arehighlyappropriateforpeopleespeciallyfortheoldwhoarenotabletooperatecomputer.)低分作文的特征语法错误较多Chinglish句型过于简单啰嗦如何避免低级错误1.写完整的句子典型错误一：Jinjinholdingthetorchasifthatisherlife.1.写完整的英文句典型错误二：SomepeoplethinkweshouldresistCarrefour.Becauseaboycott（联合抵制）willmaketheFrenchrealizethatChinesepeopleareangry.2.要有一定程度的省略典型错误一：TibetwasapartofChina,TibetisapartofChina,andTibetwillalwaysbeapartofChina.省略要正确典型错误二：ChinaYaoalwayshasandwillalwaysdohisbesttowinthegames.--ChinaYaohasalwaysdoneandwillcontinuetodohisbesttowinthegames.3.句号一定要用对JayChou’snewlyreleasedmovie’KungfuDunk’hashitthecinema,Iamgoingtoseeittomorrow.---JayChou’snewlyreleasedmovie‘KungfuDunk’hashitthecinemaandIamgoingtoseeittomorrow.---…hashitthecinema.Iamgoingtoseeittomorrow.中层次作文水平语法错误时有出现内容不够结构性词汇不够明显内容填充住在大城市的好处和坏处advantagesThereasonwhyIprefertoliveinthebigcitiesisthattherearemorejobopportunities,educationopportunitiesandbetterlivingconditionsinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.disadvantagesButthecostfortheprivilegeoflivinginthecityisalsohigh.What'smore,thereismoregasandnoisepollutioninthecity.四级作文评分标准14分档切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。11分档切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。8分档基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。5分档基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。2分档条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。评分原则评分原则：CET作文题采用总体评分（GlobalScoring）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（RewardScores），而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而和合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。避免趋中倾向。该给高分给高分，包括满分；该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。从以上评分标准和评分原则可以看出，写作要拿高分必须内容和语言并重。内容上，要切题并充分表达主题。切题即写作围绕主题，不跑题、不偏题，不写与主题无关的内容。只要大家认真审题，准确把握作文主题与要求，切题不难。充分表达主题意即文章要涵盖全部写作要点，论证说理充分（或描述准确详细、说明透彻到位）。语言上，则要表意准确、前后连贯、没有或很少语法错误。另外，根据笔者掌握的