非谓语动词在写作中运用

EnjoyawritingWiththeincreasingpopularityofsmartphones,moreandmoreyoungpeopleinChinaaregluedtothem.Toensurethesafetyofphoneusersontheroad,thefirstsidewalkintendedforthem,3meterswideand50meterslong,wasbuiltinYangrenjieScenicSpot,Chongqing.Itisdividedintotwopathways,oneforcellphoneusersandtheotherforthoseordinarypedestrians.Asforitsappearance,differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Somepeoplethinkitreasonable,viewingitasagoodsolutiontotheunnecessaryinjurieswhentheyusephoneswhilewalking.However,othersconsideritpointless,believingitwouldbebetterifphoneuserscangetridofthebadhabitsofgettingaddictedtousingphonesandenforcethesafetyeducationforpedestrians.2怎样才能写出这样的作文呢？。。。。。。•使用非谓语动词、同位语结构、with复合结构；•使文章简洁、通顺；•尽量使用动词短语和词组、•定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。EnjoyawritingWiththeincreasingpopularityofsmartphones,moreandmoreyoungpeopleinChinaaregluedtothem.Toensurethesafetyofphoneusersontheroad,thefirstsidewalkintended/designed/meantforthem,3meterswideand50meterslong,wasbuiltinYangrenjieScenicSpot,Chongqing.Itisdividedintotwopathways,oneforcellphoneusersandtheotherforthoseordinarypedestrians.Asforitsappearance,differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Somepeoplethinkitreasonable,viewingitasagoodsolutiontotheunnecessaryinjurieswhentheyusephoneswhilewalking.However,othersconsideritpointless,believingitwouldbebetterifphoneuserscangetridofthebadhabitsofgettingaddictedtousingphonesandenforcethesafetyeducationforpedestrians.非谓语动词在写作中的运用Non-predicateVerbsinWritingSenior3Class212014.11.28学习目标1、通过回顾非谓语动词的用法，学会使用非谓语动词造句；2、能在写作中熟悉运用非谓语动词；其中目标1是重点，目标2是难点。【预习案】Task1.分析下列几组句子中非谓语动词在句中的作用。1.Tomasteraforeignlanguageisnotaneasyjob.Doingphysicalexerciseonaregularbasiscontributestoourphysicalandmentalhealth.2.HewantstolearnEnglishwell.Hedeniedfinishinghishomework.Withoutpayingattentiontothepeoplearoundthem,theystaredattheircellphones.3.Arobotisamachinedesignedtodojobsthatareusuallyperformedbyhumans.Hewasthefirstmantolandonthemoon.Thebuildingbeingbuiltistheteachingbuilding.主语宾语定语4.Mywishistogetabettercomputer.Theywereexcitedtotakepartinmatch.Thestoryisfrightening.5.Ifinallypersuadedhimtoquitsmoking.Ifoundmyhometownchangedsomuch.Inoticeamansittingunderthetree.6.Hediedearly,leavinghiswifenothingbutsadnessandloneliness.Giventherightkindoftraining,theseteenagesoccerplayersmayonedaygrowintotheInternationalstars.Hehurriedtotheschooltofindnobodythere.表语宾补状语1.非谓语形式有三种：(1).______________(2).______________(3).______________2.非谓语动词在Task1中，（1）作____（2）作____（3）作____（4）作____（5）作____（6）作____Task2.根据以上句子，总结非谓语动词在句中的用法：tododoingdone主语宾语定语表语宾补状语【自主探究案】用非谓语动词整合句子时必须注意：1.非谓语使用条件一个句子当中，已经存在一个完整的句子，又没有连词的情况下；2.找准逻辑主语，判断主、被动关系；及确定非谓语动词充当的成分；eg.Theboysittingunderthetreeismyclassmate.Thebuildingbuiltlastyearisateachingbuilding.3.非谓语动词在句中做状语的常用结构（1）非谓语（时间/原因/条件等状语），S+V+其它;Standingatthetopofthehill,wecanseeShiyanTownUsedforalongtime,thebooklooksold.Toensurethesafetyofthephoneusersontheroad,thefirst“mobilephonesidewalkinChina”wasbuiltinChongqing.（2）S+V+其它，非谓语（结果/伴随等状语）；Hediedearly,leavinghissonalotofmoney.Theteachercameintotheclassroom,followedbysixstudents.请同学们讨论以下句子存在哪些问题并改正。(学生句子）——2mins1.Inmyopinion,learnEnglishisanenjoyablething.2.Somestudentsthinkingit’sdifficulttolearnEnglish3.Readcanenrichourselves,improveourself-confidence.4.Seeingfromthetopofmountain,ourschoolisbeautiful.5.Afirebrokeoutinthehotel,caused10peopleinjured.6.Thebook,writinginsimpleEnglish,iseasytounderstand.4.请同学们讨论以下句子存在哪些问题并改正。（2mins）1.Inmyopinion,learnEnglishisanenjoyablething.•Inmyopinion,learningEnglishisanenjoyablething.2.Somestudentsthinkingit’sdifficulttolearnEnglish•Somestudentsthinkit’sdifficulttolearnEnglish.3.Readcanenrichourselves,improveourself-confidence.•Readingcanenrichourselves,improving/andimproveourself-confidence.请同学们讨论以下句子存在哪些问题并改正。（2mins）4.Seeingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.Seenfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.5.Afirebrokeoutinthehotel,caused10peopleinjured.•Afirebrokeoutinthehotel,causing10peopleinjured.6.Thebook,writinginsimpleEnglish,iseasytounderstand.•Thebook,writteninsimpleEnglish,iseasytounderstand.Presentation(5mins)内容展示点评自主探究案1-6G1G91-3G64-6请同学们讨论以下句子存在哪些问题并改正。(学生句子）——2mins1.Beingfacedwithmanydifficulties,wedidn’tloseheart.2.Zhanjiangisabeautifulcity,attractedalotofvisitorsfromhomeandabroad.3.Finishedreadingyourletter,Iwasmuchmoved.4.Carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,broughtconveniencetopeople.5.ThebookentitledBattleHymnoftheTigerMother,writingbyAmy.用非谓语动词整合句子。1.Whiteteagetsitsnamefromitssilverwhitecolour.WhiteteaisregardedasoneofthesixChineseteatypes.(2014广东普通高中毕业班综合测试)(用现在分词短语)________________________________________________2.ThebookwasentitledBattleHymnoftheTigerMother.ThebookwaswrittenbyAmyChua.(2011广东基础写作)(用过去分词短语)________________________________________________WhiteteagettingitsnamefromitssilverwhitecolourisregardedasoneofsixChineseteatypes.ThebookentitledBattleHymnoftheTigerMotherwaswrittenbyAmyChua3.Wewerefacedwithmanydifficulties.Wedidn’tloseheart.(用过去分词短语)____________________________________________4.Weshouldtryourbesttoworkhard.Wehavetoimproveourselves.（用不定式）