高三英语专题读写任务写作学案第2讲 ―― 郭立芳(如何美化句子)

第1页共38页广州卓越教育机构一对一高三专题读写任务学案第2讲如何运用高级结构美化句子【诊查】（一）基础篇：运用所积累的高级词汇或词组短语来替换优化表格内左栏的词汇，使其更为高级。词汇对照人/人们（people）学校(school)调查/研究report/study提高/增长improve/increase减小/减弱decrease得到/获得get影响influence重要的好的/有利的坏的/不利的不同的/各种各样的第2页共38页(二)提高篇句子改写（将划线部分按括号内的要求进行改写，使其更为美化高级。）1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（用主语从句和表语从句）_______________________is__________thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.2.ThoughI’mweak,I’lltrymybesttofinishitintime.(用倒装句)_______________________________,I’ll_______________________tofinishitintime.3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(用强调句型)_____________________untilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper_______heknewwhathadhappened.4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气“butfor要不是”）I_______________________thephysicsexambutforyourhelp.5.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(用过去分词)_______________manystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(用V-ing形式)_______________________,theywentbacktoschool.7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）_______________________hesays,Iwon’tbelieve.8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（祈使句+and…）_______________________you’llmakerapidprogress.9．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(用倒装句)______________________________comebackfromBeijing_______hewassentabroad.10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(词组“看重；高度赞扬”)Weall_________________________him.11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(词组turnout)Theplan________________________________afailure.12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(句式结构：themore…themore)________________hespoke,________________________hefelt.第3页共38页【导学】句式就是句子的结构方式，也就是句子的式样或格式。不同的思想内容要用不同的句式来表达；而同一思想内容也可以用不同的句式来表达。句式不同，表达效果也就不同。只有句式多样化，文章才会生动有趣，充满活力。可是，在实际写作中，初学写作的学生往往一篇文章都是千篇一律的简单句，文章单调乏味，毫无生气。因而，恰当地使用某些方法或手段有助于实际表达形式的多样化，增强表达效果。将常用方法简单介绍如下：一、“有”的句型例句1：沿着这条800米长的大街,有300多家商店。Alongthis800-meterstreet,therearemorethan300shops.例句2:可能会有一个更合适的方法来做解决这个问题。Theremaybeamoreproperwaytodealwiththeproblem.(注意：“有”能/不能？随便用have、has!)【即时练习】：1.有一条800米长的大街,街的两边有300多家商店。________________a800-meterstreet,______________morethan300storesalongitstwosides.2.我完全理解我们为此事感到不快,但是没有必要感到太难过。Ifullyunderstandwhywearenotcomfortableaboutit,but_____________________________.【拓展用法】therebe的常用句型1.Thereisnodoubt/denyingthat….毫无疑问/不可否认eg:与传统课堂比起来,毫无疑问,在网络上学生可以得到更多的学习资源。Comparedtoatraditionalclassroom,_________________________childrencangetmorelearningresourcesontheinternet.[改写句子]：1.私家车会对环境造成一定的影响。原句：Privatecarswillaffecttheenvironment.改写后：_______________________________________________________________________.2.(2011届广东省深圳市高三九校联考读写任务)一起吃饭的时间是一种家人和朋友间亲密关系的体现。原句：Diningtogetherstandsforthecloserelationshipbetweenfamilymembersorfriends.改写后：_______________________________________________________________________.2.Thereisnoneed/point/use/good/doingsth做某事是没意义/没必要/无用的/没好处的。Thereisnoneed/point/use/goodthat……是没意义/没必要/无用的/没好处的。eg:朋友之间没有必要因为一些小事情就毁掉了珍贵的友谊。第4页共38页1)Thereisnoneedruiningthepreciousfriendshipbetweenfriendsbecauseofsometinythings.Or:_______________________________________________________________________[改写句子]：1)父母过分关注孩子的学习和成长是不好的。翻译：_______________________________________________________________________.父母过分关注孩子的学习和成长是没有多大益处的。改写：_______________________________________________________________________.3.Thereisnowonder/surprisethat….难怪/不足为奇eg:Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,____________________________(……就不足为奇了)Ihavesuchastrongenthusiasmonthegroupdancingcompetition.[翻译句子]：他是如此的固执，难怪他会被炒掉。_______________________________________________________________________.二、It的相关句型It作形式主语的常见句型：①It+be+形容词+todosth./doing/that….e.g.Itisveryimportanttolearnaforeignlanguage.(学一门外语非常重要。)Itisuselesscryingoverthespiltmilk.(覆水难收。)Itwasreallysurprisingthatshemarriedamanlikethat.(她嫁给那样的男士真让人惊讶。)②It+be+名词词组+doing/that….e.g.Itisnogoodtellinglies.(撒谎没好处。)Itisapitythatyoudidn’tgotoseethefilmyesterday.(你昨天没看成那部电影真遗憾。)ItisatruththattherewouldbenonewChinawithouttheCommunistParty.(没有共产党就没有新中国，这是毋庸质疑的。)③It+be+过去分词+that….该句型常见动词有：say,hope,think,suppose,expect,report,know,believe,decide,etc.e.g.Itissaidthattheyhaveinventedanewtypeofcomputer.(据说他们发明了一种新型电脑。)ItisbelievedthatChinawillbecomeoneofthestrongestcountriesintheworld.(大家都相信中国将会步入世界强国之列。)Itwasreportedthatmorethan170thousandpeoplediedinthe2004tsunami.(据报道，至少有十七万人在2004年那场海啸中丧生。)第5页共38页④It+seems/appears/happens等不及物动词+that….e.g.Itseemsthatheenjoyspopsongsverymuch.(似乎他非常喜欢流行歌曲。)ItappearsthatTommightchangehismind.(看来汤姆可能会改变主意。)⑤It+takes+(sb.)+sometime+todosth.这是一个表示“（某人）花多少时间干某事”的句型，其中it是形式主语，代替后面的不定式（todosth.），句型中的sb.也可以省略。e.g.Ittookmesometimetoreadthereadingmaterials.(我花了一些时间才读完那段阅读材料。)⑥Itistimeforsbtodosth.Itishightimethatsbshoulddosth(虚拟语气)当不定式（短语）、动名词（短语）或从句在复合宾语结构中作某些动词的宾语时（如think,make,find,consider,feel,suppose等）；e.g.TheyfounditpleasantthattheyworkedwithusChinese.他们发现与我们中国人一起工作很愉快。Idon’tfeelitdifficulttounderstandtheSpecialEnglish.我觉得理解英语特别节目并不难。Hemakesitarulenevertoborrowmoney.（他立志决不向别人借钱。）【句型巩固】1)AsIamawayfrommyparents,____________________________(对我来说有必要学会)toliveonmyown.2)______________________(众所周知)somestudentscheatin