雅思范文：考官9分雅思大作文模板1

duag.雅思范文：考官9分雅思大作文模板编者按：这是一篇新鲜出炉的考官simon9分雅思大作文。以小编几十篇simon作文的阅读量，大致总结了他最为习惯的行文结构，通过对这个考官所喜欢的9分“模板”的解读，希望大家能在自己的雅思写作备考中，对写作模板的使用能有一个新的认识。IELTSWritingTask2:'positiveornegative'essayHere'smyfullessayforthe'positiveornegativedevelopment'questionthatwe'vebeenlookingatoverthelastfewweeks.Insomecountries,manymorepeoplearechoosingtolivealonenowadaysthaninthepast.Doyouthinkthisisapositiveornegativedevelopment?9分范文：Inrecentyearsithasbecomefarmorenormalforpeopletolivealone,particularlyinlargecitiesinthedevelopedworld.Inmyopinion,thistrendishavingbothpositiveandnegativeconsequencesinequalmeasure.Theriseinone-personhouseholdscanbeseenaspositiveforbothpersonalandbroadereconomicreasons.Onanindividuallevel,peoplewhochoosetolivealonemaybecomemoreindependentandself-reliantthanthosewholivewithfamilymembers.Ayoungadultwholivesalone,forexample,willneedtolearntocook,clean,paybillsandmanagehisorherbudget,allofwhicharevaluablelifeskills.Fromaneconomicperspective,thetrendtowardslivingalonewillresultingreaterdemandforhousing.Thisislikelytobenefittheconstructionindustry,estateagentsandawholehostofothercompaniesthatrelyonhomeownerstobuytheirproductsorservices.However,thepersonalandeconomicargumentsgivenabovecanbeconsideredfromtheoppositeangle.Firstly,ratherthanthepositivefeelingofincreasedindependence,peoplewholivealonemayexperiencefeelingsofloneliness,isolationandworry.Theymissoutontheemotionalsupportanddailyconversationthatfamilyorflatmatescanprovide,andtheymustbeartheweightofallhouseholdbillsandresponsibilities.Secondly,fromthefinancialpointofview,ariseindemandforhousingislikelytopushuppropertypricesandrents.Whilethismaybenefitsomebusinesses,thegeneralpopulation,includingthosewholivealone,willbefacedwithrisinglivingcosts.Inconclusion,theincreaseinone-personhouseholdswillhavebothbeneficialanddetrimentaleffectsonindividualsandontheeconomy.(280words,band9)【思路分析】四段13句式1.导入段2句(背景+观点)duag.2.主体段15句(观点+论据1+例子+论据2+支持句)3.主题段25句(观点+论据1+支持句+论据2+支持句)4.结论段1句观点重申【模板解读】这是simon自己所最为擅长的雅思大作文四段13句式行文结构。几乎所有的大作文，均可以采用此结构完成。稍加变动的只是在主体段中的论据，支持二者的比重。一般来说，注意2个主体段中适时地加入1个例子即可。所以对于一个主体段5句式，根据论据是2个还是3个(一般不允许1个，否则论证过于单薄)simon常常采取的方式是这样的：方式1：观点+3个论据+1个支持句或例子(支持句或例子根据需要放置)方式2：观点+2个论据+1个支持句+1个例子小结：模板是可以用的，但这个模板指的是自己所擅长的一个总的文章结构，而不是具体的死板的句式结构。在这种擅长的结构中，加入自己对于topic的有见地的观点和论证过程，结果如上所示：280words,band9。【文章解读】具体到文章内部，既平淡无奇，却又暗藏沟壑。第一段的观点句thistrendishavingbothpositiveandnegativeconsequencesinequalmeasure第二段one-personhouseholds的同义转述，onanindividuallevel和Fromaneconomicperspective两个层面的论述。learntocook,clean,paybillsandmanagehisorherbudget多动词形成的一种强大的表现力。第三段观点句thepersonalandeconomicargumentsgivenabovecanbeconsideredfromtheoppositeangle此种方式的观点句非常少见。作者为我们展示了对一个观点持完全中立态度的方法。从首段开始的inequalmeasure到此处的canbeconsideredfromtheoppositeangle。第四段总结havebothbeneficialanddetrimentaleffectsonindividualsandontheeconomy。以上即是小站雅思频道为大家带来的9分雅思范文解读的全部内容。范文原载于simon博客。祝早日雅思写作学有所成，祝早日与雅思分手。雅思范文：考官9分雅思作文模板