浙江新高考作文续写公开课

Tocontinueastory续写之如何构思WhatisaSTORY/WhydowemakeSTORIES?•Astoryistoentertian,toamuse,toeducate,toenlighten.•Basically,astoryistodeliverapieceofmindtous.•So,howtodeliveritwell?Whatmakesastory?Simplyput:•Who•Where•What•When•How•WhyLiterarilyput:•Characters(Main&Minor)•Plot(Beginning,RisingAction,Climax,FallingAction&Resolution)ThinkForagoodstory,whichismoreimportant,thecharacter,ortheplot?•1.CaoRuiiseasy-goingandheisneverseengettingangry,but__________________________________________.•2.ShenMengyanisalady-likegirlwhenshe_________________________________,butwhen_______________shewill________________.•3.LiJinyingisverygentletoherdeskmateandshe______________________________________________.hewasalittleannoyedwhenhisfoodwastakenbyChengSihanisintheclassroominthedormbetotallyacrazyonealwaysspeakssoftlytohimCharacterizationPractice(Writing)•4.WangChenhaoisaquietboy,he________________.•5.ZhaoHanbinconsidershimselfTHEmosthandsomeintheworld,andhe___________________________________________.•6.AfterdiscoveringZhangKaihengisafterthesamegirlhelikes,thefearlessZhaoYonghao_____________________________________.cansitsilentlyforadaywithoutawordtohisdeskmate.looksdownuponalltheotherboysintheclasswhohethinksugly.felthemustdosomethingMakeitaone-sentencestory!•1.FramtonwantedtoclamhisnervesinMrsSamptons'house,onlyto_____________________________________.•2.Matildaputonthenecklaceandlookedfowardtothecomingoftheparty.Herdreamwas______________________________.•3.AlthoughLauriewantedtowinverymuch,whenshefoundJinny'stape,______________________________.bemadelosehisnervesbyalittlemischievousgirltobecomethequeenofthepartyoftheupperclassdidn'tletthedesiretowingetthebetterofherandreturnedittoJinny•4.Larryangrilyopenedthecardoor,tryingtorushawayfromhisterribleboss,buttofind_______________________•5.Timwasagoodstudentintheteachers'eyes,yethe__________________.•6.Itwasverylate,andHelenwasveryanxiousforherhusbandtoreturn,whenthedoorbellrang,she__________________.aChristmasgiftfromthebossneverlikesanyteacher'sclassLet'sreadandpayattentiontotheredpart.OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.Whatwouldshedoorexperiencenext?•criedforhelp?•regrettedwhatshehaddone?•triedtogobackonherown?•waitedforherhusband?•cameacrosssomebadorgoodguy?•...•Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.•Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.•Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.•Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.•Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.BegantoregretThingsgotworsemissherhusbandandfamily•Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.1.It'sluckyshehadsometingtodrinkandeat,butwouldtheluckcontinue?2.Whyweretheberriesmostdelicioustoher?•Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Helicopterstandsfor?•Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark.________________________________________•_______________________________________________________________________________•_______________________________________________________________________________•ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________•_______________________________________________________________________________•_______________________________________________________________________________