高考英语写作指导

高考英语写作指导Everysecondcounts!!!火眼金睛Whichoneisbetter?Why?Shealwayssingswhiledoingherwork.Shealwayssingswhenshedoesherwork.Aftereverythingwasfinished,theybegantochatwiththeelderlypeople.Witheverythingfinished,theybegantochatwiththeelderlypeople.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.Studyhard,andyouwillmakerapidprogress.（状从省略）(with复合结构)(祈使句+and)1.2.3.(A)(B)(A)(A)(B)(B)Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.IpassedtheEnglishexambecauseofyourhelp.Iwouldn’thavepassedtheEnglishexambutforyourhelp.(名词性从句）（虚拟语气）4.5.(A)(A)(B)(B)1.词组优先原则［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［修正］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.2.地道原则［原文］Throughtraveling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.［修正］Throughtraveling,Igained／obtainedalotofknowledge.写作中遵循的四项原则4、后高长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇。原词替换词3、避免重复原则［原文］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.［修正］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.hardverypayattentiontohappymoreandmorediligentlyratherextremelyattachimportancetodelightedenjoyabletheincreasingnumberofCorrectionHisfeverishigh.Hehasahighfever.Thepriceofthecomputerisexpensive.Thepriceofthecomputerishigh.ThepopulationofChinaismany.ThepopulationofChinaislarge.Therewereforeignerscametoourschool.Therewereforeignerswhocametoourschool.Ican’timaginewhatlifewouldbelikeifhavenotanyTVsets.Ican’timaginewhatlifewouldbelikeifwehavenotanyTVsets.Heclosedthedoorandhurriesawaytoclass.Heclosedthedoorandhurriedawaytoclass.very：pretty,much,quite,greatly,highly,extremely…important：vital,critical,essential,influential,meaningful,significant……think:believe,argue,assume,reckon,figure,pointout,holdtheviewthat…like:enjoy,befondof,beinfavorof,prefer….•first/second/third:第一：Tostart/beginwith,ononehand,initially；第二：Furthermore,inaddition,besides,ontheotherhand,followingthis,moreover,next;第三：Lastbutnotleast;then,thus,consequently;and/but:notonly…butalso,aswellas,however,nevertheless,otherwise,whereas,onthecontraryinmyopinion:personally,asfarasIamconcerned,astome,frommypointofview,frommyperspectivepeople,personsindividuals,characters,folksgoodpositive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstandingbaddreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse•Thing:affair,business,matterhelpfulbeneficialrewardingencouragemotivatethankappreciatebeinterestedinbecrazyabout/beabsorbedin/beaddictedtotryone’sbesttodosparenoeffortstodo1.Icoulddonothingbutwaithere.Ihadnochoice/option/alternativebuttowaithere.Let’sbeautifythesesentences!2.Hiscarelessnesswasthecauseoftheaccident.Hiscarelessnesscontributedtotheaccident.Hiscarelessnessaccountedfortheaccident.Hiscarelessnesswasresponsiblefortheaccident.Hiscarelessnessledtotheaccident.Hiscarelessnessresultedintheaccident.beveryimportantbevaluablebenefitsb.beingbuiltrealizebeofgreatimportancebeofvaluebeofbenefittosb.=bebeneficialtosb.beingconstructed=beunderconstructionbeawareof=beconsciousof一、肯定不如双否好二、陈述不如倒装妙三、主动不如被动巧四、从句不如分词傲要强化“语法、修辞”两个概念一、肯定不如双否好Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.1.Onlywhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectioncanwesolvetheproblemofpollution.2.Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.3.Diligentashewas,hefailedinpassingtheexam.4.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.二、陈述不如倒装妙NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.Ihaveneverseensuchawonderfulfilm.1.否定词开头：Notuntil/till5pm.didhecomehereyesterday.Itwasnotuntil/till5pm.thathecamehereyesterday.Hedidn’tcomehereuntil5pm.yesterday.Onthetopofhillstandsanoldtemple.Intheskyhanglittlestars.Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary.2.地点状语开头Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.3.Only+介词短语：OnlyinthiswaycanIimprovemyEnglish.Onlybytakingexercisescanwekeephealthy.4.形容词+as+主语+be动词：YoungasIam,Icanmanageit.Badlyinjuredashewas,hemanagedtotakedownthecar’snumber.Childasheis,heknowsalot.Tryashemay,hecan’tcatchupwiththem.MuchasIhavetraveled,Ihaven’tseenascapableasJohn.三、主动不如被动巧Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。Ifsuchisthecase,youshouldapologizetoher.改成独立主格或分词结构将是你作文中最大的亮点！四、从句不如分词傲口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。第一步，去掉连词if；Ifsuchisthecase,youshouldapologizetoher.第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格；第三步，改分词，is变成分词是beingSuchbeingthecase,youshouldapologizetoher.如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构。