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雅思写作强化时间:一个小时,无法超时上午九点考试,写作往往是11点开始考。一般学生考到这里的时候就蒙了。雅思写作考试是国内考试时间最长的一个,比托福等都长。图表作文只占了1/3的分数,那议论文就占了2/3。G类也要按A类要求去做。Academicwriting的特殊要求1.Someteachersdon'tknowhowtousecomputerstohelpthestudentseffectively.不能用缩写,凡是用了缩写的都是业余选手,专业选手必须要用,donot..Shouldn't也是错的,特别提醒大家,cannot中间没有空格。如果你不相信我说的话,我建议你可以翻下剑5剑6,一个缩写你都找不到。2.Historicbuildingsattractslotsofvisitorsandcanimprovelocaleconomy.大家觉得哪个是口语词汇。其中lotsof是特别口语化词汇,可以用numerous或者ahostof这两个单词修饰可数名词。Agreatdealof不可数。3.Theimpactoftourismontheseneighbourhoodsshouldbeanalyzed.下次你看到任何-ze结尾的都是美式英语,-se结尾的都是英式英语,而这里的neighbourhood是英式英语,而neighborhood是美式英语,有些同学会问是不是雅思考试当中只能用英式英语呢?不是这样的,在剑桥6中明确说了可以用英语或美式,但两者不能混合使用。我建议大家-our-se是英式的,-or-ze是美式的,这两者的区别是最常见的,其他的我们就没有必要掌握了。4.Childreninwealthyfamiliesaremoreandmoredependontheirparents.这里哪里不像学术写作呢。Moreandmore,给大家推荐一个词,increasingly.5.Seriouscrimesharmpeople'slives.雅思针对的母语是非英语的人,大家看考官的作文也不是很难。但这里serious高中词汇,crimeharm初中词汇,people和life就是小学词汇了,给大家推荐一个severe,criminalact,damagedestroy,impairpeople'shealth,humanbeing这个词太大,不建议使用,individual6.Theadvantagesofstoppinganimalexperimentsaremorethancontinuingthem.其中morethan换成outweigh7.Today,advertisementsareeverywhere.Therearemanywaystoadvertisements.简单句不适用,中间加个连词即可。8.Theenvironmentisbecomingworse.Wemustworktogethertodealwithit.因果关系,加because就很一般了哈,加个therefore.9.So,wemusttakestepstodealwiththeenvironmentproblem!So换成therefore,大家在写作中,千万不要用这么有激情的句子哈,好的雅思作文必定是冷静推理的来的,所以,感叹号去掉,还有,must换成should.10.WemustbefriendlytoothersbecausetheBiblesaid,treatyourneighboursasyouwouldliketobetreated.不能出现宗教语言。大作文,40分钟,最低要求240字,要求考高分的同学,建议270-280,7分以上的同学,我建议300字以上。大家刚看了雅思真题库,不知道大家判断出了自己认为难的部分。但是如果没有素材的话,你再好的基础都无法体现出来。TourismEducationGovernmentWomenandfamiliesLanguageandcultureTechnologyandthemediaDevelopmentandglobalizationCrimeAnimalsEnvironmentalproblems雅思不会出时事类的话题,只出争议比较大的话题。常见的词汇,常见的句式都可以通用。推荐大家掌握思考方法A.分类法Somepeoplethinkoldbuildingsshouldbedestroyedandreplacedwithmodernbuildings.Towhatextentdoyouagree?老房子可以分成要拆的,和不要拆的。这样子就有四段。这样子词汇可以成倍增加。开头用模板主题两段不要写一样长,一段可以多写一个理由,这样子你的倾向比较明显。Somehighschoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotouniversity.Towhatextentdoyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantage?分成文科类,理科类的B.替代法Somepeoplethinkmotorizedflightwasthegreatestinventioninthetwentiethcentury.Doyouagreeordisagree?形容词最高级/only/stop(ban)存在漏洞替代法飞机很伟大,但存在争议,主体第一段先让步,写两个理由,好处飞机的。主体第二段可以举电脑,手机,举三个反例Somepeoplethinkstricterpunishmentfordrivingoffendersistheonlyeffectivewaytoimprovesafetyontheroads.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?主体第一段可以先让步,效率很高,政府的投入很少第二段可以举三个反例,行人,警察,设施,只管司机是不够的,还要管其他的。Somepeoplethinkanimalexperimentationshouldbebanned.Towhatextentdoyouagree?主体第一段,残忍,传播疾病第二段,医学,制药工业,航天技术,心理学的研究。不用动物用人的话更残忍。现阶段无法禁止,只能尽量少用。C.裸奔法TMSTREEC(真正的裸奔是streaker音译啊)$Technology&efficiencyMindsoulSocietycrimeTimespaceRightsresponsibilitiesEnvironmenthealthEmploymentcompetitionCulturepopulationMoneyfun任何一个词汇都可以套用以上的词汇问题写作中可以引用的16句名人名言Education1“Achildmiseducatedisachildlost.--JohnF.Kennedy2Educationisnotthefillingofapail,butthelightingofafire.--W.B.Yeats3“Technologyisjustatool.Intermsofgettingthekidsworkingtogetherandmotivatingthem,Theteacheristhemostimportant.---BillGates.Technology“Thegreatestdangerinmoderntechnologyisnotthatmachinesbegintothinklikepeople,butthatpeoplewillbegintothinklikemachines.”――AlbertEinstein5“Aswegoforward,Ihopewe'regoingtocontinuetousetechnologytomakereallybigdifferencesinhowpeopleliveandwork.---SergeyBrinMedia6“Hewhocontrolsthemedia,controlsthemind.“---RupertMurdockGovernment7“Millionsofindividualsmakingtheirowndecisionsinthemarketplacewillalwaysallocateresourcesbetterthananycentralizedgovernment.–RonaldReaganTourism8“Theworldisabook,andthosewhodonottravel,readonlyapage.”SaintAugustineWomenandFamilies9“Thebondthatlinksyourtruefamilyisnotoneofblood,butofrespectandjoyineachother’slife.”RichardBachLanguage10“Topossessasecondlanguageistopossessasecondsoul.”–CharlemagneCulture11“Culturemeansthewideningofthemindandofthespirit.”–RuthBenedictGlobalization12“Globalizationisnotsomethingthatwecanholdofforturnoff.Itistheeconomicequivalentofaforceofnature—likewindorwater.”---BillClintonCrime13“Hewhodoesnotpreventacrimewhenhecanencouragesit.“---RomanphilosopherSenecaAnimals14Thegreatnessofanationanditsmoralprogresscanbejudgedbythewayitsanimalsaretreated.----GandhiEnvironment15“Manyanthropogenicactivitiesfoultheair,contaminatethewateranddevastatetheforests.”---quotedinNewsweek16“Don’tblowit--goodplanetsarehardtofind.”quotedinTimemagazine第三讲正确理解7种句子成分雅思需要的语法不是范围很宽,也不是很深,但对熟练度有要求。1Smokingisjustapersonalchoiceratherthanamoralissue.(主语可以是动名词,不定式和从句)2Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleagreethatgamblingisanunhealthyhobby.(谓语只能是动词)3Junkfoodimpairspeople’shealth(impair是破坏的意思,固定搭配health,宾语的组成成分和主语完全一样。)4Inrecentyears,theInternethasbeengaininginpopularityatanamazingrate.(定语,这也是个常用词汇)5Outdooractivitiescangreatlyimproveourhealth.(状语,修饰动词,修饰形容词,或是修饰整个句子的词都可以叫做状语。)6Shopping,annecessaryactivityineverydaylife,isfarmoreconvenientinthecitythaninthecountry.(同位语,并不是修饰这个名词,而是把这个名词的成分展开来说,是补充说明)7Ifoundtheemploymentsituationdisappointing.(补语,动词加名词,加形容词或分词,是常见的一种结构)正确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