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大学英语四级考试专题讲座WritingbyShirley评分标准•1.篇幅:120-150字•达不到字数要求的,要酌情扣1-5分;•90-99扣1分,80-90扣2分,70-79扣3分,60-69扣5分;•2.布局:三段式•只写一段为0-4分,只写两段0-9分;•3.评分标准:•2分---条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,但多数为严重错误;•5分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误;•8分-基本切题。有些地方表达思想不过清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误;•11分-切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误;•14分-切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错误。评分标准•Sample1•Astotheopportunity,thereistwodifferentopinions:first,someonethinktheopportunityislittleintheirlife.Secondly,someoneconsiderthatopportunityisexistingeverywhereeverybodyhassomekindsofchance.AccordingtomylifeexperimentandknowledgeIagreewiththesecondidea.Thereischanceforeveryoneinsomeunexpectedcase.Butifyouhasnopreparingforit,theopportunitywilllose.Thosewhohavemanypreparationandmuchknowledge,andsomegoodvirtue,mayIquiptheopportunityfirmly.Forexample,twomanareappealingforajobinacompany,andthereisonlyonevacantjobfortheonlyoneofthetwoman.How,thetwomanhasanopportunitytogetthejobbutthebosscertainlywouldacceptthegoodone.•SoIthinktheopportunityisexistingtoeveryone,butmoreopportunityisbelongstowhohasknowledge,experience,encourageandconfident.•该篇文章条理不清,思想紊乱,语言支离破碎,几乎没有正确的句子,得2分。评分标准•Sample2•Someonethinksthattheopportunityisveryfewforhimbecausehehasnevermeetthechance.Butotheronethinkstherearechanceshereandthere,theneveryonecanmeetopportunity.•Iresistthesecondopinion.Theretoaresomeopportunities,theimportantthingisthatifwecouldcatchthechancewhenwemeetit.Inourliveswehavealotofchoicethatneedustakeourheartto.Forexample,whenIwasalittleboy,myhealthwasverybad.Onedayateacheradvisemetojointhebasketballwithmyfriends.Myhealthbecomewell.SoIthinkthereareopportunitiesforeveryone.•该篇文章基本切题,但思想表达不清楚,有很多严重的语言错误,属于5分档。评分标准•Sample3•Somepeoplethinkthattheylackofopportunities,whileothersthinkthateveryonewillfacetosomeones.Iagreetothelatter.•Infact,wearelivingonthesameworld.Mostofusmustdealwithalotofthingseveryday.Somepeople'scircumstancesareeventhesame,sodotheopportunities.However,whysomeonecangraspitbutotherscannot?Allthisdependsonthecarefulobservationandgraspingtheopportunityintime.Forinstance,westudentsinourcollege,whosecircumstancearethesame.Weallshouldstudyalotofcoursesbeforewegraduate.Butsomeofusstudyhardinordertolearnmoreandwell,whilesomedon't.Intheend,thehard-workingstudentsgetthebetterjobs.Atthattime,therearesomestudentswhohavebeenplayingallthetimewillsaythattheylackofopportunities.Asweknowthatthehard-workingstudentsmakethebestuseoftheirtimeandtheyobserveeverythingaroundthemcarefully,sothattheycangrasptheopportunitiesintime.•Inaword,theopportunityisequaltoeveryday,andwhetherwecangraspitornotiscritical.•该篇文章基本切题,有些地方表达不清,文字勉强连贯,但语言错误较多,其中有一些为严重错误。属于11分档。评分标准•Sample4•Peoplehavedifferentviewsonopportunity.Somethinkthattherearefewopportunitiesforthemintheworld,whileothersholdthateverybodywillhavesomekindofchancesinhisorherlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iamforthelatter.Peoplewhoclaimthattheydon'thavegoodluckmaybethosewhoarenotabletotakechances.Maybetheyfailtorecognizeopportunitiesevenwhentheyareinfrontofthem.However,wisemanwisemencanseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforchancestoappear.Forexample,almosteverybodyhadwatchedapplesfallingfromappletrees,butonlyNewtondiscoveredtheLawofGravity.•Infact,noonecanbedeniedoftheaccesstoopportunity.Peoplemayhavegoodlucksometimes,butnoonecanbeluckyallthetime.Asasayinggoes,everydoghasitsday.Soeverybodycanhaveachancetosucceed.•Sowecanconcludethateverybodyhastheopportunitytosucceed,butitisuptohimselftotakeit.•该篇文章切题,思想表达清楚,文章结构条理,行文连贯,符合逻辑,属于14分档作文。六大原则•一、长短句原则•短句放在段首或者段末,可以揭示主题:•Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.•强烈建议:在文章第一段用一长一短开头;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句介绍主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式;文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。六大原则•二、主题句原则•三、一二三原则•1)inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,lastly•2)tobeginwith,furthermore,finally•3)tostartwith,inaddition,finally•4)firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast•5)foronething,foranotherthing(适用于两点的情况)六大原则•四、短语优先原则•两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点;其二、凑字数•Icannotbearit.可以用短语表达:Icannotputupwithit.•Iwantit.可以用短语表达:Iamlookingforwardtoit.六大原则•五、多实少虚原则•一定要多用实词,少用虚词(比较大的词)。good,nice空洞,generous,humorous,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospitable形象。再比如:走出房间空洞的词是:walkoutoftheroom•但是•小偷走出房间应该说:slip/sneakoutoftheroom•小姐走出房间应该说:sailoutoftheroom•小孩走出房间应该说:danceoutoftheroom•老人走出房间应该说:staggeroutoftheroom六大原则•六、多变句式原则•1)加法(串联)•2)转折(拐弯抹角)•3)因果•4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)•5)附加(多此一举)•Ms.Pan,anEnglishteacherwhohastaughtusforthreesemesters,iseasy-going.•6)排比(排山倒海句)•一个个排比句,一个个对偶句,一个个不定式,一个个短语,使文章有排山倒海之势!•Whetheryourtastesaremodernortraditional,sophisticatedorsimple,thereisplentyinLondonforyou.•Nowadays,energycanbeobtainedthroughvarioussourcessuchasoil,coal,naturalgas,solarheat,windandoceantides.写作类型•说明文:主题阐述、利弊分析、因果说明、解决难题和谚语解释•议论文:反驳类•应用文:演讲词、求职求学信、邀请信、感谢信及投诉信出题方式•1.提纲加图画或图表式作文:•Directions:Studythefollowingsetofdrawingscarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould•describethesetofdrawings,interpretitsmeaning,and•pointoutitsimplicationsinourlife.•Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)•温室花朵经不起考验出题方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