雅思写作-句子写作

雅思写作句子写作ByJimmyXu本课纲要1.句子的成分2.句子的类型3.句子的扩展4.快速学习从句5.高分语法手段一个引入JimmylovesSanya.怎样根据它写出一个漂亮的长句？01/句子的成分主语主语是句子要说明的人或事物。英语句子的主语比较花哨，可以由名词、代词、动名词（v+ing）、动词不定式（to+v）、what从句、that从句、how从句等组成。注意：动词原形不能作主语。AlldoctorsandnursesshouldgetvaccinatedagainsttheH1N1flu.Smokingisapersonalchoiceratherthanamoralissue（道德的问题）.BeingPhysicallyactivecanreducestresslevelsandlowerbloodpressure.Supportingchildrenwithmentorsandafter-schoolprogramswillgivethesechildrenopportunitiesandguidancethattheymightnotreceiveotherwise.Itishardtoreachaconsensus（意见一致）onthisaffair.Intheholidayseason,It’sadvisableto（应该去做某事）bookseatsatleastoneweekinadvance.Itiswelldocumented（有详细记录的）thatcollegestudentstendtogainweightandsufferfrommanystress-relatedillnessesbecauseofthestrongpressureonthem.谓语谓语说明主语的动作、状态或特征。与主语的花哨不同，谓语只能由动词构成。Inthisdayandage,anincreasingnumberofpeopleagreethatgamblingisanunwholesomehobby.Therearecertainlygangersintakingtimeoffatthatimportantage.宾语宾语表示动作行为的对象，跟在及物动词之后。能做宾语的有名词、代词、动名词、动词不定式、that从句、what从句、how从句等。即什么成分能做主语，什么成分就能做宾语。注意：还有另外一种特殊宾语，就是当动词是be时，后面的名词或形容词又叫做表语。Junkfoodundermines（破坏）people’shealth.Studiesreveal（显示）thatthereisadefinitelink（密切的联系）betweenobesity（肥胖症）andseriousdiseasessuchasheartattacks.Whatweshoulddoistotellchildrenhowtothinkinsteadofhowtomemorize（记忆）things.定语修饰名词的成分叫定语。常见的定语是形容词，还有一种用句子来修饰名词的定语，即定语从句。Inrecentyears,theinternethasbeengaininginpopularityatanamazingrate.Thosewhohavespentsometimeearningalivingortravelingtootherplaces,haveabroaderviewoflife.状语可修饰动词，形容词或者全句由副词，介词短语，分词短语或者动词不定式构成。Outdooractivitiescangreatlyimproveourhealth.Likeself-awareness,thisisalsohardtoachieve.补语所谓补语，在雅思写作中主要表现形式为宾补：v.+n.+n./adj.中的n./adj.部分宾补结构一般用来补充说明以下动词后面的宾语：find/make/renderThegraduatesfindthejobmarketfrustratingbecauseoftheeconomicrecession.Someindividualsareconcernedtheinternetwillrenderinternationaltourismobsolete（过时的）.Manyretailers（零售商）areworriedthattheupcomingnewmodelswillmakethesetablets（平板电脑）outdated.Peoplewithallergies（过敏）aresuper-sensitivetothingsthatmostpeoplefindharmless,includingpollenfromplants,dustandfood.同位语Shopping,anecessarypartofdailylife,isincreasinglytime-consumingduetothemultipliedoptionsavailabletoconsumers.同位语就是名词的后面跟一个小短语，解释说明这个名词，体现的是一种下定义或者列举的功能。Infact,theFedisnotconfinedbytheusualcheckandbalancesthatapplytothethreeofficialbranchesofgovernment–theexecutive,thelegislativeandthejudicial（行政、立法和司法，美国的三权分立机制）.一个引入JimmylovesSanya.主语+谓语+宾语02/句子的类型简单句简单句表达的信息简单，但又很明确。Tips:当你写了一串儿长句的时候，一个明确信息的简单句会让你的文章更加有生机。Thefailureoftheaspirationofthe1960shasled,inthedecadesincethen,toperhapsthemostself-centeredDreaminAmericanSociety.并列句并列句结构：主谓宾+主谓宾，中间用and/but/or将它们串联起来。Theirperspective（视角）wouldbenarrowandtheywouldnotbeabletoexchangeviewswithothers.Thesmokersmaybesegregated（隔离）inadifferentarea,butthesmokeitselfwilldriftintothenonsmokingsideoftherestaurant.复杂句复杂句的核心结构仍然是：主谓宾+主谓宾，但它与并列句的区别在于：句子开头或者中间的连词用更了加复杂的连词。写好最基础的复杂句（即一个主谓宾再加一个主谓宾，其中没有连词的主谓宾叫主句，用一个连词引出的主谓宾叫从句）才是雅思作文最核心的造句能力。InAmerica,peoplewhobelieveinhegemony(霸权)increasinglyturntomilitaryforcewhentheireconomicpowerbegintowane(减退).ThesesurveyfindingsmayunderstatethecrisisinIraqasthesocialstructureinthatcountrybeginstobreakdown.Itwouldbeamistakethough,toimaginethataDemocratic(注意当首字母D大写时通常是指美国民主党的)administrationwouldbeanydifferent.一个引入JimmylovesSanya.简单句（一套主谓宾）3.句子的扩展1.添加修饰成分2.添加并列成分3.构成并列句4.使用现在分词短语，不定式短语和名词性从句做主语，宾语或表语等1.添加修饰成分如形容词、副词、不定式短语、分词短语、介词短语、定语从句、状语从句等1.添加修饰成分1.Marywasa(n)_________girl.（形容词）2.Shesmiled_______.(副词）3.Tomlikedher_______.（副词）4.Hegaveherapicture_______________（定语从句）5.Sheputthepictureonthewall_____________________（状语从句）2.添加并列成分Marywasabeautifuland①girl.Tomand②likedherverymuch.Theysoonbecamegoodfriends.OnMary’sbirthday,Tomgaveherapictureand③Shesmiledhappily,④themandputthepictureonthewall.3.构成并列句Jackwasrich.Hehadhisowncompany.Hemadeafortune.HeboughtMaryadiamondring.NeitherJacknorTomknewwhatMarythought.DuringthatnightbeforeMary’sbirthday,JackhadadreaminwhichheaskedMarytomarryhim.Duringthesamenight,Tomcouldn’tgettosleepuntilhefinisheddrawingthepictureofMaryfromhismemory.3.构成并列句Jackwasrich,①hehadhisowncompany②madeafortune,③heboughtMaryadiamondring,④neitherJacknorTomknewwhatMarythought.DuringthatnightbeforeMary’sbirthday,JackhadadreaminwhichheaskedMarytomarryhim⑤Tomcouldn’tgettosleepuntilhefinisheddrawingthepictureofMaryfromhismemory.4.添加成分构成主宾表使用现在分词短语，不定式短语和名词性从句构成主语，宾语或表语1.Whatwehavenotachievedisbecomingrich.2.Toseeistobelieve,thusyoushouldfocusonthefact.3.Thecomputerisnotwhatplaystheroleinmiddleschooleducation.一个引入JimmylovesSanya.一个引入JimmylovesSanya.JimmyandCecilia(并列成分)bothloveandfrequently（副词）visit（并列成分）Sanya,abeautifulbaycityinSouthChina（同位语）.4.快速学习各种从句雅思写作评分标准中，语法多样性与准确性7分的要求是，使用多种多样的从句。4种以上的从句才是多种多样的。因此我们要在自己的作文中，有意识地去使用各种从句快速学习六种从句1.宾语从句Manypeoplebelievethatwehavedevelopedintoa“throw-awaysociety”.Whiletherearebothbenefitsanddrawbackstoamulticulturalsociety,itissafetosaythatprosoutweighthecons.Traditionally,theapproachhasbeentopunishcriminalsbyplacingtheminprisonstopayforw