四六级作文

评分标准•满分15分，分为2，5，8，11，14五档。•2分：条理不清，思维混乱，语言支离破碎，大部分句子有错误，且多为严重错误。•5分：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。•8：基本切题，有些地方表达不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。•11：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。•14：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。（不多于3个）分数对应•15-10014-94•13-8712-8011-74•10-679-608-54•7-476-405-34•4-273-202-14•考试时间：9：10~9：40——2+20+2命题范围•大学校园：读书学习，课余生活，心态处事•社会现象：环境保护，文化生活，社会风尚命题类型问题解决现象描述正反观点图表名言书信评判原则•内容不重要，语言才重要•框架明晰，逻辑合理•语言准确，搭配合理对策•主题句•层次性•短语原则•多样性•正文：总分总introduction--body--conclusion•introduction：亮点突出，立场鲜明•body：逻辑严谨，内容充实•conclusion：再次华丽，简短精悍文章时态•一般现在时•一般过去时•一般将来时•现在进行时•现在完成时图画作文写法•分段：一，描述——2二，引入——2三，论述——3/4四，结论——3•各段框架：•一：描述图片•二：重要性——个人观点•二：分论点1，2，3——（小结）•三：总结上文——措施(1，2)——展望•第一段首句写法：•As(is)shown/depicted/described/demonstrated/exhibited/inthe…,•Accordingtothe…•Ascanbeseenfromthe…•Itcanbeseenfrom…/Wecanseefrom…•第一段后半句写法：•Sbisdoingsth(adv)(with…)(in/at…),andXX,(adv)isdoingsth.•其余部分归入问题解决/观点对立类文章写法•（自引入观点部分起）问题观点文章写法•分段：一，引言——3二，论述——5三，结论——3•各段框架：•一：背景——普遍观点/现象——自己观点/重要性•二：主题句——分论点句1，2，3，4/总结句•三：总结上文——措施(1，2)——展望第一段范例第一句第一部分：（Whenmyeyescaughtthistopic,Iwasabsorbedinmeditation.)Withtherapiddevelopmentofthesociety/economy/media/ourera…第一句第二部分：youmayfrequentlyhearoftheterms/notions/seethephenomenonof事件inyourdailylife.Thecurrentdays/months/years/nowadays/recently/thesedays/modernsociety/recentworldhaswitnessed/seenaphenomenon/development/explosion/issue/tendency/problemthat事件Nothinghasarousedmoreattention/characterized/influenced/determined/shapedourdailylives(discussion)moredrastically/sharply/than事件does.•第二句：•It’ssuperficiallyplausible/acceptable/unimportant,butwhensubjectedtocarefulanalysis/consideration,itturnsoutthatitwillharm~inlongrun/itsadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages.•Mostindividualswouldmaintainitasasignificant/important/triflephenomenon…•Thereisaprevalent/widespreadbelief/acknowledge/nodenyingthat…•Itisnohardforeveryindividualtoobservethat…•第三句：FromwhereIstand/asforme/asIperceive/asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned/frommypersonalperspective,itisasignificantmatter/amatterofvitalsignificanceitisamatterwhichdeservesmore/extraattention…isofvitalsignificanceinatleast2/3aspects/morewaysthanone.第二段层次感最好用短语或副词来表达首先：atthefirstplace,firstofall,firstthingsfirst,firstandforemost,tobeginwith,tostartwith,foronething,ononehand其次：inaddition,additionally,plus,moreover,what’smore,furthermore,moreimportantly,moresignificantly,foranother,ontheotherhand,still最后：atlast,lastly,finally,generally,intheend,attheend,lastbutnotleast第一句：Several/many/anumberoffactors/reasons/causescanbeeasilyfoundtoaccountforthisphenomenon.•第二、三、四句：•主要从以下六个万能方面展开论述，如果需要，可以杂糅。•个人——团体——社会•经济/物质/科技——精神/心理情感/健康——教育/知识信息/生态•个人——团体——社会•1.asforindividuals,thosewho...foreg...~isthemosttypicalexample/casewhosesuccesscanbeattributedtohis(specialtalent/skill/abilityin)•2.intermsoffamily/company/enterprise,schools/troops/cooperation/culture,...•3.fromasocialaspect,thesurvivalandgrowthofagrouplike...ismainlydependentupon...•经济/物质/科技——精神/心理情感/健康——教育/知识信息/生态（第一种）•1.manyaperson/alargemajorityofpeople,especiallythe...,beeconomically/materially/physically/technologically/academicallybenefited.•2.intermsof/concerning/regarding/withrespecttomentality/psychology/emotions,onewillintrinsicallyfeelthatif...hewill...•3.whenitcomestothepointofeducation/knowledge/information,there'snodoubtthat...•第二种•1stly,sthwilleconomicallybenefitsb.because...2ndly,intermsofpsychology,onemayintrinsicallyfeelthatif...hewill...finally,whenitcomestothepointofeducation...•keywords:mentallysatisfied,belongingness,safety/security,self-esteem,respectandrecognitionfromthepublic,selfactualization,happiness,emptiness,loneliness,solitude,depression,selfconceit,self-centered,ignorance,extremeemotionalswing,pressure,tension•（段末总结句：）•Theinfluenceofallthereasonsaboveisbeyondcontroversy/anydoubt•Allthereasonsabovehavecontributedtothe…•Dueto/inconsequenceofallthereasonsabove,the现象isnowonderprevalent/arousesheateddiscussion•Sbisrightinsayingthat…•sbmadesenseinsayingthat…•Asthesayinggoes,•Inaword,justasthegreatthinker/myfriend/motheronceputit/stated…结论第一句第一部分Ascanbeconcludedfromthediscussionabove,…Whatcanbeconcludedfromthepreviousdiscussionisthat…Accordingtothepreviousdiscussion/takingallthefactorsintoconsideration/throughwhatwasmentionedabove/illustratedbythediscussionabove,wemaysafely/naturally/reasonablycometotheconclusionthat…第一句第二部分•severalreasonscanaccountforthephenomenoninquestion•thereareavarietyofunderlyingreasons/causes/considerationsaccountingfor/leadingtotheissue•第二句•AsfarasI’mconcerned,combinedefforts/painstakingyetrewardingeffortsshouldbemadeby...tosolvetheproblem.•Itgoeswithoutsayingthat某个原因isthekeyfactorinthat…•第三句•Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveoursocietymorepeacefulandharmonious.•Ifitshouldberealized,ourlifecouldbefloodedwithharmony.•Onlybydoingthiscanweachieveagloriousfuture/leadahappierlife/canourworldbecomeabetterone.•Bearingthepreviouspointsinmind,wecanspendourcollegeyearsfruitfullyandsuccessfully.第二类文章写法•分段：一，引言——3二，正面观点——4三，正面观点——4四，结论——3•各段框架：•一：背景——正面观点——反面观点•二：主题句——分论点句1，2，3，•三：主题句——分论点句1，2，3，•四：总结上文——我支持的一方——展望第一段