四级写作句子润色-final

昆明新东方学校昆明新东方学校CrackCET-4Writinglecture-4Bob昆明新东方学校文章的构思作文实战不同文体写作翻译实践√预测√√昆明新东方学校表达不是问题，问题在于错误太多，而麻烦则是：不知道自己的表达有误！昆明新东方学校Tasks句子的润色：词汇选择翻译实践昆明新东方学校句子润色篇昆明新东方学校准确选词在一些国家里妇女没有得到平等的权利。Womenarenotabletogettheequalrightsinsomecountries.Womencannotgettheequalrightsinsomecountries.Womenfailtogettheequalrightsinsomecountries.昆明新东方学校这不是解决能源危机的最好的办法。Thisisnotthebestwaytosolvetheproblemofenergycrisis.Thisisbynomeansthebestwaytosolvetheproblemofenergycrisis.决不昆明新东方学校我们应保护树木，不让它们受破坏。Weshouldprotecttreesfrombeingdestroyed.Weoughttoprotecttreesfrombeingdestroyed.Wemustprotecttreesfrombeingdestroyed.昆明新东方学校在旧中国，我们连一个钉子都造不了，更不用说制造机器了。InoldChinawecouldnotmakeanail,nottomention(making)machines.InoldChinawecouldnotmakeanail,letalone(make)machines.昆明新东方学校含有半否定意义的词语barely,hardly,few,little,rarely,scarcely,seldom,notall,noteveryone,noteverything几年前在冬天市场上很难见到新鲜蔬菜。Wecouldhardlyseeanyfreshvegetablesinwinteronmarketseveralyearsago.这些年轻人几乎不知道如何挑选优秀的书籍来读。Theseyoungpeopleknowlittleabouthowtochoosegoodbookstoread.昆明新东方学校不含否定意义的否定结构cannotbut,can'thelp,nosooner...than,not...until,innotime,noneotherthan,nothingbut我们只有面对现实。Wecan'tbutfacethereality.这些旧建筑将很快为现代化的公寓所代替。Theseoldbuildingswillbereplacedbymodernapartmentbuildingsinnotime.昆明新东方学校否定结构的倒装语序我们决不应当盲从。Onnoaccountshouldwefollowblindly.没有任何其他地方有我国这样高的学习热情。Nowherehastheworldeverseensuchgreatenthusiasmforlearningasinourcountry.昆明新东方学校＂Therebe＂结构错误：Therearemanypeopleliketogotothemovies.正确：Therearemanypeoplewholiketogotothemovies.昆明新东方学校错误：Therearedifferentkindsofvegetablescanbeboughtonthemarketbypeople.正确：Therearedifferentkindsofvegetablesthatpeoplecanbuyonthemarket.昆明新东方学校比较结构错误：Comparingwiththebike,thecarrunsmuchfaster.正确：Comparedwiththebike,thecarrunsmuchfaster.昆明新东方学校错误：TheclimateinWaltoniscolderthanothercities.正确：TheclimateinWaltoniscolderthanthatofothercities.昆明新东方学校同级比较In1998weproducedasmanycarsaswedidinthepreviousfiveyears.Wehaveaccomplishedasmuchinthepastthreeyearsaswouldhavetakentenyearsinthepast.昆明新东方学校比较级Childrennowenjoybettermedicaltreatmentthanbefore.Wecanlivelongerwithoutfoodthanwecan(live)withoutwater.昆明新东方学校表达原因的结构错误：Therealreasontoourfailureisnotfartoseek.正确：Therealreasonforourfailureisnotfartoseek.昆明新东方学校错误：Thereasonforthisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.正确：Thereasonforthisisthatsomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.昆明新东方学校表达原因的结构as,because,since,seeingthat,consideringthat,nowthat,notthatNowthatwehaveseenthesegreatachievementswithourowneyes,wefeelmoreproudthaneverofourcountry.昆明新东方学校Pollutionisstillaseriousproblem,notthatwedon'thavetheabilitytosolveit,butthatsomepeoplehavenotrealizedtheconsequencesoftheproblemNotthat…,butthat…昆明新东方学校用简单句表达原因结构Thereasonforthischangeisquiteobvious.Diligenceisthekeyfactorofsuccess.Idlenessistherootofallevils.Hewasashamedtohavemadethemistake.Hewasashamedthathehadmadethemistake.Hewasashamedbecausehehadmadethemistake.昆明新东方学校含有否定意义的词汇和短语介词类：against,beyond,but,except,without,...形容词和动词类：absent,deny,differ,different,fail,free,ignore,miss,refuse,thelast,usedto,reluctant,lack,want,...短语类：keep...from,protect...from,prevent...from,letalone,ataloss,invain,insteadof,outofthequestion,ratherthan,too...to,bynomeans,anythingbut,...昆明新东方学校常用词汇节选昆明新东方学校人们认为itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat+句子Itisgenerallybelievedthateducationplaysanimportantroleinone’sgrowth.昆明新东方学校越来越：beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof＋名词CheatinginexamshasincreasinglybeenaprobleminChina’suniversities.昆明新东方学校1.方便：convenient/convenience2.效率：efficient/efficiently/efficiency3.节省和浪费：savetime/money/space;economical,thriftwastetime/money/space;costly,lavish昆明新东方学校人的心理健康：independent,cooperative,competitive,considerate,confident,creative,sociable,perseverance;selfish,isolated,conservative昆明新东方学校人的身体健康health,disease,strong,strength,energetic昆明新东方学校娱乐colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainment,relaxtired,boring,lonely昆明新东方学校环境：environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty安全和危险：safe,danger,risk经验：experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety人际：humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely昆明新东方学校翻译实践昆明新东方学校翻译题介绍翻译题解题技巧共5题，每题1分。长句为主，重点在于从属结构句子结构词汇推敲语气语态固定搭配昆明新东方学校四级考试中的翻译形式：填空类翻译方法：通读、分析句子确定需要翻译部分的词性检查句子正确性昆明新东方学校举例说明（p9）Thesubstancedoesnotdissolveinwater_______（不管是否加热）。分析：不管是否加热，这种材料在水里都不会分解。“不管是否加热”在句中为状语。关键词“是否”.Thesubstancedoesnotdissolveinwaterwhetheritisheatedornot.昆明新东方学校Notonly____（他向我收费过高）,buthedidn’tdoagoodrepairjobeither.分析：notonly收费过高Notonlydidheoverchargeme,buthedidn’tdoagoodrepairjobeither.Notonlydidhechargemetoomuch,buthedidn’tdoagoodrepairjobeither.昆明新东方学校Yourlossesintradethisyeararenothing____(与我的相比）。分析：与…相比:比较----incomparisonwith----comparingwith----comparedwithYourlossesintradethisyeararenothingcomparedwithmine.Yourlossesintradethisyeararenothingincomparisonwithmine.昆明新东方学校Onaverage,itissaid,visitorsspendonly______(一半的钱)inadayinLeedsasinLondon.Onaverage,itissaid,visitorsspendonlyhalfasmuch(money)inadayinLeedsasinLondon.欠妥：Onaverage,itissaid