2017专四写作新题型特训-DAY-1

TEM4新题型写作特训Lecturer:写作题型变化1）命题形式略有变化，不再考查NOTEWRITING.2）写作模式有所变化Previously:陈述观点——论证观点——得出结论（重申观点或提出建议）NOW:概括双方观点，并提出自己观点——论证观点——得出结论（重申观点或提出建议）TACTICStogetexcellentmarks1.仔细审题，分析材料(2-3mins)2.列出提纲，确定布局(3-4mins)导语部分：引出话题，概括双方观点；主体部分：提出自身观点，并列出多条理由论证自身观点；结尾部分：重申观点或提出建议3.正式写作(30-35mins)4.检查并优化(2-3mins)材料作文Structureof1stpara.1.Describeaphenomenon+introducethediscussedtopic+opinionsfrombothsides;2.Introducethediscussedtopic+opinionsfrombothsides;PassengersShouldnotEatandDrinkonSubwayTrains•Previously:Inrecentyears,eatinganddrinkingonsubwaytrainshavebeenfoundmoreandmorecommon,whichhastriggeredmanyproblems.Thus,insomecitiespassengersareforbiddentodothatandviolatorswillbefined.AsfarasI’mconcerned,eatinganddrinkingonsubwaytrainsareindeedimproperbehaviorsandshouldbediscouraged,andthereareseveralreasonsaccountingformystance.Nowwhat???ShouldPassengers??•Inrecentyears,eatinganddrinkingonsubwaytrainshavebeenfoundmoreandmorecommon,whichhastriggeredmanyproblems.Thus,insomecitiespassengersareforbiddentodothatandviolatorswillbefined.Therehasbeenaragingdebateoverthenewregulation.Somebelievethateatinganddrinkingdon’tthreatthesafetyofthesubwayoperationandarenotagainstanylawandregulation.Otherswanttocurbthebadbehaviorsoastomakethepublicenvironmentcleanandtidy.Pros&cons里那么多points,如何总结归纳？Principlesumayfollow:1.Locatekeywords.2.Writeaone-sentencesummarywiththesekeywords.材料作文：导语部分写作1.大学生就业时该不该选择大城市。Whenitcomestothevastpoolofyoungandunderemployedcollegegraduates,theyarereallyonthehornsofadilemmaofchoosingaproperplacetostarttheircareer.TochooseamoderncitylikeBJandSH,ortostayinasmalltown,isatoughquestion.Somegraduatespreferbigcitiesforthemetropolisesremainastrongappealtothemwiththemultitudinousopportunities.Smalltowns,insomeothergraduates’opinion,createacomfortableworkenvironment.2.微信存在风险之我见。Nowadays,WeChathasgainedpopularity,especiallyitsfunctionofShake-ShakeandDriftBottlewhichallowsuserstorandomlyconnecttootheruserscloseby.However,somepeopleareworriedaboutthepotentialrisksbroughtaboutbyWeChat’spositioningfunctionwhenusingittosocializewithstrangers.材料作文：导语部分写作材料作文：导语部分写作3.是否应该让年轻人担任政府要职？Nowadays,whetheryoungpeopleshouldholdimportantpostsinthegovernmenthasbecomeacontroversialissue.Manycitizenstendtodistrustyoungleaders’workingabilitiesduetotheirageandlackofworkexperience.However,somepeoplebelievethatyoungstersareeligibleforleadershiprolesbecauseoftheirinnovationabilityandvitality.MAINBODY•大学生就业时该不该选择大城市。•Inmypointofview,Ibelieveyouthisforustostrive,andthere’snobetterplaceforustodosothanbigcities.Firstly,althoughtheworkingconditioninbigcitiesisfarmorearduous,wecanstillgivefullplaytoourinitiatives.….Secondly,inbigcities,there’remorechancesforgraduatestoimprovethemselves….Lastly,owingtothefactthatmanycompaniesandorganizationsathomeandabroadaresituatedinhighlydevelopedcities…微信存在风险之我见。AsfarasI’mconcerned,itgoestoextremetoabandonaninventionjustbecauseofitspotentialrisks,.Firstly,WeChatbringsaboutgreatconveniencetousersforcommunication....Secondly,WeChatpaysmoreattentiontoprivacythanothercommunicationtools…mainbodyStance:1.asfarasI’mconcerned;2.astome;3.frommyperspective;4.personallytalking;5.inmyview;6.frommypointofviewetc.Elaboration:1.Firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast;2First,second,third;3Firstly,secondly,thirdly;4Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand;5Inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,lastbutnotleast;6Initially,besides/furthermore,lastbutnotleastCONCLUSIONInconclusion,Istronglyholdthatitisbetterforgraduatestochooseajobinbigcities.Theabundantopportunitiestherewillenableyoungpeopletoexploittheirpotentialandrealizetheirdreams.Althoughlifeinbigcitiesmaybemoredifficultandarduous,alltheeffortsandhardshipwillbepaidoffifwearedeterminedtoseizetheopportunities.Allinall,whileembracingtheconvenienceofWeChat,wehavetotakemeasurestoguardagainstitspotentialrisks.Aslongasweareawareoftheriskswhichareinherentinsoftware,wecansafelyenjoythesurprisebroughtbyrecenttechnologicaladvancement.Howtowriteaconclusion1.Allinall2.Inanutshell3.Tosumup4.Inaword5.Inconclusion6.Inshort7.Inbrief8.Insummary1enrichyourrestatement2Hopes3SuggestionsRestateurviewBasedontheaboveexhaustiveelaboration/illustration,it'squitenational/rationalformetocometotheconclusionthat....