广东高考英语作文高分策略

WelcometoourClass!2013.10.25句子合并的语法精彩英语的句子按结构分为简单句、并列句和复合句。简单句有五个基本句型：1.主语+系动词+表语2.主语+谓语（不及物动词）（+状语）3.主语+谓语（及物动词）+宾语4.主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语5.主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语并列句是两个简单句通过and,or,but,so等连接在一起的句子。复合句是含有一个或一个以上的从句的句子。从句有名词性从句（主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句及同位语从句）、定语从句和状语从句。以上两个简单句，我们怎样才能合并成一个高级的句子呢？最重要的是，我们要理解句子间的逻辑关系，然后用并列句和复合句表达出来。请看下面两个简单句：1.他考试不及格。Hedidn’tpasstheexam.(主语+谓语+宾语)Hefailedintheexam.(主语+谓语+状语）2.他的家人很失望。Hisfamilyweredisappointed.（主语+系动词+表语）※因为他考试不及格，所以他的家人很失望。1.Hisfamilyweredisappointedbecausehehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_____从句的复合句)2.As/Becausehehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.(含______从句的复合句)3.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,sohisfamilyweredisappointed.（______句）4.Hisfamilyweredisappointedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.（that引导______从句的复合句，主要放在表示情感意义的形容词之后，如：sorry，，glad,happy,delighted,pleased等）原因状语原因状语并列原因状语..※因为他考试不及格，所以他的家人很失望。5.Thathisfamilyweredisappointedwasbecausehehadn’tpassedtheexam.（含______________的复合句）6.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_________________的复合句)主语从句及表语从句定语从句及表语从句※他考试不及格使得他的家人很失望。7.Thathehadn’tpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.(含_________的复合句)8.Itmadehisfamilydisappointedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_______的复合句，it是形式主语)9.Itwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexamthatmadehisfamilydisappointed.(_____句型，强调主语从句)主语从句主语从句..强调※他考试不及格，这使得他的家人很失望。10.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,anditmadehisfamilydisappointed.(________句)11.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,whichmadehisfamilydisappointed.(含________的复合句)并列定语从句※得知他考试不及格后，他的家人很失望。12.Afterhisfamilylearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.(含____________________复合句)13.Afterhisfamilyweretoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.(含__________________的复合句)14.Hisfamilyweredisappointedatthenewsthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_________________的复合句)时间状语从句和宾语从句的时间状语从句和宾语从句同位语从句的.当然，合并简单句不一定非要用并列句和复合句。我们也可以用含非谓语的动词的句子来表达。我们应该知道，状语从句、定语从句、名词性从句都可以相应的转换成非谓语动词做状语、定语、主语、宾语和表语。请将2、6、7、11、12、13等复合句转换成含非谓语动词的简单句。因为他考试不及格，所以他的家人很失望。2.As/Becausehehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Nothavingpassedtheexam,hemadehisfamilyfamilydisappointed.Withhimnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointedBecauseofhisnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.(现在分词短语的完成式作原因状语).(with的复合结构作原因状语)（介词短语作状语）..当然，合并简单句不一定非要用并列句和复合句。我们也可以用含非谓语的动词的句子来表达。我们应该知道，状语从句、定语从句、名词性从句都可以相应的转换成非谓语动词做状语、定语、主语、宾语和表语。请将2、6、7、11、12、13等复合句转换成含非谓语动词的简单句。2.As/Becausehehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Nothavingpassedtheexam,hemadehisfamilyfamilydisappointed.Withhimnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointedBecauseofhisnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.(现在分词短语的完成式作原因状语).(with的复合结构作原因状语)（介词短语作状语）..6.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含定语从句及表语从句的复合句)Thereasonforhisfamily’sbeingdisappointedwashisnotpassingtheexam.(“介词+动名词”作定语及动名词作表语)。7.Thathehadn’tpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.Hisnothavingpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.（动名词短语的复合结构作主语）.6.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含定语从句及表语从句的复合句)Thereasonforhisfamily’sbeingdisappointedwashisnotpassingtheexam.(“介词+动名词”作定语及动名词作表语)。7.Thathehadn’tpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.Hisnothavingpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.（动名词短语的复合结构作主语）.11.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,whichmadehisfamilydisappointed.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,makinghisfamilydisappointed.(现在分词短语作结果状语)12.Afterhisfamilylearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.Havinglearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.（现在分词短语作时间状语）.Afterlearningthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.（“介词+动名词”作时间状语）Hisfamilyweredisappointedtolearnthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(动词不定式作原因状语)13.Afterhisfamilyweretoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.Havingbeentoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Afterbeingtoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Hisfamilyweredisappointedtobetoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.（现在分词短语的被动式作时间状语）（“介词+动名词”的被动式作时间状语。）(动词不定式的被动式作原因状语)句子合并的方法多种多样，重要的是清晰句子结构,理清句子逻辑关系，学会分析句子成分。即时练习。根据汉语意思，完成英文句子。1.他很忙，他没来。1）___________hewasbusy,hedidn’tcome.2）____________(be)busy,hedidn’tcome.3)Itwasbecausehewasbusy_________hedidn’tcome.4)Hewasbusy,________hedidn’tcome.5)Hedidn’tcome_________hewasbusy.6)________hedidn’tcomewasbecausehewasbusy.7)Hisnot___________(coming)wasbecausehewasbusy.8)Thereasonwhyhedidn’tcomewas______hewasbusy.9)_________hewasbusymadeunabletocome.10)__________(he)beingbusymadehimunabletocome.11)Hewasbusy,and______madehimunabletocome.12)Hewasbusy,___________himunabletocome.13)Hewasbusy,_______(make)himunabletocome.2.杰克出生在英国，他在美国长大。1）JackwasbornintheUK,_________hegrewupintheUS.2)____________hewasbornintheUK,JackgrewupintheUS.3)_________(bear)intheUK,JackgrewupintheUS.4)Jack,_________wasbornintheUK,grewupintheUS.5)Jack,_________(bear)intheUK,grewupintheUS.写作的基本能力是“信息句子化”，在简单句的基础上运用语法知识合并句子，体现句子的多样化，增添语言色彩，从而使写作获高分。请看下面一篇基础写作学校英语论坛针对目前城市交通拥堵、污染严重的问题进行了“治堵方案大家谈”的讨论。以下是讨论概要：治堵方案1.少开私家车；多人共乘一辆小车。2.政府完善公共交通以方便市民。3.修建绿道（greenlanes）,鼓励骑自行车。好处：省钱、省时、节能、环保。【写作内容】请根据以上概要写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1.存在的问题；2.解决的方案；3.方案的好处。经过审题，我们可以列出以下的信息点：1）Wehadadiscussion.2