大学英语四级

大学英语四级写作策略英语四级考试作文评分标准1.本题满分为15分。2.阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷1至2份。3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可加1分(即9分)或减1分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。评分标准2分—条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分—基本切题。表达思路不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分—切题。表达思路清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分—切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。字数不足者，酌情扣分。99-90字：扣1分89-80字：扣2分79-70字：扣3分69-60字：扣5分59-50字：扣7分少于49字：扣9分题中已给的主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入缩写字数。只写一段者扣4分。评分样卷实例1：题目：Bicycles–AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提纲：1.为什么自行车在中国普及2.和汽车的比较3.自行车在中国普及BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffordabicycle,andtheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseittogotowork,orgototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimportantmeansoftransport.Thebicycle,comparedtothecar,isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn'tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisveryimportanttoChina,becauseofthelackofland.Itisn'ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn'tneedanyoil,anditcan'tcausethepolution.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmoremodembicycles.得分：8分BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople-manandwoman,oldandyoung-ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalledthekingdomofbicycles.Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.得分：14分Aseverybodyknow,Chinaabigdevelopingcountry.So,thelivingstandardofpeoplenot-veryhighatpresentpeople'sincomeisnotenoughfortheytobuycarsmotorcycles.Andbikeiseasytoride.Bicycleischeaperbemade.AndIthinkbicycletheusefultooloftransportinChinanow.So,itisquiteporpularandwildlyusedinChina'scitiesandcountrysidesthanthepersonaltransportation-tool.Bikeisakindofcleantoolsoftransport.Itnotusegasandotherenergers.Forthisreasonitnotcreatpolution.ButinfactinanywayBicycleisnotadvancedthancar.Ifitisraining,theriderwillsufferfromwet,ontheotherhand,bikecannotcarrymuchgoods.Accordingtotheourcountry'sdevelopingrate,IfirmlybelievethatBicyclewillreplacedbycarormotorcycleinthatnearlyfuture.ButundoubtfullyitcontinuetheimportantmeansoftransportinChinaforalongtime.得分：2分Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday‘sChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeople’sdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider‘sstrength.Therefore,bicyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Andabicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecontrary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimesthanacar.IthinkthepopulationofChina'sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becauseitwillbereplacedbyacar,abusandsooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,thenumberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit'squalitywillbeimproved.得分：11分PerhapstheamountofbicycleinChinaisthelargestintheworld.WhywasitsowidelyusedinChina?Ithoughttheanswerwas:thepopulationinChinaistoolargeandthepriceofbicycleismuchcheaper.Thethirdansweristhatthebicycleiseasierinusingthanothertransportations.Comparingwiththecar,thebicycleischeaperanditiseasierinusingthanthecar,butitsspeedislowerthanthatofthecar.ThebicyclewillberemainedforalongtimeinChinabutintheenditwillbedisappearedwiththeimprovalofpeople'slivinglevel.得分：5分常见题型1.提纲型作文2.段首句作文3.标题型作文4.关键词作文5.情景作文6.图表作文7.应用文写作1.提纲型作文四级考试中最常见的题型之一。根据给出的题目和提纲（中英文）写作。提纲可能是两条或者三条。明确作文的段落和层次，及各段的主旨和扩展的依据。写作中不能遗漏提纲提供的任何内容，也不能改动某部分的内容。1.提纲型作文具体要求：1.认真审题2.根据提纲确定主题句3.中心思想明确，层次清晰，连贯通顺4.此类作文因给了提纲，所以每个考生的思路差不多，顺着提供发展。写作时重点是选词、造句和成段1.提纲型作文例文：Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteacompositiononthetopic“HarmfulnessofFakeCommodities”.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinebelow.1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fakecommodities).为什么会出现这种现象？2.举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会的危害。1.提纲型作文Fakecommoditiesarequitecommononthemarkettoday.EverytimeweturnonourTVorreadnewspapers,wecomeacrossmanyreportsaboutfakecommoditiessuchasfakemedicines,fakediscsandfakefoodstuffs.Inordertogainhighprofits,somecompaniesproducefakecommoditiesevenattheriskofbeingdiscovered.Ontheotherhand,thelawsprohibitingfakecommoditiesarenotstrictly