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2014山东高考书面表达•某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动,你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文。内容包括:•1.谚语的含义;•2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。•①Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.•②Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.•注意:1.词数120-150;•2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称•参考词汇:谚语proverb【考点】考查半开放性作文•【写作指导】•文体:议论文,要求考生从Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.和Wherethere’sawill,there’saway.这两个谚语中选择一个作为话题说明自己的观点。•时态:一般现在时(在叙述个人经历时使用过去时)和第一人称。•本文要求考生首先理解谚语内容,然后根据谚语内涵从个人或者熟悉的人的经历中找出与之适合的事例。写作时注意语言组织以及串联词的使用。上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。三段式写作•第一段阐述谚语的含义,可以使用“主题句—拓展句”结构,再灵活运用恰当的过渡词,使你的观点层次分明,掷地有声。•第二段结合个人经历来谈对该谚语的看法,巧妙利用时间状语衔接上下文。此外,记叙过程中一定要保证动词时态的一致,避免因时态混乱而丢分。•第三段对自己的观点进行简短总结,再次扣题。•布局:•Para1theunderstandingofoneoftheproverbs•Para2myexperience•Para3conclusion•分析题目中的两句谚语如何着笔。第一句“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed”强调挚友的重要性。在理解其含义时,要抓住句中最有感触的词“inneed”和“indeed”,而在阐述时,可以联想真正的朋友应该具备的优秀品质,如“忠诚(loyalty)”“信任(trust)”等,然后一一作解释。•第二句“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”就是我们再熟悉不过的“有志者事竟成”。具体阐述时,可以从志向对一个人在哪些方面非常重要来着笔。引出谚语(必背):•1.Astheproverbgoes,“…”•2.Myfavoriteproverbis“…”•3.TherearemanyproverbsinEnglish,ofwhichIlike“…”most.Itmeansthat….•4.Asaproverbsays,“…”•4.Asapopularsayinggoes,“…”•5.Justasthesayinggoes,“…”•6.Thereisanoldsaying“…”•7.Asisknowntoall,“…”•8.Itiswellknowntousthat•9.Whatiswellknowntousisthat•翻译下面句子:•有一个著名的古老的谚语:Wherethere’sawill,there’saway”有志者,事竟成。它对我的生活产生了巨大的积极的影响。•(1)Thereisawell-knownoldsaying“Wherethere’sawill,there’saway”,whichhasagreatandpositiveinfluenceonmylife.•(2)Thereisawell-knownoldsaying“Wherethere’sawill,there’saway”,havingagreatandpositiveinfluenceonmylife.【一句多译】•有一个古老的谚语:Wherethere’sawill,there’saway”有志者,事竟成。它告诉我们要坚持自己的目标不放弃。•(1)Thereisanoldsaying“Wherethere’sawill,there’saway”,whichtellustosticktoourgoal.•(2)Thereisanoldsaying“Wherethere’sawill,there’saway”,tellingustosticktoourgoal.背诵一些常用的格言•Nopains,nogains•Amanisknownbythecompanyhekeeps•Everycoinhastwosides•Everythinghastwosides•Practicemakesperfect•AllroadleadtoRome•AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy•Don’tputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday•Failureisthemotherofsuccess•Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves•Knowledgeispower•Romewasnotbuiltinaday•Lifeisfullofupsanddowns•Twoheadsarebetterthanone•It’snousecryingoverspiltmilk范文欣赏1•注意:标题必写•Wherethereisawill,thereisaway•TherearemanyproverbsinEnglish,ofwhichIlike“wherethereisawill,thereisaway”most.Itmeansthatifyouhaveadreaminmind,youshouldkeeponworkingeventhoughyouencountersomedifficulties,andyouwillachieveyourdreamthroughyourgreatefforts.•Lifeisajourneyfulloftroublesandchallenges.WhenIwasa9grader,Ifailedtopasstheexamtogotomyidealhighschoolforfurtherstudy,whichmademeveryfrustrated.Atthattime,Ialmostgaveup.ThinkingofmydreamthatIwouldbecomeateacherinthefuture,Imadeupmymindtotaketheexamagainthenextyear.Imadeiteventually.••SuchanunforgettableexperienceencouragesmesomuchtoheadaheadallthewaythatIachievemoreandmoreinmylifebecauseIbearitinmindthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.•要点:•1.Wherethere’sawill,there’saway.告诉我们遇见事情要有坚韧不拔的毅力,坚持到底就可以获得成功。•2.个人经历:一次数学考试中遇见了一道难题,刚开始时想不到合适的解题方法,但是自己没有放弃,最后成功地算出了这道题。•3.总结范文欣赏2•Astheproverbgoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.Whenanopportunitycomes,itbringsapromisebutneverrealizesitonitsown.•Itisonlywhenyouhaveastrongambitionandsetouttoachieveitthatyourdreamwillcometrue.Threeyearsago,IhaddifficultyconqueringoralEnglishduetomypoorvocabulary.ShyasIwas,IstillmadeupmymindtoattendanEnglishspeakingcontest.HowtremblingIwaswhensteppingontothestagewhereaspotlightwaswaitingforme.Insidemymind,avoicetoldme,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.Gatheringupallmycourage,Icalmedmyselfdownandhadanexcellentperformance,speakingavery•fluentEnglish.AsenseofachievementroseandIbecamewildwithjoywhenIrealizedIhadwonthefirstprize.Ididit!Ihadmasteredtheimpossible.Intimeofdifficultiesandchallenges,yououghttohaveawill.Onceyouholdontothebeliefthateverythingisachievable,itbecomeseasytodowhatneedstobedone.范文欣赏3•Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.Myfavoriteproverbis“wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”,whichmeanswewillbeabletogetoverallkindsofchallengesifwecansticktoourdreamsandnevergiveup.MemoriesrushedtomymindwhenIsawthistopic.WhenIwasinhighschool,IhadgreatenthusiasmforEnglishandintendedtotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontest.•However,whenpreparingforit,Ifounditverychallengingtocollectinformationanduselanguagecorrectly.IwasabouttogiveupwhenmyDadnoticedandofferedthisproverbtome.Encouragedbyit,Isparednoefforttosolveeveryproblemwithconfidence.Ifithadn’thelpedme,Icouldn’thavewontheprizefinally.Inaword,notonlydoesthisproverbenablemetofaceuptothedifficulties1.首先要了解两句谚语的基本意思•2.其次要用短短150词将说明+记叙+议论结合起来,衔接流畅,有理有据,确实对考生的英语知识素养,思维能力和表达能力有着很高的要求。•考生在保证了“说明含义-回忆往事-总结议论”这一基本的逻辑分段清晰之后,只需结合“价值观“中的素材,非限制性定语从句、使让、非谓语动词、无灵主语、倒装、强调等常用句型,以及一些常见写作词汇的高级替换,就可以轻松的冲击高分档次。【逻辑分段】解释谚语意思(20词)记叙个人经历(80词)议论升华主旨(50词)【例文】•作文反馈练习:•你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动,该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(quote)并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子:”Yourfuturedependsonmanythingsbutmostlyonyou”:请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文:•1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法;•2.举例说明理由•题目结构和考法非常相似,差异在于一个举例说明,一个写自己的故事。其实说自己的故事就是举例的一种。•面对这种题目,根据当初给的范文,可以很好地改编。•当时给的范文如下:•IntheEnglishReadingWeek,oneofmyclassmatesrecommendedaquotetous,whichgoeslikethis:“Yourfuturede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