2017高考英语写作技巧点拨系列(八).ppt

写作技巧点拨系列(八)揣摩图画内涵,从容掌控图画作文【典例导练】(2013·江苏高考)请根据你对右面两幅画的理解,以“ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords”为题,用英语写一篇作文。你的作文应包括以下内容:1.简要描述两幅图的内容;2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解;3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。【写作指导】Ⅰ.常用句式(1)Whatisillustrated/reflectedinthepictureisthat...(2)Whatthepicturedescribesvividlyisakindofcommonphenomenonthat...(3)Thepicturevividlyreflectsaphenomenonwhereoursocietyisinbadneedof...(4)Seeingthepicture,Ican’thelpthinkinghowridiculous...is.However,whatisreflectedinthepictureisnotararephenomenoninmodernsociety.(5)Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor...(6)Theremaybethreefactorswhichcontributeto/accountfor/areresponsibleforthisphenomenon.(7)Thesecondreasonisthat...(8)Facedwithphenomenon/theseproblems,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewith...(9)Itishightimewetooksomemeasurestoputanendtothisphenomenon/theseproblems.(10)Onlyinthiswaycanwe...(11)First,...Second,.....Third,...(12)Thesocialproblemhasarousedgreatconcernamongpeople.(13)Weshouldraisepeople’sawarenessof...Ⅱ.黄金模板第一段:描述图画Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,___________.Thepicturetellsusthat___________________.图画的内容图片大致反映的意思第二段:解释、说明和分析图片Theimpliedmeaningofthepictureshouldbetakenintoaccountseriously.First/Tobeginwith,___________________,Second/What’smore,___________________.Lastbutnotleast/Finally,______________________________.Andthesocialproblem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon)hasarousedthegreatconcern/careofourwholesociety/world/allthepeople.揭示涵义/原因/结果1揭示涵义/原因/结果2揭示涵义/原因/结果3(如果有的话)第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法Inmyview/pointofview(orAsforme),weshouldtakesomemeasuresasfollowstodealwiththeproblemsshowninthepicture.First,weshould____________.Andthenwehaveto/must____________.Onlyinthesewayscanwesolvetheproblemof___________.具体的措施1具体的措施2具体的问题【审题谋篇】信息全而不漏【佳句锤炼】词句精而高级1.图画中的信息是“百说不如一干”。(一般表达)Themessageinthepicturesis“Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”(主语从句和同位语从句)____________________________________isthemessage___________________________________Whatthepicturesdescribevividly/conveythat“Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”2.我们的地球正受到严重的破坏。我们该怎么做，是说空话还是采取切实可行的措施呢？(一般表达)Ourearthissufferingseveredamage.Whatshouldwedo,justhaveemptytalkortakepracticalmeasures?(不定式作状语+高级词汇+定语从句)Ourearthissufferingseveredamage.Shouldwejust_____________ortakepracticalmeasures_________theearth_____________________________?paylipservicetoprotectwhichissufferingseveredamage3.为了改善环境，我们应该立即采取措施，如停止砍伐树木。(一般表达)Toimprovetheenvironment,weshouldtakeimmediateaction.Weshouldstopcuttingdowntrees.(过去分词作状语)________________________________,weshouldtakeimmediatemeasures,suchasstoppingcuttingdowntrees,tobettertheenvironment.Facedwithphenomenon/theproblem4.我们应该把书和体育用品捐给需要的儿童，而不是空喊口号。(一般表达)Weshoulddonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildreninneed.Weshouldn’tshoutemptyslogans.(it作形式主语+定语从句)Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,_____________________donatebooksandsportsgoodstochildren_________________________.itismoremeaningfultowhoneedthem/needingthem5.我们应该严格自觉遵守交通规则，红灯停，而不是抱怨交通拥堵。(一般表达)Weshouldstrictlyandvoluntarilyobeytrafficrules.Weshouldstopattheredlight.Weshouldn’tcomplainabouttrafficjams.(虚拟语气+倒装)_________________________strictlyandvoluntarilyfollowtrafficrulesand______________________________justcomplainabouttrafficjams.Itishightimethatweshouldundernocircumstancesshouldwe【连句成篇】过渡巧而自然ActionsSpeakLouderthanWordsPeoplecelebrateEarthDaydifferently.InPicture1,amanistryingtoputupabanneronalonelytreesurroundedbystumps,butinvain,whilePicture2showsacoupleplantingtreeshappily.Themessageconveyedhereisclear:“Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”Ourearthissufferingseveredamage.Shouldwejustpaylipserviceortakepracticalmeasurestoprotectit?Theanswerisdefinitelythelatter.Immediateactionshouldbetaken,likestoppingcuttingdowntrees,tobettertheenvironment.Actionsareimportantinotherfields,too.Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,itismoremeaningfultodonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildreninneed.Weshouldstrictlyandvoluntarilyfollowtrafficrules,stoppingattheredlightratherthancomplainingabouttrafficjams.Onlywhenwematchourwordswithactionscanwemakeadifference.【命题专家如是说】图画类作文解题关键图画类作文以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点,其难点在于如何将图画语言转化为逻辑语言。只有读懂图画所蕴含的深刻道理,才能有的放矢。需注意以下几点:1.仔细观察图画。图画中的每一个要素对表达图画的寓意都有提示作用,注意图画中每一个要素提供的信息。2.品味图画文字。图画配有的语言文字言简意赅,认真思考这些文字所隐含的观点,使之成为弄清图画寓意的钥匙。3.挖掘深刻内涵。图画背后隐藏的深刻寓意才是图画要揭示的真正主题。挖掘出图画的寓意是写作的关键。4.适度联想发挥。图画作文一般要求做适度的联想发挥,以使上下文更好地衔接。但一定要根据图画做到合情合理。5.描写虚实结合。对图画中的内容分清主次,详略得当。6.做好衔接过渡。在适度发挥的前提下,注意连词的使用,达到浑然一体的效果。