雅思-G类书信&大作文写作讲义

新东方在线[]网络课堂电子教材系列雅思写作G类1雅思写作G类作文讲义主讲：张弛新欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材张驰新随笔分类：雅思写作互动及欣赏区新闻“报”料雅友大联盟必下载文件：小新课堂笔记version8.0雅思回家复习计划插入雅思写作答题纸Task1(G)TypesofLetter1.Complaint2.Enquiry3.Request4.Apology5.Acknowledgement6.Suggestion7.Jobapplication8.Recommendation9.Self-introduction10.InvitationTacticsforTask1(GeneralTraining)新东方在线[]网络课堂电子教材系列雅思写作G类2StructureDearSirorMadam,——unknownauthority/strangerDearMr./Ms./Prof/Dr(Surname),——knownauthorityDear(name),——friend/relativeRe:(position)——onlyforapplicationletterAsoneofyour(identity)s,Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmy(emotion)——formalIam(name),writingtoyoufor(purpose)——informalQuestion1&2——explanationofthewholeeventandexpressionofsomeemotionQuestion3——offeryourownsolutionLookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyandthanksforyourgreatefforttodealwithit.Yourssincerely(Englishname)EmotionWordsComplainRequestThanksApologyInvitationApp/RecomJunkWordsdiscomfortconcernthanksregretinvitationconfidencedissatisfactionconfusionappreciationsorrowdisturbanceinterestthankfulnessgriefannoyanceenquiryirritationMediumWordsuneasinessperplexityremorserequestself-assurancediscomposurebewildermentrepentanceboldnessFavorablewordsdisconcertionsolicitudechagrinpropositionaplombperturbationbafflementcontritionsolicitationpoisevexationcompunctionlamentation新东方在线[]网络课堂电子教材系列雅思写作G类3Complaint–说明意图+解释情况+解决方案例：Youliveinaroomincollegewhichyousharewithanotherstudent.Youfinditverydifficulttoworktherebecauseheorshealwayshasfriendsvisiting.Theyhavepartiesintheroomandsometimesborrowyourthingswithoutaskingyou.WritealettertotheAccommodationOfficeatthecollegeandaskforanewroomnextterm.Youwouldpreferasingleroom.Explainyourreasons.1.Iamwritingtocomplainabout…/that…2.Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwithsomebodyaboutsomething3.Iammostreluctanttocomplain,but…4.IfeelsorrytotroubleyoubutIamafraidIhavetomakeacomplaintabout…Examples:IamwritingtocomplainabouttheserviceontheBeijing-ShanghaitrainwhichItookonAugust16,2001.IamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionabouttheWalkmanIboughtattheduty-freeshopinyourairportonFebruary14,2005.Endofacomplaintletter1.Iwouldbegrateful/Ishallappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldtakethematterintoconsiderationandsolveitatyourearliestconvenience.2.Iwouldliketohavethismattersettledbytheendof…/within14days.Writingtask1Youliveinaroomincollegewhichyousharewithanotherstudent.Youfinditverydifficulttoworktherebecauseheorshealwayshasfriendsvisiting.Theyhavepartiesintheroomandsometimesborrowyourthingswithoutaskingyou.WritealettertotheAccommodationOfficeatthecollegeandaskforanewroomnextterm.Youwouldpreferasingleroom.Explainyourreasons.DearSirorMadam,IamwritingtoinformyouthatIwishtomoveintoanewroomnextterm.Iwouldpreferasingleroom,asIfindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.Imustexplainthatthereasonformydissatisfactionismyroommate’sinconsideratebehavior.Foronething,hisfriendsareconstantlyvisitinghim;foranother,heregularlyholdsnoisyparties.Inaddition,hesometimesborrowsmythingswithoutaskingme.Inthesecircumstances,Ifinditdifficulttoconcentrateonmystudies,andIamfallingbehindinmyassignments.Iamsureyouwillagreethattheonlysolutionisformetomoveintoaroomofmyown,whereIwillbefreefromsuchdistractions.Therefore,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldfindasingleroomforme,preferablynotinthesamebuildingbutasneartothecollegecampusaspossible.新东方在线[]网络课堂电子教材系列雅思写作G类4Yourssincerely,JaniceKennedy考生样卷：DearSir,DearMadam,Iamwritingyoutoexpressmydissatisfactionwithmyroommateandrequesttoanotheraccommodationnextterm.MymainproblemisthatIcannotstudyinmyroombecausemyroom-matealwayshasfriendsvisiting.Healsohasparties,whichusuallyendsearlyinthemorning,severaltimesaweek.Furthermoreheoftenborrowsmythingswithoutaskingme.Icannotacceptthissituationanylonger.EspeciallybecauseIhaveveryimportantexamsnexttermandIreallymuststudyhard.ThisiswhyIwouldbeverygratefulifIcouldhaveanotherroomnextterm.Itwouldbemostconvenientformenothavingtosharemyroomwithsomeoneelse.Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyousoon.YoursfaithfullyDeeWhite考官评分：6.5分修正版：DearSirorMadam,Iamwritingyoutoexpressmydissatisfactionwithmyroommateandrequestalternateaccommodationstartingnextterm.ThemainproblemisthatIfinditextremelydifficulttostudyinmyroombecausemyroommateconstantlyhasfriendsvisitingandthrowloudpartieswhichoftenlastuntilearlymorning.Thisdoesnotjusthappenonceortwiceamonth.Hehasthesepartiesseveraltimesaweek,eversincethebeginningoftheterm.Inaddition,myroommateoftenborrowsmythingswithoutaskingme.Evenafternumerouspoliterequests,therehasbeennochangeinmyroommate’sbehaviour.Ithasnowgottentothepointthatwedon’teventalktoeachother.Thishasaddedalotofunduestress,whichhasstartedtotakeitstollonmystudies.BecauseIhaveveryimportantexamsnextterm,Imustrequestanewroom,andIwouldliketohaveasingleroom,ifthatisatallpossible.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyouwouldconsiderthisrequestatyourearliestconvenience.Thankyouforyourhelpinthismatter.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,新东方在线[]网络课堂电子教材系列雅思写作G类5SamZhangWritingtask1Youhaverecei