最新高考英语专题解析课件-基础写作[感激答谢]

1.winfirstprize获得一等奖2.benervous紧张的3.calmdown静下心来4.getthroughsth完成某事5.mywarmestthanks我最诚挚的谢意6.lookforwardto盼望相关短语7.makegreatprogress取得很大进步8.thanksto多亏9.befamiliarwith熟悉10.thankyoufor谢谢你……11.tomydelight让我高兴的是12.makefulluseof充分利用13.allthebest一切顺利14.facetoface面对面15.ofgreatimportance很重要16.contactme与我联系1.Ithoughtofallyoureffortstohelpmeduringthepastfewmonths.我想到你在过去的几个月里对我的尽力帮助。2.I’mwritingtoshowmygreatgratitudetoyourhelpduringmystayinEngland.我此次写信是想向你在我呆在英国期间对我的帮助表示感谢。相关句式3.Thankstoyourhelp,Ihavelearnthowtocookwesternfood.多亏你的帮助,我学会了怎样做西餐。4.Pleaseacceptmywarmestthanksandlookforwardtoyourreply.请接受我诚挚的谢意,并且盼望你的回复。5.Youaresohelpfulandwarm-hearted,andpleaseacceptmysincerethanksagain.你热心助人,请再次接受我真诚的感谢。6.I’mwritingtothankyouforreturningtomemywalletandmobilephone.我写信是感谢你归还我的钱包和手机。1.感谢信作为书信的一种形式,态度客气,字里行间充满感激之情,通常也是开篇点出写信的目的,可使用“Iamwritingto...”句型作为书信开头,如：(1)Iamwritingtoexpress/showmygratitudetoyourhelpwithmyfinalessay.(2)Iamwritingtothankyouforinvitingmetoyourweddingparty.(3)IamgratefultoyouforyourencouragementandIamwritingtotellyouthatIhavegotpromotioninmyjob.2.积累该类写作常用词组搭配：(1)表示“感激”：thanksb.forsth.;showone’swarmestthankstosb.forsth.;showone’sgratitudetosb.forsth.;begratefultosb.forsth.(2)与“帮助”有关的表达：helpsb.(to)dosth.;helpsb.withsth.;offersb.help;givesb.ahelpinghand3.为了充分说明道谢原因,感谢信通常涉及对某件事情的陈述或对某人性格的描写和赞美。描述事件时,可使用连词：when,beabouttodo...when...,before,after,assoonas等等。描述人物时,可使用“so+adj./adv.+that”句型或“apersonwith+n.”结构,如：Youweresopatientthatyoushowedmeallthewaytothecanteen.Youwereapersonwithpatience,showingmeallthewaytothecanteen.4.在句中适当增加表示褒义的短语和句型,以避免平铺直叙,如：(1)Thankstoyourhelp/effort,Iovercamethedifficultyandcamefirstinthecompetition.(2)Tomydelight,youweresohelpfulthatyougavemeadviceandhelpedmesolvetheproblem.(3)Ifitwerenotforyourhelp,Iwouldnothavesucceededasareporter.(2011广州二模)假设你是李华,昨天下午参加了英语才艺大赛(TalentShow),并获得一等奖。以下是参加情况及获奖感受：1.看别人比赛时：紧张；2.自己表演时：想起Mike数月的努力与帮助,冷静；3.在最有挑战的问答环节：谨记Mike的建议,顺利；4.宣布结果时：兴奋,遗憾Mike不在场。[写作内容]据以上介绍,给回美国度假的外籍教师Mike写一封感谢信,内容包括：1.告知获奖；2.介绍参赛情况；3.表达获奖感受。[例题导写]1.动笔写作前,把引入部分和写作内容有机联系起来。学生必须自行归纳、判断,在引入部分找到对应的写作内容后,把信息点划分为五个句子：(1)告知获奖—昨天下午参加了英语才艺大赛(TalentShow),并获得一等奖;(2)介绍参赛情况—看别人比赛时：紧张;(3)介绍参赛情况—自己表演时：想起Mike数月的努力与帮助,冷静;(4)介绍参赛情况—在最有挑战的问答环节：谨记Mike的建议,顺利；(5)表达获奖感受：宣布结果时：兴奋,遗憾Mike不在场。2.翻译各句重点词组。句1：(1)参加_______________________(2)获一等奖____________________________________winfirstprize,becomethechampionof...,comefirstin...takepartin,participatein句2：(3)紧张___________________句3：(4)表演________________________(5)想起__________________________thinkof,recall,itoccurredtosb.that...,msth.occurredtosb.become/grownervoussb.beonthestage;sb.giveperformance(6)冷静___________________________句4：(7)有挑战的____________________(8)谨记________________________keep...inmind,remembersb.calmdown,sb.calmoneselfdownchallenging,demanding(9)顺利_____________________________句5：(10)宣布结果_________________announcetheresultsth.gosmoothly,sth.gowell(asplanned)[参考范文]DearMike，I’mwritingtotellyouthatIwonfirstprizeintheEnglishTalentShowyesterdayafternoon.BeforeitwasmyturnIwatchedtheothersandgotverynervous.ButwhenIwasonthestage,Ithoughtofallyoureffortstohelpmeduringthepastfewmonthsandgraduallycalmeddown.Althoughthequestion-and-answersectionwasthemostchallengingpart,Igotthroughitquitesmoothlybyrememberingallyoursuggestions.WhenthejudgeannouncedtheresultIwasveryexcited,butitwasreallyapitythatyouwerenotthere.Pleaseacceptmywarmestthanks.IlookforwardtoyourreturntoChina.Yours，LiHua3.描述参赛过程时,考生可考虑使用不同连词引导的时间状语从句或非谓语结构,使文章更具连贯性和层次感。为避免表达单一和重复,建议不要多次使用when和and。BeforeitwasmyturnIwatchedtheothersandgotverynervous.WhenIwatchedothersperformingonthestage,Iwasverynervous.Whilewatchingothers’performance,Ibecameverynervous.Onthestage,IcalmedmyselfdownassoonasIrecalledyoureffortandhelpinthepastfewmonths.4.描述心情时,可使用：(1)系动词+表语：grow/become/turn/feel+nervous/calm/excited(2)转换词性：calm(动词)oneselfdown,beoverwhelmedwithexcitement(名词)[能力提高]1.请根据中文,完成句子翻译。(1)Iwasoncesopooratmaththat______________________________________________________________.(我落后于其他同学,从而对自己丧失信心)Ifellbehindotherfellowstudentsandthuslostconfidenceinmyself(2)Wereitnotforyourkindnessandpatience,__________________________________.(我就不会取得那么大的进步)(3)I’mwritingto_________________________________________________.(真诚感激你帮助我的数学学习)Iwouldnothavemadesuchgreatprogressshowmysinceregratitudeforyourhelpwithmymathstudy(4)____________________________________________(毕业后,我们很多年都没有见面了),anduponthecomingofThanksGivingDay,Iwouldliketosendyoumybestwishes.(5)Asmydeskmate,youweresowillingtohelp,_________________________________________________________.(每天放学后都帮我复习当天课堂上的内容)helpingmegooverwhatwastaughtinclasseverydayafterschoolWehaven’tmeteachotherforyearssincegraduation2.请把上题五个句子按顺序填入以下括号中,完成感谢信的正文部分。DearChenWei，()()()()()Pleaseacceptmythanksandlookforwardtomeetingyouinyourweddingparty.Lovefrom，Bobo31524假如你是李华,曾到英国参加夏令营培训,住在Mrs.Smith家里,夏令营令你受益匪浅,以下是你参加夏令营后的简单小结：学习上收获了解到地道的英语表达,提高了英语口头表达能力,进一步了解西方文化生活上收获学会煮简单西式菜式,变得更加独立,并学会如何充分利用时间[写作内容]圣诞节将至,请给Mrs.Smith写一张圣诞卡,内容包括：1.寄贺卡的目的：表达你的感激；2.你参加夏令营后学习上的收获；3.你参加夏令营后生活上的收获；4.呈上节日祝福。[参考范文]DearMrs.Smith，I’mwritingt