新东方四级写作精讲

新四级考试整个流程时间：9：00－11：20写作题与快速阅读45分钟9:55收答题卡110:00听力(35’)、阅读理解(25’)、完型或改错(15’)、中英翻译(5’)11:20收答题卡2选择题务必用2B浓度的铅笔作答；所有非选择性试题（即写作、填空等）务必用黑色字迹签字笔作答大学英语四级作文四个基本考点1、切题----所谓切题是指在形式上诸如段落、字数、文体、格式等方面满足题目要求，并在内容上没有偏差。2、表达清楚、条理清晰--------本要求考查学生对文章结构的掌握，要求文章主题观点明确，有头有尾，论证说明安排有主次，有轻重。3、文字通顺，连贯性较好----本要求考查学生对过渡句和连接词或词组的掌握和运用，要求文章句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀。4、基本无语言错误------本要求考查学生语言基本功的掌握，包括语法与拼写两部分。写作的标准分：35分：条理不清，思路混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。40分：基本切题，表达思想不清楚连贯性差，有较多严重的语言错误。45分：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，期中有一些是严重错误。55分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。60分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。70分最高分作文误区使用太复杂的句型以致出错太多想象，内容细节过多，文章冗长书写不规范高分策略1.构思简单少犯错误（考核语言表达能力）2.好的开头和结尾开头找好切入点，快速入题，简洁明快结尾不要拖泥带水，适当评论，点睛之笔3.用好关联词并列：and,besides,aswellas,inadditionto,notonly…butalso…递进：furthermore,what’smore,what’sworse转折：but,while,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,however合理安排写作的12个句子第一段1：分析现象并对现象的影响程度作以简述2：提出自己观点，注意句子的准确简洁3：引出下文，留有悬念（模版句）第二段1：承上启下，引出后文分析2：分析原因句1+2+3（简单6句，符合3句）第三段1：总结上文提出观点，加以强调2：提出设想或建议，提升点睛常见错误归纳一、主语错误1.主语缺失1)Inourcountryfeelsveryfree.Peoplefeelfreeinourcountry.2)Inmyhometownaren’tverybusy.Peopleinmyhometownareverybusy.2.非名词主语1)Richdoesn’tensureahappylife.Beingrichdoesn’tmeanahappylife./Wealthdoesn’tensureahappylife.2)Keeptwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.Keepingtwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.3.主谓错位1)Readingbookscanacquireknowledge.Peoplecanacquireknowledgefrombooks.2)Nowpeople’slivescan’tleaveTV.Nowpeoplecan’tdowithoutTV.二、谓语错误1.重谓语1)Inourmodernsociety,therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated.Inourmodernsociety,manyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated.2)Povertymakesmanypeoplecan’tstudyabroad.Povertymakesmanypeopleunabletostudyabroad./Povertymakesitimpossibleformanypeopletostudyabroad./Povertypreventsmanypeoplefromstudyingabroad./Manypeoplecan’tstudyabroadbecauseofpoverty.3)Therearemanypeoplethinkthat...Therearemanypeoplewhothinkthat...或者直接说Manypeoplethinkthat...2.非动词谓语1)Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersagainstit.Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersareagainstit.2)Itissaidthattheplaceworthestouring.Itissaidthattheplaceisworthtouring.3.主谓不一致1)IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachmeCollegeEnglish.IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachesmeCollegeEnglish.2)Iuseadiskbecauseitholdplentyofdata.Iuseadiskbecauseitholdsplentyofdata..三、冠词错误1)Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.Inmyopinion,thefutureofthebicycleisverypromising.2)Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlythegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadones.Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlygoodbookstoreadandnevertouchbadones.四、代词错误1.偷梁换柱1)Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,youshouldnotplagiarize.Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,heshouldnotplagiarize.2)Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveusandtheywillleaveusalong./Ifyoucheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.2.指代不明1)Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,whichnobodybelieved.Hegaveareason,whichnobodybelieved,fornotattendingthemeeting./Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,areasonwhichnobodybelieved.2)Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdentheyhavetobear.Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdenstudentshavetobear.五、形容词、副词错误1)Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferently.Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferent.2)Surprisingenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.Surprisinglyenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.六、分词误用1)Comparingwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.Comparedwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.2)Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewingthroughmycamera.Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewedthroughmycamera.七、修饰语误置1)SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforlearningEnglishpeople.SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforpeoplelearningEnglish.2)Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovetothecountrysidethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgases.八、非谓语逻辑关系1)Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,peoplehavegreatlyimprovedtheirlivingstandard.2)Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,theletterwaspostedatonce.Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,Ipostedtheletteratonce.九、搭配错误1)Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.2)Crowdedtrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.Heavytrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.十、残缺句1)Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob.Thenyoumustpassthejobinterview.Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob,youmustpassthejobinterview.2)Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners.Becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant.Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners,becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant.常用连接词比较对