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沙河中学张爱琴PeopleintroductiontopicEmployment.Introducingpeople.ExaminationIntroduction.Application.speechmodel…SocialproblemtopicEducation.Healthcare.EmploymentEnvironmentprotection。Advertisement.Harmonioussociety.Sports.familyetc.examination说明类.对比类.图表类model…SchoollifetopicLearning.life.Schoolintroduction.Examination.Friendship.birthday.Experienceonthewayhome.Activity.travel.etc.examinationAletter.Notice.diary.Speech.Debating.Noteetcmodel…Openingcomposition一.说明类1贫困地区的教育引起了人们极大的关注，2由于受传统观念的影响,经费投入不足,师资短缺等诸多因素的制约，义务教育在这些地区的开展面临着种种困难，3我们应该想办法去解决目前的这种状况范文点评①Educationhasbecomeacommonpartofpeople’slife.②AndnineyearscompulsoryeducationhasalwaysArousedthegreatestconcern.③Whatimpressesusmostisthateducationinpoorareasisfacingmanydifficulties.④Thereasonsarevaried.Amongthevariousreasons,traditionalideaplaysanimportantpart.Forexample,peopleintheseregionsareunwillingtosendtheirdaughterstoschool.becausethecustomistoeducateboysrathergirls,⑤What’smore,investmentineducationislimitedbecauseofpoverty⑥.inaddition.mostteachersdon’twanttoworkthere.⑦whenwetalkabouthowtosolvetheproblem⑧ontheonehand,governmentshouldprovide“complete,freeandcompulsoryprimaryeducationforallchildrenintheseregions.⑨ontheotherhand,weshouldtrytochangetheiroldideas⑩1nbrief,reachingthetargetofnineyearscompulsoryeducationthereneedallofustoworktogether.①确定主题②缩小范围③引出要说明的事情④阐述原因⑤原因之一⑥原因之二⑦谈论措施⑧措施之一⑨措施之二⑩表明观点,发出倡议①________hasbecomeacommonpartofpeople’slife.②__________hasalwaysarousedthegreatestconcern.③Whatimpressesusmostis_________.④Thereasonsarevaried.Amongthevariousreasons,___________playsanimportantpart.Forexample,___________⑤What’smore,__________⑥.inaddition___________⑦whenwetalkabout__________________⑧qntheonehand_______________________⑨ontheotherhand_____________________⑩1nbrief,_________________________依葫芦画瓢写作文：目前，农村医疗保健改革正在进行，但由于各方面的原因，一些农村居民正忍受着疾病的折磨，请以”HealthCare”为题，谈谈你的看法。注意：1短文应包括文中所提供的主要信息，适当发挥。2词数不少于120字。（源于SparkEnglish)二.对比类：关于”上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗”的话题，我们班学生展开了激烈的讨论。①Recently/atpresent/now/Asweallknow,…/asfarasIknow,______havehadaheateddiscussiononwhethersbshould…②…holdtheviewthat…/arefor…/thinkthatFirstofall…then…inaddition,③However,inothers’opinion./othersthinkthat…should../othersareagainsttheopinion.Because…first/second/third/④Inshort/Inaword./Afterall,,Iwanttosay/Asthesayinggoes,/inmyopinion.It’sgood/badforsbtodosth/FromthismatterIcometorealize…60%的学生认为增长学识,提高素养.利于择业30%的学生认为成功的路不只一条10%的学生认为学费高.就业难范文点评①Atpresent.wehadadiscussionaboutwhetheritistheonlywayoutforseniorstudentstogotocollege.②Sixtypercentofusconsideritverynecessarytogotocollege.itcanwidentheirknowledgeandimprovetheirqulitiesonlyinthiswaycantheyfindbetterjobsaftergraduation.③thirtypercentofstudents.,holdtheviewthatitisnousegoingtocollege,becausethetuitionistohighfortheirfamilytoafford.what’smore,it’sratherhardforcollegegraduatestoseekjobs.However,④Thirtypercentofthestudentsbelieve”AllroadsleadtoRome.”Thereforeitdoesn’tmakeanydifferencewhethertheygotocollegeornot.⑤Inmyopinion,wecanreceiveabettereducationatcollegesothatwecanserveourmotherland.①点题②60%的同学的意见综述③30%的同学的意见综述④10%的同学的意见综述⑤进一步发表自己的看法1995年1997年1999年2001年某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图一.层次清楚首尾呼应我们根据衔接词本身在文章中起到的作用，主要分为以下四类，“起”“承”“转”“合”。※表示“起”的词/词组：用于开篇引出扩展句。如：atfirst/atpresent/currently目前/first/inthebeginning起初/tobeginwith首先,第一/generallyspeaking/itissaid(believed/reported/thought---)※有关“承”的常用词语：用来承接上文。如：after/afterthat/afterwards此后/afterafewdays/also/too/atanyrate无论如何/atthesametime※有关“转”的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的意见。如：afterall/allthesame/anyway/atthesametime/but/bythistime此时.词语多样，※有关“合”的常用词语：用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。如：aboveall最重要的是/accordingly于是/asaconsequence/asaresult/ashasbeennoted/asIhavesaid/atlast/atlength/byandlarge一般说来/bydoingso如此/briefly/inmyopinion/inbrief.二.词语多样，句式多变（见附页）三.检查到位主语WatchTVtoomuchisharmful.WatchingTVtoomuchisharmful.？/ItisharmfultowatchTVtoomuch.谓语IwasnotlostheartinlearningEnglishIdidn’tloseheartinlearningEnglish.ShepickedallflowersgivehisparentsShepickedallflowersandgavehisparents.Ihopehimtohelpme.Iwishhimtohelpme./Ihopehecanhelpme.Theschoolbuiltin1938.汉语化的句子Iamverylikeit.Ilikeitverymuch.Wecantakeabusgohome.Wecantakeabustogohome./Wecangohomebybus.StudentswillonfootthepurplemountainStudentswillwalktothepurplemountain.Studentsaregoingtothepurplemountainonfoot.Ourschoolisastudygoodplace.Ourschoolisagoodplacetostudy.画龙点睛四.运用谚语,名言Allisnotgoldthatglitters.闪光的东西并不一定都是金子Betterlatethannever迟做总比不做好Constantdrippingwearsawaythestone滴水穿石Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.苍天不负有心人Manyhandsmakelightwork.众人拾柴火焰高Neverdothingsbyhalves.切勿半途而废Preventionisbetterthancure.惩穿于已然Trueloveisgiving,nottaking.真爱是付出,而不是索取.Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量Lookbeforeyouleap.三思而后行It’snevertoolatetomend有志者事竟成Timeandtidewaitfornoman时不待人Don’tjudgeapersonbytheclotheshewants不能以貌取人Seeingisbelieving眼见为实Wellbeginningishalfdone良好的开端是成功的一半Timefliesnevertoberecalled光阴一去不复返Timeismoney.时间就是金钱Failureisthemotherofsuccess成功是失败之母Nothingistoodifficultlfputyourheartintoit世上无难事,只要肯攀登Thefirststepisthehardest万事开头难Agoodmedicinetastesbitter良药苦口