高考英语作文基础过渡性训练高三英语课件

连贯与句式的运用连贯(coherence)指文章语意的通顺和语言形式的紧密衔接并符合一定的逻辑关系。要使文章前后衔接紧密，可采用以下方法：提示1：恰当使用关联词如when，so，if，because，sothat等。提示2：巧妙使用意思有联系的词或短语如First,Second,Third,Soon,What’smore,Asaresult等。提示3：适当使用过渡性语句Thereasonsareasfollows.Everycoinhastwosides.Ontheotherhand,Onthecontrary,连接词、句型的选择1、递进关系（肯定）（否定）2、时间一……就不久然后同时Besides/What’smore/Also/Inaddition/FurthermoreWhat’sworse/Evenworse/Worsestill/TomakemattersworseThemoment/Ondoing/assoonas/immediately/directlyItwasnotlongbefore…/Afterawhile/SoonAfterthat/Then/So/NextAtthesametime/Meanwhile3、转折4、顺序5、条件6、强调however,/but/onthecontrary/Ontheotherhand/yetFirst/Second/Third/Last/Next/ThenIf/Aslongas/Solongas/onconditionthatItwas…that/who…/Soshedid./Idohope…/Shedidhelpme./Itreallyworked.7、其它不得不做某事havetodosth./havenochoicebuttodosth./havenothingtodobutdosth.有必要做某事Thereisnoneed(forsb.)todosth./Itisnecessary(forsb.)todo…最好做某事You’dbetterdosth.It’sbettertodosth.做某事没困难havenodifficultyindoingsth./havenotroubleindoingsth.感谢某人thanksb./bethankfultosb./expressone’sthankstosb./begratefultosb./Thanksto…求助某人turntosb.forhelp/asksb.forhelp/withthehelpof/withone’shelp惊奇Toone’ssurprise/Insurprise/Surprisingly/only+不定式（表意外结果）原因如下（很多）Thereasonsareasfollows.Therearemanyreasonsforit.浪费金钱（时间）It’sawasteofmoney/time…结果Asaresult/Therefore/Thus/So总结Inaword/Inshort/Aboveall/Afterall表达观点Inmyopinion/Ithink/Ibelieve/I’msure/IguessTask1请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreetheheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacarIcouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlongthepolicecame.4.heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.5.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?,dowritetomesoon.6.Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping.,wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest.7.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.,Isaved$80.8.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.,itmaymakeusfat.What’smore/Besides/Also/Furthermore/Inadditionwhensothat/inorderthatbeforeAssoonas/Immediately/Directly/ThemomentIfnotAsaresult/ThereforeWhat’sworse/Evenworse//Tomakemattersworse句式的运用：利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。■基本句型：1、感叹句e.g.1)HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter.2）Whatakindboyheis!3）Howdisappointedhewas!2、强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.3、倒装句e.g.1)Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.2)Therecomesthepolicecar.3)Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.句式的运用：利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。■基本句型：4、省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.5、with短语e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.6、定语从句e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.7、各种名词性从句e.g.That’swhatIshoulddo.8、各种状语从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Task2按要求改写下列句子,使其更具文采。1.Tomsavedthedrowninggirl.(强调)2.IhopeIcanpayavisittoyounextyear.（强调）3.Tomwaspuzzled.（感叹）4.Itisgreatfuntoclimbthehill.（感叹）5.TomandMarylikesingingsongs.（肯定倒装）6.Johnlikestostudyandplay.（否定倒装）7.Soonthefirefighterscame.（表时间句型）ItwasTomthat/whosavedthedrowninggirl.IdohopeIcanpayavisittoyounextyear.HowpuzzledTomwas!Whatgreatfunitistoclimbthehill!Tomlikessingingsongs,sodoesMary.NotonlydoesJohnliketostudy,but(also)helikestoplay.Itwasnotlongbeforethefirefighterscame.Task3WritingPractice请你给《中国日报》写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。原因：1、家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。看法：1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。要求：1、不要逐字逐句翻译。2、语句要连贯通顺。3、字数100个左右。Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.Mostfamiliesarepoorandcan’taffordtheireducation.Theyhavetostayathomeandmakemoney.Someparentsthinkdaughtersneedn’tgotoschool.Theydon’tletthemgotoschool.Somechildrenarenotinterestedintheirstudiesandwouldn’tliketogotoschool.Allthechildrenincludinggirlsshouldbeeducated.Thewholesocietyshouldpayattentiontoit.They’llplayanimportantpartinthefutureofourcountry.诊断：[优点][缺点][药方]1、词能达意；2、语句表达基本正确。语句不够连贯1、使用常见句型；2、每两个句子之间使用关联词或过渡词。Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.▁▁▁▁▁▁▁▁▁。▁▁▁，mostfamiliesaretoopoortosendtheirchildrentoschool.▁▁▁▁,theyhavenochoicebuttostayathomeandmakemoney.▁▁▁,someparentsthinkthereisnoneedfortheirdaughterstogotoschool.▁▁▁▁,theydon’tletthemgotoschool.▁▁▁,somechildrenarenotinterestedintheirstudies.▁▁▁▁▁▁,somewouldn’tliketogotoschool.▁▁▁▁▁▁,allthechildrenincludinggirlsshouldbeeducated.▁▁▁▁▁▁,thewholesocietyshouldpayattentiontoit▁▁▁they’llplayanimportantpartinthefutureofourcountryoneday.ThereasonsareasfollowsTherearemanyreasonsforthis.FirstAsaresultSecondSo/ThereforeThirdWhat’sworse/WorsestillEvenworse/TomakemattersworseInmyopinionWhat’smore/BesidesbecauseTask4Writingbyyourselves下列图画描述的是两位少先队员上星期日去少年宫的途中经历的事情.请据此写一篇短文,参加由英语组组织的英语作文竞赛。练习一、（一）简单句翻译1．我们在学习怎样用电脑。We’relearninghowtousethecomputer.2．他和他的朋友经常查字典。Heandhisfriendalwayslookupinthedictionary.3．请给我一杯水,好吗？Pleasegivemeacupofwater,willyou?4．老师让我回答了这个问题。Theteacheraskedmetoanswerthequestion.5．我们的国家变得越来越强大。Ourcountryisgettingstrongerandstronger.6．你的到来使我很高兴。Yourarrivalmakesmeveryhappy.7．村庄里有许多绿树和湖泊。Therearemanygreentreesandlakesinthevillage.8．我们不应该歧视弱者。Weshouldnotlookdownupontheweak.(二)并列句翻译1.我喜欢读书，他喜欢玩玩具。（while）Ilikereadingwhilehelikesplayingwithtoys.2.孩子们非常高兴，或者至少看起来很高兴。（or）Thechildr