作文评分标准CET-4

大学英语四级测试作文评分标准2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。8分：基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。大学英语四级测试作文评分标准11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。字数不够扣分。（各段已给出的主题句均不得计入）段落不够扣分。SaynotopiratedproductsTherearealotofpiratedproductsinourmarketnow.Itmadeabadeffecttoourlivesandalsomademanycompanieshadabigloss.Aroundmyschool,therearellotofpiratedCDsellers.Abigdeelofstudentshaveboughtthem.Theydidthisbecausetheyarepooratintellectualproperty评分样卷(1)rights.Theyonlywantedtobuycheapthingbutthisiscopyrightinfringement.IfmoreandmorepeoplebuypiratedCD,thosesingerwon’tsingbecausetheycan’tearnenoughmoneytoworkatmusic.Thenwehavenomusic.Howteribleareourlivesiftherearenomusic.Ican’timageit.Whatwecando?Wemustsaynottopiratedproducts.Wesouldn’tbuythosepiratedproductsandtellourfriendsnottobuytoo.Wecanforcethelawofintellectualpropertyrightssothatwedidn’tinfringesb’scopyrightthenwe’llneverdoitagain.Let’ssaynotopiratedproducts.评分样卷(1)SaynotopiratedproductsTherearealotofpiratedproductsinourmarketnow.Itmadeabadeffecttoourlivesandalsomademanycompanieshadabigloss.Aroundmyschool,therearellotofpiratedCDsellers.Abigdeelofstudentshaveboughtthem.Theydidthisbecausetheyarepooratintellectualproperty评分样卷(1)rights.Theyonlywantedtobuycheapthingbutthisiscopyrightinfringement.IfmoreandmorepeoplebuypiratedCD,thosesingerwon’tsingbecausetheycan’tearnenoughmoneytoworkatmusic.Thenwehavenomusic.Howteribleareourlivesiftherearenomusic.Ican’timageit.评分样卷(1)5分基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。Whatwecando?Wemustsaynottopiratedproducts.Wesouldn’tbuythosepiratedproductsandtellourfriendsnottobuytoo.Wecanforcethelawofintellectualpropertyrightssothatwedidn’tinfringesb’scopyrightthenwe’llneverdoitagain.Let’ssaynotopiratedproducts.评分样卷（2）Nowadayspiracyisbecomingaseriousproblem.Piratedproductscanbeseeneverywhere,includingbooks,videotapes,andmanydigitalproducts.Thisreallydoesharmtosociety.Manyconsumerschoosepiratedproductsbecauseoftheirlowprices.Buttheydon’trealizeintellectualpropertyrightsshouldbeprotectedandthiskindofbehaviorinfringescopyrightsofthosewho评分样卷（2）producedtheminitially.Becauseofpiracy,manywritersandsingershavetostopwritingorsinging.Becausethemorebookstheywriteorthemoresongstheysing,thebiggerlosstheywillmake.Theyhavelostconfidenceofthemarket.Ontheotherside,piratedproductsalwayshavepoorqualitysothatpeopleboughtthemdon’treallybenefitfromthelowprice.评分样卷（2）Fromtheharmsmentionedabove,weshouldtakeactionstofightpiracy.First,thegovernmentcanmakelawstopunishthosesellingpiratedproducts.Second,themarketcandeclinethepricetoencouragepeopletobuyrealproducts.Lastbutnotleast,moreeducationshouldbegiventohelppeoplerealizetheharmofsellingorbuyingpiratedprducts.11分切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误评分样卷（3）Nowdays,piratedproductscanbeseeneverywhere.Piracyhasbecameabigproblemofoursociety.Whatisitsreason?Willitdobadtooursociety?Weknowintellectualpropertyrightsisveryimportant.Assoonasyouwriteanovel,ordrawapainting,youwonpropertyright.Becauseyouspentyourtime,wastedyouenergyandthatwasaprogressofarts,otherscan’tusewithoutyouagree.评分样卷（3）What’stheresultifothersdirectlycopyyourproduct?Hecangetwealthandfameeasily,howeveryou—thefatheroftheproductwillgetnothing.It’sclearthatcopyrightinfringementisinlegal.Ifthiskindofbehaviorcannotbecontrolledeffectively,noonewillwriteanovelcarefully.Socialmarketwillbedisturbedorevenleadtoadestruction.评分样卷（3）8分基本切题，思想表达尚清楚，基本连贯，有个别严重的语言错误及用词不当，但可以理解。Thenhowshouldwedo?SeveralmonthsagomanypopularsingerscallontheirfansnotgoingtobuypiratedCDs.AlthoughpiratedCDsarequitecheaper,theydobadtothepopularsongworld.Asaadult,weshouldknowwhatisright.Ifwecontinuetobuypiratedproducts,wewillbreakthelaw.评分样卷（4）Presently,thephenomenonofpiracyisquiteserious.Inmanyplacesweseepeoplepeddlingpiratedproducts.Anditwouldsoundstrangeifonesayshehasneverusedanypiratedproducts.Whatfactorsaccountforthisphenomenon?Wecanconsideritfromtwoaspects.Ontheonehand.Piratedproductsaremuchcheaperthancopyrightedones.Sotheyareveryattractivetopeople,especially评分样卷（4）.youngsters,whoarenotfinanciallywell-off.Ontheotherhand,withhighlydevelopedtechnology,itisnotdifficulttomakepiratedproducts.Withoneauthorizedcopy,theillegalproducerscanmakethousandsofcopiesataverylowcost,thusmakinghugeprofits.Inthiswayintellectualpropertyrightsareseriouslyinfringed.Honestproducerswilllosethemotivationtodevelopnewproducts.评分样卷（4）Meanwhile,piratedproductsareoftenlowquality,thusdamagingtheinterestsofbuyers.Canwedosomethingtostopthephenomenon?Yes!Firstly,weshouldstopusingpiratedproducts.Thentheirmarketswillperish.Secondly,thegovernmentshouldtakemoreeffectivemeasurestobanpiracy.Finally,thepriceofauthorizedproductsshouldbelowered.Ifthesesuggestionscanbeputintopractice,wecancertainlystoppiracy!14分切题，文章通顺，语言规范。句法有一定变化，用词适当。有个别小错，但不影响理解。检查语法1.动词—时态，语态是否正确2.名词—单数、复数、可数、不可数，专有名词大小写3.主谓一致—分清主句和从句，使各自的主谓一致4.形容词、副词—用法是否正确，比较级与最高级是否得当5.介词、连词—搭配是否正确6.其他关联词—用法是否正确7.单词拼写8.标点符号九句话模板1.引导句（套入标题）2.主题句3.展开句（简单描述）4.主题句（提出论点）5.6.7.论据1论据2论据38.总结句（概括全文）9.结束句（重复主题第一段第二段第三段Classwork套用九句话模板StopSmoking（1）吸烟的