北京中考英语作文模版

北京中考英语作文模版一、写作评分标准分值：15分难易度：易中难12分容易13-14分中等15分难原则：分档给分第一档：(15~13分)完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。第二档：(12~9分)基本符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。第三档：(8~5分)部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四档：(4~0分)与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。阅卷老师的实际操作14分作文用词准确，句式变换多样如：长短句搭配使用谚语的使用被动句的使用语法错误2个以内13分作文句型使用较多且正确连词使用恰当且正确语法错误少于3个时态使用正确书写工整规范字数80-100词12分作文–标准线主旨正确，要点齐全语法错误2个以内卷面、字迹清楚字数看起来不是很少11分作文主旨准确，少要点2-3个语法错误扣1分时态使用不正确扣1分字迹潦草扣1-3分大小写和标点符号错误扣1分字数不够扣1分9–7分作文主旨表达不太清楚，要点不全语法错误较多(多于5-6个)字迹潦草、卷面不太清楚大小写和标点符号有错误6–4分作文主旨、要点几乎没有找到只有个别句子能看懂字数明显不够3–0分作文几乎白卷，有几个单词拼对了3分写字了，但是一个也看不懂2分交白卷0分：1.作文中人称不明确，扣2分。2.文章时态出问题，1-2个错扣1分，3-5个错扣2分，最高可扣4分。3.学生感悟与文章所写事件不匹配，扣3分。4.写作不分段，扣5分。5.字迹潦草，字迹不清楚，根据程度，可扣1-2分。6.文章详略不当，可扣1-3分。7.第一段仅一句话，对于题目第一个问题回答过于简单，扣1分。8.文章缺少要点，扣5分。9.文章没有结尾，扣1分。三、可套句型及所用范围(按近几年考查话题多少排序)一、校园生活与友谊(所用范围：写人、记事)1.开头段xxx,whoisa15-year-oldstudent,isanoutgoingandkind-heartedboy/girl.Mybestfriendisaboy/girlnamedxxx,2whois15yearsoldthisyear.Wearegraduatingfromschoolsoon.Imisssomanygoodfriends,especiallymybestfriend--xxx.2.中间段(人物具体介绍部分)外形、性格特点及爱好He’s/she’sofmediumheightandwearsglasses.He/sheisoutgoingandhardworkingandisalwaysreadytohelpothers.He/sheisactive,cuteandenergetic.He’s/she’snotonlykindbutalsohelpful.Besides,he/sheisfriendlyandenthusiastic.He/shehasalotofinterestsandxxxandxxxarehis/herfavorite.朋友做的事情xxxisatopstudent,torealizehis/herdream,whodevotedhimself/herselftohis/herstudies.OnceIsawhimhelpanoldwomancrosstheroad.Ihaveacrystalclearmemorythathe/sheusedtogivemeahelpinghand(helpmeout)wheneverIwasintrouble.Wegetonwellwitheachothersoweoftendiscussourstudytogetherandhe/shecanalwaysfindoutnewwaystohelpmeworkoutproblems.3.尾段Suchisxxx,awarm-heartedandoutgoingboy/girl.He/sheissogoodaboy/girlaseveryonelikes.I’mproudofhavingsuchanoutstandingfriend.Ishouldlearnfromhim/herandtrytobehelpful.Icaresomuchabouthim/herthatIwanttodosomethingmeaningfulforhim/her.Ihopehe/shewillhaveabrightfutureandthatourfriendshipwilllastforever.the+best+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read，etc)themost+形容词+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read，etc)例句：HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。二、我有我观点(所用范围：建议类)学习语言类：LearningEnglishcanhelpbroadenourmindandenrichourschoollife.Satisfypeople’sdesire.Practicemakesperfect.Firstly,it’sveryimportanttolistentotheteachercarefullyinclassandmakesomenotessothatyoucangooveryourlessonslater.Secondly,trytocatcheverychancetopracticespeaking,bothinandoutofclass.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.ThentrytolistenandreadmoreinChinese.What’smore,you’dbetterplanyourtimewellandstudyitregularlyeveryday.Aboveall,youshouldbeconfidentinyourselfanddon’tgiveupwheneveryoumeetwithdifficulty.I’msureyouwillsucceedthroughyourhardwork.信件建议类作文——学会可套用句型首段Iamgladtohearfromyou.IcompletelyunderstandyoubecauseIusedtohavethesimilarexperiences,butIdon’tthinkyouaresupposedto…Herearemysuggestions.中间段Firstofall/Tobeginwith/Aboveall,ifIwereyou,Iwouldprobably…inthefirstplaceto…sothat/whichwill…What’smore/Furthermore/Besides,justastheproverbgoeslikethat…,itwouldbeagreatideato….Bydoingthis,….Inaddition/Lastbutnottheleast,……Youmightaswellturntosb.forhelpsince…尾段IhopewhatImentionedherecanbehelpful./Ihopethesuggestionsmentionedabovecanbehelpful.三、关注社会热爱家国(所用范围：绿色出行/节水等)1.It’sourdutytosavewater.2.Wecan’tlivewithoutwater.3.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.4.Butsomepeopledon’tcareaboutit.5.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.6.Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.7.Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandhealthierinthefuture.8.Thereisnodenyingthefactthatairpollutionisanextremelyseriousproblem:thecityauthoritiesshouldtakestrongmeasurestodealwithit.9.Ifeveryonedoesonethingforourschool,wewillturnourschoolintoabetterplacetostudyandlivein.10.Believethatbydoingallthesesmallthingswecanimproveourenvironmentandhelpmakeourworldabetterplacetolivein.11.Weallknow,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworse.Insomeplaceswecan’tseefishswimmingintheriverortreesonthehills.Somepeopleevenhavenocleanwatertodrink,nofreshairtobreathe,noquietplacestolivein.12.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit’sourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.四、身心健康(所用范围：减压)段一：iscoming/approachingareundergreatpressuretryingtofindsomewaystosolveit段二：Mostofmyclassmateschooseto…relievestressWhileothersprefertoButIthink/asformeBydoing×××,Icanrelaxmyselfand/aswellasknowmore×××段三：Inshort,Ithink×××isagoodwayforustorelieveourstress,Through×××IcouldgetthepleasurethatIwillnevergetthroughotherways.四、中考英语常见作文话题(按要点分类)(一)难忘的事(1)别人帮助我Webecamefriendsbyaccident.OnedayJackwasplayingbasketballontheplayground.Amazedathowskillfulhewas,Imadeupmymindtoplayaswellashe.Iwasgratefulwhenheagreedtoteachme.EverytimewhenIwantedtogiveuphalfway,itwasJackwhoencouragedme.Gradually,Imasteredtheskills