高中英语写作常见错误句子

写作对策考核目标1.能运用所学的语言知识写出通顺正确的句子2。能根据题意连贯、贴切地进行书面表达篇章写作要求：统一性(unity)：围绕主题连贯性(coherence)：逻辑性,过渡词一致性(consistency)：时态，人称英语作文要求：内容：观点明确，内容充实，理由充分.10’语言：表达正确，语言流畅,用词恰当，10’句式多样化.组织结构：结构正确，上下文连贯一致5’写作步骤：1。写前准备：看清题意，理清思路（写什么）2。写作过程：提纲（outline）动笔（writing）检查（check）正确连接分句•1.Thebookwasinteresting,Ireaditrapidly.•Thebookwasinteresting,andIreaditrapidly.•2.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,theboysmoppedthefloor.•Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,andtheboysmoppedthefloor.•避免误置修饰语•3.AttheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.•MyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglishwhenIwassix.•4.Ialmostgotgoodmarksineverysubject.•Igotgoodmarksinalmosteverysubject.•注意逻辑主语•5.Tobewell-informed,readingnewspaperisagoodhabit.•Tobewell-informed,weshouldreadnewspapereveryday.•6.Comingoutoftheclassroom,myheartwasbeatingveryfast.•Comingoutoftheclassroom,Ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast.避免指代不清•7.Sheaskedhersisterwhyshewasn’tinvitedtotheparty.•Sheaskedwhyhersisterwasn’tinvitedtotheparty.•Sheaskedhersister,“Whywasn’tIinvitedtotheparty?”•避免人称代词混淆•8.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.•Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.•避免重复•9.Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.•Inmyopinion,weshouldaskthemforadvice.•Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.•尽量避免汉语干扰•10.Thebooksinourlibraryaregettingmoreandmore.•Therearemoreandmorebooksinourlibrary.•Thenumberofbooksinourlibraryisgettingbiggerandbigger.•11.DuringstayinginBeijing,Ivisitedalotofplacesofinterest.•DuringmystayinBeijing,I…•WhilestayinginBeijing,I…•12.Thereisamanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.•Ayoungmanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.•Thereisamanwhowantstoseeyoudownstairs.•13.Iwillnotforgetmydearfriendsforever.•Iwillneverforgetmydearfriends.•14.Theywillcometovisityouwhenyouareconvenient.•Theywillcometovisityouwhenitisconvenienttoyou.•Theywillcometovisityouatyourconvenience.•注意时态一致•15.Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplearecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneed.WhenIfinishedmyshoppingIamsotired.•注意时态一致•Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplewerecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneeded.WhenIfinishedmyshopping,Iwassotired.•Writeashortparagraphabout:•Lackofsleep•Wearebusyreviewingourlessonsanddoingexercisesallthetime.Everyeveningweworktillverylate.Wedon’thaveenoughtimeforsleep.I’mafraidlackofsleepwilldoharmtoourhealth.