高中英语写作常见错误句子类型[课件]

写作对策考核目标1.能运用所学的语言知识写出通顺正确的句子2。能根据题意连贯、贴切地进行书面表达篇章写作要求：统一性(unity)：围绕主题连贯性(coherence)：逻辑性,过渡词一致性(consistency)：时态，人称英语作文要求：内容：观点明确，内容充实，理由充分.10’语言：表达正确，语言流畅,用词恰当，10’句式多样化.组织结构：结构正确，上下文连贯一致5’写作步骤：1。写前准备：看清题意，理清思路（写什么）2。写作过程：提纲（outline）动笔（writing）检查（check）正确连接分句1.Thebookwasinteresting,Ireaditrapidly.Thebookwasinteresting,andIreaditrapidly.2.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,theboysmoppedthefloor.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,andtheboysmoppedthefloor.避免误置修饰语3.AttheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.MyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglishwhenIwassix.4.Ialmostgotgoodmarksineverysubject.Igotgoodmarksinalmosteverysubject.注意逻辑主语5.Tobewell-informed,readingnewspaperisagoodhabit.Tobewell-informed,weshouldreadnewspapereveryday.6.Comingoutoftheclassroom,myheartwasbeatingveryfast.Comingoutoftheclassroom,Ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast.避免指代不清7.Sheaskedhersisterwhyshewasn’tinvitedtotheparty.Sheaskedwhyhersisterwasn’tinvitedtotheparty.Sheaskedhersister,“Whywasn’tIinvitedtotheparty?”避免人称代词混淆8.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.避免重复9.Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.Inmyopinion,weshouldaskthemforadvice.Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.尽量避免汉语干扰10.Thebooksinourlibraryaregettingmoreandmore.Therearemoreandmorebooksinourlibrary.Thenumberofbooksinourlibraryisgettingbiggerandbigger.11.DuringstayinginBeijing,Ivisitedalotofplacesofinterest.DuringmystayinBeijing,I…WhilestayinginBeijing,I…12.Thereisamanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Ayoungmanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Thereisamanwhowantstoseeyoudownstairs.13.Iwillnotforgetmydearfriendsforever.Iwillneverforgetmydearfriends.14.Theywillcometovisityouwhenyouareconvenient.Theywillcometovisityouwhenitisconvenienttoyou.Theywillcometovisityouatyourconvenience.注意时态一致15.Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplearecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneed.WhenIfinishedmyshoppingIamsotired.注意时态一致Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplewerecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneeded.WhenIfinishedmyshopping,Iwassotired.Writeashortparagraphabout:LackofsleepWearebusyreviewingourlessonsanddoingexercisesallthetime.Everyeveningweworktillverylate.Wedon’thaveenoughtimeforsleep.I’mafraidlackofsleepwilldoharmtoourhealth.