高考英语作文如何使用高级词汇和高级句子

Writing高考英语写作高分策略Whichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive,why?×Knwo×knwo书写规范要点齐全段落合理字数要齐影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面Whichsentencedoyouthinkattractstheteachers?堵车真是糟糕透了。(1)Everyday,tohaveatrafficjamisverybadforme.(2)Everyday,trafficjamisadisasterforme.活学活用当堂练习(凭长相发工资)这条消息让王老师喜上眉梢，让李老师瞬间崩溃。ThisnewsisablessingforMr.WangwhileitisadisasterforMr.Li.√长峡托孤月。(1)Thelongstraitsarelyingunderthelonelymoon.(2)Lyingunderthelonelymoonarethelongstraits.Whichsentencedoyouthinkattractstheteachers?√影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B.句型结构运用灵活多变;PracticeFindsomesimilarwordsorphrasesofthefollowings1.good2.think3.likeperfectexcellentoutstandingpleasantwonderfulfavorablemagnificentinone'sopinion/viewholdtheviewthat…itiswidelysharedthat…love,enjoy,adore,fancy,befondof,becrazyabout常用到的句型结构请判断句子类型e.g.Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!感叹句强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Therecomesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.倒装句省略句with短语eg.Inmyview,bookstoreshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.eg.Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.定语从句e.g.That’swhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.各种名词性从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.各种状语从句1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。Astrong/bigearthquakehappenedinTangshaninthe1980s.TherewasastrongearthquakeinTangshaninthe1980s.Aterribleearthquakehit/struckTangShaninthe1980s.改变句子结构与众不同改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化1.Hegotexcitedwhenheheardthenews.→___thenews,hegotexcited.（doing作状语）2.Thegirlwenthome,becauseshewashungryandthirsty.→_________________,thegirlwenthome.（adj作状语）3.Itwasearlyinthemorning.Mr.Smithwasinhisgarden.Hewaswateringflowers.→_______________,MrSmithwaswatering___________.（把三个简单融合成一句话）HearingHungryandthirstyEarlyinthemorninginthegarden使用强势句式，增强语句表现力1.Weweregladtoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.→_____________weweretoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell!(感叹句）2.Radiobroadcastsdidn’tbeginuntil1920.→Itwas__________________________________.（强调句）3.Heneverspeaksabouthisownfamily.→Never_________________________________.(倒装句）4.Aboystoodoutsidetheclassroom.→Outsidetheclassroom_____________________.（倒装句）5.Thoughheisachild,heknowsalot.→___________________________________.（倒装句）Howgladnotuntil1920thatradiobroadcastsbegandoeshespeakabouthisownfamilystoodaboy.Childthough/asheis,heknowsalot影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅正确而巧妙地使用好连接词正确使用有关连接词first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhilebut,however,onthecontrary,neverthelessbecause,since,as,for,thanksto,owingto,asaresultofwhat’smore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand,if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat…forinstance,take…forexample,That’stosay,inotherwords,asfollowsinshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,时间先后：转折关系：因果关系：让步关系：递进关系：条件关系：表列举：表总结：though,although,evenif,eventhough(1)Thedeadlineforourpaperistomorrow.Everyminute,therefore,shouldbemadefulluseof.(2)Thedeadlineforourpaperistomorrow.Therefore,everyminuteshouldbemadefulluseof.√Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife…Thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollows._______,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._______,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool.AsfarasIamconcerned,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._____,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.______,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!A.FirstlyB.LastbutnotleastC.What’smoreD.SecondlyABCD小结：1.作文的卷面-----卷面整洁要点齐全2.作文的语言-----词汇丰富句型多变3.作文的流畅-----结构流畅一气呵成Reading•Asscienceandtechnologydevelops,wecanseeadvertisementsalmosteverywhere.•Advertisementshelppeoplegetmuchinformationaboutnewproducts.Companycansellmoreproductsthanbefore.Andsomeadvertisementseducatethepublic.•Advertisementshavesomebadeffectsonourdailylife.Itwastesalotofnaturalresources,whichincreasesthecostofproducts.Theymisleadorevencheatconsumers.Theymakeusupset.•Ithinkadvertisingisuseful.Ifwehaveenoughfactsfromads,wecaneasilymakeamuchbetterchoice.(Introduction)(Advantages)(Disadvantages)(Myopinion)(86words)Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,peopleareconstantlyexposedtoads.Adsbenefitusinmanyways.Itisbelievedthatadscaninformpeopleofnewproducts.Makinguseofads,companiescanpromotethesalesofproducts.Advertisementseducatethepublic.However,thereexistsomebadeffectsonourdailylife.Inthefirstplace,itisawasteofnaturalresources,increasingthecostofproducts.Inthesecondplace,notonlydoadsmisleadorevencheatconsumersbutalsomakeusupsetanddisturbed.AsfarasIamconcerned,advertisingisofuse.Ifwearearmedwithenoughfactsfromads,itiseasyforustomakeamuchbett