【3年高考2年模拟】2016届人教版新课标高三英语一轮复习课件 写作指导五 话题类记叙文

1写作指导话题类记叙文要注意以下几点:第一,掌握记叙文的“六要素”。一般按照事件发展的时间顺序来讲述,先交代事件发生的时间、地点以及事件所涉及的人物,然后叙述事件发生的原因、经过,最后交代结果。但有时也采取插叙和倒叙的手法。第二,首先确定时间立足点,并以此确定时态。报道、日记或故事类记叙文通常是记录过去发生的事情,因此经常采用一般过去时;叙述当前的事情或自然、社会现象则用一般现在时。第三,从谋篇布局角度讲,该类文章可分为三段:第一段引出话题;第二段讲述过程;第三段说明结果或发表感慨。写作指导2常用句式(1)Onemorning/day.../Lastweek/Saturday.../Onawinterday.../Thismorn-ing.../ItwasJune20,2014.../OnMay4,2014...(2)...wasdoingsth.when.../Assoonas...+主句/When...+主句/BeforeIcould...+主句(3)As/Because/Since...+主句(4)Aftersometime.../Afterawhile.../Afewminuteslater.../Amomentlat-er.../Then...(5)Someweredoing...someweredoing...and/whileothersweredoing...(6)Whenitwastime(forsb.)to...we...(7)Justthen.../Atthatmoment.../Hardlyhad...when(8)And.../So.../Therefore.../Asaresult.../Forthat...3写作典例(2014四川)假设你是李夏,你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况,请根据以下要点回信告知。1.考试日期与科目;2.考试准备情况;3.考试时的状态;4.对试题的感受;5.可能的考试结果。注意:1.词数120左右;2.开头语和结尾语已为你写好;3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;4.文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。参考词汇:高考collegeentranceexaminationDearSam,Thankyouforyourconcern.Bestwishes!Yours,LiXia【范文】DearSam,Thankyouforyourconcern.I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmycollegeentranceexamination.IattendeditonJune7thandJune8th.Wewereexaminedonallthesubjectsthatwehadlearnedinhighschool,thatis,Chinese,math,Englishandsciencewhichincludesphysics,chemistryandbiology.Beforetheexam,Idevotedmyselftopreparingforit.Ourteacherchosemanyimportantexercisesforus,andIwentoverthelanguagepointsatthesametime.Iknowitisofequalsignificancetohaveagoodsleepatnight.Sowhilesittingintheclassroomanddoingmypapers,Ifeltconfidentandwasfullofenergy.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifeeltheexamisnottoodifficult.Iwillbesatisfiedwiththeresultoftheexam.Bestwishes!Yours,LiXia【写作点评】(1)第一段开门见山地阐明写作主题。(2)第二段使用了过渡词或短语thatis,and,so,使得文章上下文之间衔接自如,通顺流畅。(3)第二段中还使用了定语从句、宾语从句,丰富了文章的句式结构,彰显了作者的写作功底,也增加了得分点。4跟踪训练(2015黑龙江双鸭山一中期中)假如你是李华,在上一周去英国参加了由Fiona的学校组织的两校学生交流活动,在英国期间,你居住在Fiona的家中。回国后,请你给Fiona写封感谢信,内容包括:1.交流活动中的收获和感受2.回忆在Fiona家度过的美好日子3.感谢她送你的英文图书注意:1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯3.开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)提示词汇:文化交流活动:CulturalExchangeactivityDearFiona,I’vebeenbackhomesafelyfromEngland.【范文】DearFiona,I’vebeenbackhomesafelyfromEngland.ThankyouforthewarmhelpduringmystayinEngland.Lastweek,IparticipatedintheCulturalExchangeactivity.Ienjoyedmyselfinyourcountry.Wevisitedthecitymuseumandsomeplacesofinterest,whichmademehaveabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishsociety,cultureandhistory.Ofcourse,Ialsomademanynewfriends.What’smore,Iwasluckyenoughtostayatyourhome.AndI’llneverforgetthedayswespenttogether.HereIespeciallythankyouforthebookyouofferedmeasagift.It’sagreathelpformetolearnaboutyourcountry.Iwilltreasureandmakefulluseofit.WelcometoChinawhenit’sconvenientforyou!Yours,LiHua