写好建议信课件

HowtowritealetterforadviceChris2011.9.21写作要点1.建议信作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.基本框架：开头（beginning）----开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点。(stateyouridea)主体(body)----对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议。(reasonsandevidence)结尾(ending)----呼应开头，重申观点。(restateyouropinion.)4.注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。3）符合英文信件的基本格式假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴参加中文学习班；⑵看中文书刊、电视；⑶学唱中文歌曲；⑷交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，开头语已给出。DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Bestwishes,Yours，LiHua第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)第一人称一封信说理逻辑性一般现在时如何学好中文第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议咨询如何学好中文1.参加中文学习班。2.看中文书刊、电视。3.学唱中文歌。4.交中国朋友。1.参加中文学习班2.看中文书刊、电视3.学唱中文歌4.交中国朋友takeChinesecoursesreadbooks,magazines,newspapersinChinese,watchTV,seemoviessingChinesesongsmakeChinesefriends润色1.takeChinesecourseslearnfromtheteacherspracticewithyourfellowstudentslearnmoreaboutChinesehistoryandculturemakemorefriends2.readbooks,magazines,newspapersinChinese,watchTV,seemoviesbroadenourhorizonspracticeourChineselearnmoreaboutChinesehistoryandculture3.singChinesesongslearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasilygivemuchfuntous4.makeChinesefriendstellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese常用套语A．建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iwassorrytoknowthat…2.Thanksfortrustingme.Regarding…,I’dliketomakesomesuggestions.3.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…4.Iamwritingtosharesomeadviceon…withyou.5.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon…andI’lltrytomakesomesuggestions.B.表达建议（body）1.Ifeelthatitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…3.Youmayconsiderdoing…4.Itwouldseemtomethatyoucould…5.AsfarasI’mconcerned/Inmyopinion/Asforme,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.6.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowingtips.7.Whenitcometosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushould…表先后次序：First,second,third….FinallyFirstly,secondly，…eventuallytobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast递进关系：furthermore;moreover;besides;meanwhile;inotherwords;atthesametime；注意衔接词使用:C.建议信结尾常用句式1.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.2.Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterinfurtherdetails.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthismatter.4.Ifyouhaveanymoreproblem,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeatanytime.5.I’mwillingtodiscussthismatterwithyouwheneveryouneed.DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Iwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Inaddition,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.What’smore,youcanalsomakemoreChinesefriends,whowilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou!Yourssincerely,LiHua适当运用模板Dear_____,Youhaveaskedmeformytipsconcerning_____(问题),andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:First,_______(建议一);inaddition_____(建议二);what’smore_____(建议三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou!Yourssincerely,LiMing