2013届高三英语复习 写作专题讲座 第17讲 提纲作文课件 新人教版

[题目要求](2011·四川高考)最近，某中学生英文报开设了“AfterclassActivities”的栏目。请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。1．你校开展课外活动的情况；2．你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；3．为同学选择课外活动提出建议；4．为学校开展课外活动提出建议。注意：1．词数100左右；2．文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；3．稿件的开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)。AfterclassActivitiesNowadays,afterclassactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[技法指导]提纲作文要求考生根据给出的提示性文字，首先确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述，表达主旨。它的特点是提纲既体现了文章的层次，又规定了各段大体的内容，为考生提供了一条写作思路。考生稍加思索、计划、整理即可成文。另外，它的限定性较大。考生如果不理解提纲所提示的内容，就会感到难以下笔。因此考生要掌握提纲作文的以下写作技巧：1．认真审题和分析所给出的提纲，认清题目和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、大致内容以及文体。2．每一个要点可以作为文章的一个段落层次。段落的展开应围绕提纲的中心和内容，不能偏离，也不能任意增减。3．提纲只是对文章的提示和概括，不是主题句。考生需要根据提纲的性质，写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子，使之成为主题句，然后围绕主题句进行扩展。4．收集材料支持主题句。材料可以是例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。应当注意的是，所选材料要与文章的主题相符，即要“扣题”，同时要具有典型性，能充分说明问题。在有多个例证的段落中，还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。第一步构建框架，清晰行文[谋篇布局][黄金模板]AfterclassActivitiesNowadays,afterclassactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools.Inourschool,therearevariouskindsofactivities,forexample,________________________(列举具体活动名称).Weenjoythemverymuch.________________________(具体活动名称)aremyfavoriteswhichdomelotsofgood.Besides________________________(益处一),theyalso________________________(益处二)．HereIhavesomesuggestions.Tostudents,________________________(具体建议一);toschools,________________________(具体建议二)．Dearfriends,please________________________(发出呼吁),whichwillnotonlymakeyourschoollifecolourful,butalsoimproveyourlearning.第二步打造亮句，增色文章1．在我们学校，拥有各种各样的课外活动，例如艺术和体育。►Wecantakevariouskindsofactivitiesinourschool,suchasartsandsports.►Inourschool,therearevariouskindsofactivities,forexample,artsandsports.2．踢足球和阅读故事都是我的最爱，因为它们给我带来很多好处。►Playingfootballandreadingstoriesaremyfavoriteswhichdomelotsofgood.►Ilikebothplayingfootballandreadingstoriesverymuch,fortheydoalotofgoodtome.第三步串句成文，保证流畅AfterclassActivitiesNowadays,afterclassactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools.Inourschool,therearevariouskindsofactivities,forexample,artsandsports.Weenjoythemverymuch.Playingfootballandreadingstoriesaremyfavoriteswhichdomelotsofgood.Besidesbuildingmybodyandenrichingmyknowledge,theyalsofreemefromtheheavyworkofstudy.HereIhavesomesuggestions.Tostudents,you'dbetterchoosetheactivitieswhichinterestyouandsuityou;toschools,theyshouldorganizemoreactivitiesforstudentsandleavestudentsmoretimeforactivitiesbygivingthemlesshomework.Dearfriends,pleaseactivelytakepartinafterclassactivities,whichwillnotonlymakeyourschoollifecolourful,butalsoimproveyourlearning.(2012·济南模拟)假设你是光明中学的李华，你想参加美国某大学在你校举行的“赴美交换生”的选拔赛。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇120—150词的自我陈述。要包含以下内容：1．参加目的；2．兴趣特长；3．未来打算。参考词汇：交换生exchangestudent_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：DearSir/Madam,MynameisLiHuaandIamnowinGradeThree,ClassTwofromGuangmingSeniorHighSchool.Iwanttobeanexchangestudentofyourschool.Iwouldliketoapplytojointheprogram.Firstly,mylisteningandspeakingskillsonEnglisharegood.Inclass,ourEnglishteacheroftenpraisesmeformyexcellentEnglishcapabilities.Secondly,IamveryinterestedinAmericanculture.MyparentsandIoncewenttoAmericaonatripanditleftmeaverygoodimpressionandIfellinlovewiththiscountry.Lastly,astomypersonality,Iamanopenmindedyoungboywhoisgoodatinterpersonalrelationship.Therefore,aswhatIhavestatedabove,I'llbethankfulifyouacceptmeasanexchangestudent.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua