2020年中考英语-满分作文评析

满分作文评析2020北京卷根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用，请不要写出你的校名和姓名。假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom上周刚过完生日。他想知道你经常和谁一起过生日，怎么过的，你收到的最喜欢的礼物是什么，以及你喜欢它的原因。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语：cake,noodles,singsongs,makeawish,getpresentsToTomFromLiHuaSubjectBirthdayHi!Tom,I’mgladthatyouhadanicebirthdaypartylastweek.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua·Whodoyouoftencelebrateyourbirthdaywith?Yourparents?Yourfriends?Or…?·Whatdoyouusuallydoonyourbirthday?[·Whatisyourfavoritepresent?Whydoyoulikeit?【思路点拨】文章格式已经给出，所以我们可以直接回答“跟谁在一起？经常做什么？最喜欢什么礼物？”三个问题。在回答问题时，要言之有理有据，注意衔接。文章写作模版如下：【标准范文】Hi!Tom,I’mgladthatyouhadanicebirthdaypartylastweek.NowI’lltellyousomethingabouthowIcelebratemybirthday.Ioftencelebratemybirthdaywithmyparentsandmyfriends.Ioftenhaveabirthdayparty.Myparentsbuymeabirthdaycakeandsomedeliciousfoods.Manyfriendscometomyhome.Theysendmemanypresents.Wesinganddance.Weeatfoodandfruitandplaygamestogether.Weoftenhaveagoodtime.AmongallthebirthdaypresentsthatIreceived,myfavouriteoneisaspecialcalendardesignedbymyparents,becausetherearefamilypicturestakenduringthewholeyearandwordswithencouragement.Ihopeeveryonehasagoodtimeeveryday.Yours,LiHua回答问题提出祝愿Ioftencelebrateitwith…Myfavouritepresentis…because…Ihope…I’mgladthat…Letmetellyou…Iusually…onmybirthday…引出话题问题2问题1问题3【强化训练】假如你是Lisa,6月19日是你的生日，请根据一下表格的内容，向你的好朋友群发一封邀请信。要求：1.词数：80左右2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Hifriends,I'mveryhappybecausemybirthdayiscoming.Iwillhaveabirthdaypartyatmyhomeat2:30pmonJune192.Wehavealotoffoodanddrink.Ithinkwecanhaveabigdinner.Atthesametime,wecandomanyinterestingactivities.Suchaswatchinganewmovieorplayinggames.Welcomeeveryonetocometomybirthdayparty.RemembertocomeifyouarefreeonFriday.Yours,Lisa2020天津卷Time:Friday,June19,at2:30pmPlace:Lisa’shomeActivities:watchinganewmovie,playinggames,havingdinner在初中即将毕业之际，请你以张明的名义给英国笔友Brian写一封感谢信，要点提示如下：三年前你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独三年中Brian多次给你写信，他在信中：鼓励你多交朋友；告诉你学好英语的方法；和你分享快乐；你变得……近年来天津发生很大变化，你邀请他来天津游玩参考词汇：分享快乐sharehappiness要求：⑴词数：80~100个⑵信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数⑶要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥DearBrian，Howtimeflies!Wehavebeenfriendsforthreeyears.I’mwritingtothankyouforyourhelp!Threeyearsago,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopetoseeyousoon!Yours,ZhangMing【标准范文】DearBrain,Howtimeflies!Wehavebeenfriendsforthreeyears.I’mwritingtothankyouforyourhelp!Threeyearsago,whenIcametoanewclass,everythingwasstrangetome.Ihadnofriendsandfeltverylonely.Itwasyouwhohelpedmealot.Duringthesethreeyears,youwrotetomemanytimesandalwaysencouragedmetomakefriendsasmanyaspossible.WhenIhadtroublewithmyEnglish,youtoldmemanygoodwaystoimproveit.Besides,youwerealwayssharinghappinesswithme,whichmademylifemorecolorful.Thankstoyourhelp,Ihavebecomemoreconfidentandpositive.Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.Theseyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinTianjinandIhopeyoucancometoTianjintoexperiencethenewchanges.Hopetoseeyousoon!具体帮助发出邀请Youwrotetome…alwaysencouragedmeto….WhenIhadtrouble….Besides,youwerealwayssharing…Thankstoyourhelp…IhopeyoucancometoTianjinto…WhenIcametoanewclass,everythingwas…andfelt…当时处境Yours,ZhangMing【强化训练】假设你是一名中学生，名叫李华，曾经到英国学习、生活了三个月。在那期间，你住在大卫（David）家中。现在学习已结束，你刚回到家，特意给大卫写一封80词左右的英文信，内容包括以下方面：表达谢意感谢大卫及其家人对你的照顾。难忘的事1.大卫帮助你学习英语，带你去参观了许多地方；2.大卫的父母在你生病时送你去医院，给你做好吃的食物。学习收获提高了英语水平，更多地了解了英国的文化。发出邀请邀请大卫及其家人到你家作客。要求：⑴信件内容要包含所给的提示信息，可适当发挥；⑵信的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；⑶文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇：culture（文化），invite（邀请）DearDavid,I’vejustgotbackhome.Iwanttosay“Thankyou”mostatthemoment.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearDavid,I’vejustgotbackhome.Iwanttosay“Thankyou”mostatthemoment.Duringmystaywithyourfamily,Iwaswelllookedafter.YouhelpedmewithmyEnglishandshowedmearoundmanyplaces.WhenIwasill,yourparentssentmetothehospitalandprepareddeliciousfoodforme,soIgotwellsoon.Withyourhelp,myEnglishhasgreatlyimprovedandI’velear