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任务型写作---概括指导Howtowriteasummaryofnarration•Learningaim:Tofurthermasterthemethodsandskillsofwritingsummariesofnarrativepassages•Difficultpoint:Howtowriteanexactsummarywithoutleavingoutkeypoints学生习作常见错误：•概括内容要点不完整•使用太多细节内容而不是用概括的语言•过多引用原文词句•词数过多•用第一人称而不是第三人称转述•时态错误•LastSundayIwentfishing.Aftersettingupmyfishingrodwithbait,Isatdownonthebankofthelake.Buttwohourslater,Ididn’tcatchanyfish.Igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff,preparingtogobackhome.•Justthen,Isawanoldmansittingnearme.Tomysurprise,hisbasketwasfulloffish,soIwentovertohim,wantingtoknowwhy.“Excuseme,buthowlonghaveyousathere?”Iasked.“Aboutfourhours,”heanswered.“Fourhours?”Icouldn’tbelievemyears.“Yes.It’sveryimportanttobepatient,”theoldmansaid.“Don’tconsiderfishingatiringsport.Justenjoyit.”Suddenly,Iunderstoodwhathesaid.Imustlearntobepatient.ThenIsatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently.Ifeltafishtouchthebait,butIdidn’tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin.Atlast,Icaughtit.Thismademeveryhappy.Inthefollowingsixhours,Icaughtover10fish.•Onmywayhome,Ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank.Igraduallyrealizedthatthesecretofsuccesswaspatience.学生习作常见错误1:•ThepassagetellsusthatlastSundayamanwentfishingbuthedidn’tcatchanyfishintwohours.Atthistimehesawanoldmansittingnearhim.Themanaskedthemanhowtocatchfishes.Theoldmansaidthatyoushouldbepatient.使用太多细节，语言不够概括概括内容要：精，准，全学生习作常见错误2:•Thestorymainlytellsusthatthewriterwasfishinganddidn’tcatchanyfish.Whenhepreparedtogobackhome,hefoundanoldmansittingthereandhisbasketwasfulloffish.Intheend,hecaughtmanyfish.引用原文词句不得直接引用原文的句子学生习作常见错误3:•Thestorymainlytellsusthatthewriterwasfishingbutmadenoachievementsandpreparedtogobackhome.Whileanoldmanwhosebasketwasfulloffishtoldhimthatfishisveryimportanttobepatient.Theauthorlearnedtobepatient.Atlast,theauthorcaughtfishandrealizedthesecretofsuccesswaspatience.(共60词)词数过多词数:约30词（小于20词或大于40词，扣2分）学生习作常见错误4:•ThewritertellsusthatIwentfishingbutdidn’tcatchanyfishafterwaiting2hours.Thenanoldmansittingnearmetoldmehissecretoffishingwaspatience.FinallyIsucceeded.人称用错，应该用第三人称一般以第三人称来表述学生习作常见错误5:•Thepassagemainlytellsusthatthewriterdoesn’tcatchanyfishbecauseofhisimpatience.Hebecomeshappywhenheunderstandsthepatienceisthekeytosuccess.时态错误与原文时态一致(1)概括内容要点要：精，准，全写概括时应满足的5个条件(4)一般以第三人称来表述(2)不得直接引用原文的句子（同义词组替换法；正话反说法；语态变换；简单句变复合句……）(3)词数:约30词（小于20词或大于40词，扣2分）(5)与原文时态一致（正文和结尾除外）记叙文概括的方法---串联要素法第一步：先通读全文，找出几个要素•who→谁•what→何事•when→何时•where→何地•why→原因•asaresult/consequence/finally→结果…….,whichledto第二步：用自己的话串联起来万能公式：Thepassagemainlytellsusthatsb.(who……)didsth.(atsomeplaceatsometime)becauseof/asaresultof/dueto……,whichledto……finally/eventually……开头套用句式：Thestory/passageisabout……Thewriter/authortellsusabout….Thestory/passagemainlytellsusthat……Thepassagedescribes….•LastSundayIwentfishing.Aftersettingupmyfishingrodwithbait,Isatdownonthebankofthelake.Buttwohourslater,Ididn’tcatchanyfish.Igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff,preparingtogobackhome.•Justthen,Isawanoldmansittingnearme.Tomysurprise,hisbasketwasfulloffish,soIwentovertohim,wantingtoknowwhy.“Excuseme,buthowlonghaveyousathere?”Iasked.“Aboutfourhours,”heanswered.“Fourhours?”Icouldn’tbelievemyears.“Yes.It’sveryimportanttobepatient,”theoldmansaid.“Don’tconsiderfishingatiringsport.Justenjoyit.”Suddenly,Iunderstoodwhathesaid.Imustlearntobepatient.ThenIsatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently.Ifeltafishtouchthebait,butIdidn’tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin.Atlast,Icaughtit.Thismademeveryhappy.Inthefollowingsixhours,Icaughtover10fish.•Onmywayhome,Ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank.Igraduallyrealizedthatthesecretofsuccesswaspatience.hadnopatience第一步：请找出这篇短文的几个要素：•who→谁①_______________②________________•what→何事①____________________________•②__________________________•when→何时•where→何地•why→原因①______________________________________•②______________________________________•asaresult→结果______________________________________________________I(thewriter)didn’tcatchanyfishanoldmanhisbasketwasfulloffishgotveryangryIt’sveryimportanttobepatientlearntobepatient;caughtit.第二步：用自己的话串联起来万能公式：sb.(who……)didsth.(atsomeplaceatsometime)becauseof/asaresultof/dueto……,whichledto…/finally/eventually……ThewritercaughtalotoffishafterbecomingpatientwhohadnopatienceatfirstbecauseofbeinginfluencedbyanoldmanhimrealizingpatienceisthekeytosuccessOnepossibleversionThepassagemainlytellsusthatthewriterwhohadnopatienceatfirstcaughtalotoffishafterbecomingpatientbecauseofbeinginfluencedbyanoldman.Finally,herealizedpatienceisthekeytosuccess.hadintendedtogiveupintendedtohavegivenupGroupWork阅读下面的短文，然后以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容。Hi,IamMike.Ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege.Thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment.Iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme.ButatthecollegeIneedtoknowsomebasiclifeskills,suchasbalancingacheck-book,laundry,andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatIneverthoughtofinthehighschool!ItwasreallytoughformeatfirstandIgotbadlyhomesick.OncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandIgotusedtothecollegelife,Iloveit—goodfacilities,helpfulinstructors,andagoodlibrary.Thestudent’sUnionorganizesvariou