福建省晋江市首峰中学高考英语复习 写作指导-如何提高作文中句子写作能力课件

高考复习---书面表达（一）如何提高作文中句子写作能力Chinglish1.horsehorsetigertiger2.openwater3.giveyousomecolourseesee4.Younosee,Inowverybusy.Onesideplay.5.Yougivemestop!!1.Ithismorningeatbreakfast2.I'mverylikeplaybasketball.3。Weshouldhardstudy.4.ButIbetterlikelistenmusic.5.Livetoold,studytoold.1.Ihadbreakfastthismorning.3.Weshouldwork/studyhard.5.It’snevertoooldtolearn.4.ButIlikelisteningtomusicbetter.2.Ilikeplayingbasketballverymuch.影响书面表达得分的因素：“大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中式英语等，如：1.Myhometownhadbigchange,buildmanyhouses,……2.Myhometownhasgreatchanges.→Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownthere.3.Iwillwelcometoyou.◆“小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面,如：Undermyteacherandclassmatesallhelptome,…….→WelcometoChina.Welcometoourhometown.→Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,……◆没有使用高级词汇和复杂句1.Iwillvisitmyhometownwithyou.2.Ifyouhavetime,Iwilltakeyoutotravelaroundmyhometown.→Iwillshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式I.高级词汇运用１.Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.２.ShewenttoAustraliainordertostudymusic.３.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.ShewenttoAustraliaforthe＿＿ofstudyingmusic.＿＿hespoke,＿＿excitedhefelt.Booksare＿＿forthestudentsthere.freepurposeThemoreThemoreII.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句happyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!2.强调句thisyoungboywhohelpedtheoldgranny.3.倒装句Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.4.省略句Theyreadwalkingorridingonabus.howItwaswhile5、with短语Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.6、定语从句Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句That’swhatIshoulddo.8、各种状语从句Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.谚语的使用没有耕耘就没有收获Nopains,nogains有志者事竟成Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.趁热打铁StrikewhiletheironishotStriketheironwhileitishot.入乡随俗wheninRome,doasRomansdo.熟能生巧Practicemakesperfectpracticemakesamaster.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.危难之中帮助你的朋友才是真正的朋友。Itisnevertoooldtolearn.活到老学到老Theearlybirdgetstheworm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。III.常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：what’smore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.Practice请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.Itwasnotlong_______thepolicecame.3.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.whenbeforeAssoonas4.Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping.__________,wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest.5.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.___________,Isaved$80.6.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.___________,itmaymakeusfat.InadditionAsaresultWhat’sworse半期考作文假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:1.我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下取得了一些进步；2.但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法；3.今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用流利的英语和你写信；4.我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化；5.如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的家乡。Onepossibleversions:1.ItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadesomeprogressinEnglish.2.HoweverIstillfindithardtolearn,especiallysomedifficultidioms.3Nomatterhowharditis,Iwilltrymybesttomasterthisusefullanguagetocommunicatewithyou.4.NotlongagoIreturnedtomyhometownandfoundgreatchangeshadtakenplacethere.Manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.5.Myhometownisgettingmodernandmoreandmorebeautiful.IhopeifyouhaveachancetocometoChinaandI’llshowyouaroundmyhometownwhenyouareonleave.progressitwell∧widenedroadsMyhometownisbecomingmoreandmoreare词汇有错误;卷面有涂改;得20分.