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Zhonghua----AWomanScientistDr.ZhongHua,aged52,isnowworkingatastreetplantasaseniorwomanengineerinShanghaisinceshegraduatedfromBeijingSteelandIronInstitutein1964,shestucktoherstudyandresearchwork.Asaresult,shegotrichscientificfruits.Laterin1982,shewassenttoauniversityinGermanytogoonwithherstudies.Throughhardwork,shegotexcellentresultsandreceivedadoctor’sdegreeforphysics.Soonaftershebecamefamous,aGermansteelcompanytriedtoinvitehertoworkthereandpromisedtogiveherhighpay.ButDr.Zhongdidn’taccepttheinvitation.Shemadeuphermindtoworkforhermotherland.Therefore,shereturnedtoChinain1987.Nowshehasmadegreatcontributionstohercountry.Howtoimproveyourwriting城西中学英语组刘平时间分值词数题材内容NMET2000记叙文100左右看图目击交通事故，警察局里写报告NMET2001说明文100左右根据表格提供的信息写减负回信NMET2002说明文100左右根据表格提供的信息写回信介绍讨论情况NMET2003应用文100左右看图写回信说明找房情况NMET2004记叙文80-120看图记述与邻居交涉过程2004江苏卷说明文100左右根据表格内容介绍家乡江城2005江苏卷说明文100左右根据所给材料谈谈建设和谐社会主要特点记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明能力要求书面表达六步法抄改连扩抓审书面表达书面表达六步法幻灯片23怎样使用恰当的连接词逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序first,second,then,finally/atlast,soonimmediately,suddenly空间顺序here,there,ononeside…ontheotherside,infrontof,atthebackof,nextto对称顺序foronething,fortheotherthing,ononehand,ontheotherhand转折顺序but,however,while,though,otherwise因果顺序because,since,as,thanksto,asaresult(of)条件顺序aslongas,solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless让步顺序though,as,evenif/though,whether,who(what,when,where)ever递进顺序what’smore,besides,tomakethematterworse,what’sworse过渡性插入语Ithink,I’mafraid,youknow,AsweallknowMay25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday.Thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly.Shedidn’tadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop.ShesaidthatImadeitdirty.Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest.Iquarreledwithher.Themanagerturnedup.Heaskedwhatwasthematter.Heknewallaboutthis,heapologizedtomeandcriticized(批评)thesalesgirl.Theychangedanothercoatforme.Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily.May25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday.___________Thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly.______________Shedidn’tadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop.__________ShesaidthatImadeitdirty.______________Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest.___________________Iquarreledwithher.___________________Themanagerturnedup.Heaskedwhatwasthematter.___________________________Heknewallaboutthis,heapologizedtomeandcriticized(批评)thesalesgirl.Theychangedanothercoatforme.Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily.HoweverAtthebeginningLaterInawordIgotsoangrythatAfterthat/Assoonas/ThemomentJustatthatmoment1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.HowtoenrichyourwritingWeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.5.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）9．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.书面表达：Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayherethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.结论审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誉写背诵精彩范文书面表达六步法一、审题确定基本要素:5W1H何时何地何人为何如何做了何事书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为Whathappened?书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Whodidwhat?书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间空间细节连贯呼应书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面不工整扣5分2002年最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的组题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况。注意：1、信的开头以为你写好。2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：门票–—entrancefeeDearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.60%的同学认为：40%的同学认为：1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木DearEditor,I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe'vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancef